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Reviews for Strange Allies

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  • From ANON - Bi on July 09, 2005
    PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sandra V on July 08, 2005
    @ Jasta Elf:

    Hon, constructive criticism like yours is NEVER EVER a flame! :) I hate it when every review that is not a praise per se is considered a "flame" and I am just glad to know that our "story mom" won't think that way and take it as the constructive and intelligent thinking that it is. So Jasta, you really shouldn't worry and not be afraid to voice your opinion, dear. Because this is not about flaming somebody, it is about HAVING a voice and an opinion which can only be a good thing, right? So don't worry, that was a good and intelligent post. :) *hugs resisting Jasta Elf*

    There, my two cents, lol.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 08, 2005
    Now Haldir is nuts. He says she can't leave him; it's him that has to leave. Stranger and stranger. More please.
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  • From ANON - JastaElf on July 08, 2005
    God, it really is such a beautiful tale... but over and over one thing keeps knelling in my mind.

    Legolas loves her SO much... and at first it seemed she understood that duty for both of them came before anything else. Now all either she or Haldir seem to do is betray him right and left, over and over, while he is at the post of danger. Like the soldier who goes abroad to war leaving his beloved home alone, Annowe has betrayed him--with his former lover for heaven's sake!--and she had lots of guilt over that in earlier chapters! Now, it seems like "Oh well, Legolas is young and stupid and brave and noble and clueless, and we're here...." :-(

    I feel SO badly for Legolas... have either of them considered what this is going to do to him? He'll come home, having seen all sorts of horrors and lived through it nobly... then because he's young and an inexperienced lay he will find he has NO ONE??? Why does Haldir despise him so? Was he just a notch on the Warden's belt after all? Poor Legolas.... :-( When his heart breaks, will it be enough for his supposed friends and loved ones that Annowe loves him with her head but nothing else?

    NOT a flame... I think you write beautifully, you do dialogue superbly, and you have an eye for the small details that make a story just wonderful. This story IS wonderful. But I am SO upset for poor Legolas! :-)

    Looking forward to the rest of the tale....
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  • From ANON - Dragoneyez on July 08, 2005
    Very good story, and it has had be captivated throughout its entire lenght. This strange dance around each other with Haldir and Annowe as they try to figure out their places is most intruging - although I must admit I DO feel a tad sorry for Legolas, going off to save the world, and then returning to find his nymph has run off with the one creature she had made clear she hated more than anything else...

    Do I smell more angst coming up? *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Bee on July 07, 2005
    PLEASE WRITE MORE IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD. IT IS 1 OF THE BEST STORIES I HAV READ
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  • From ANON - aragorndreamer on July 04, 2005
    Oh My! Why can't these two just admitt their feelings to each other? I know there will be some great smutt coming, and I can hardly wait.
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  • From ANON - Annariel on July 02, 2005
    Great, I knew it. At last Haldir and Annowen together. ;) Poor Legolas, i feel sorry for him. That he don't stay alone.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 02, 2005
    AHA!! Now, he has to get permission to take her to Valinor. He cannot leave her; she cannot leave him. What does Galadriel have in mind? More please.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 01, 2005
    Does Annowe honestly not know what it means to be bonded to an elf? How could she think the glowing was coming from her feelings for Legolas? She is definitely being silly now. His Hawtness has done a complete number on her. Waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - aragorndreamer on June 27, 2005
    Oh My, this is getting good! I can hardly wait to read whay Tom's plans are. These two need to figure out their feelings and let each other know.
    Thanks for your speedy updates
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  • From ANON - Phairesse on June 27, 2005
    Poor babies...when are they going to get it right?

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  • From ANON - aragorndreamer on June 23, 2005
    I don't know about the rest of you, but, I feel sorry for Halidar. I can't wait to read how Tom get's her to tell of her feelings. I also want to know about the light in the water. Im wondering if it has anything to do with her feelings. I also hope she gets over Legolas. If Legalas truely loved her, how could he leave her with Halidar in the first place.
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  • From ANON - Annariel on June 23, 2005
    Ohh I'm sure that annowen'll choose Haldir. Poor Legolas. I hope that he is preparing his boats with gimli on way Valinor. Lol.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on June 22, 2005
    Now the March Warden is being wicked and cowardly. He wants her to beg before he asks her to come with him. How will Tom get her to confess? Will His Hawtiness get a surprise?
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