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Reviews for Blessed by the Valar

By : Jodiodi
  • From ANON - rashida7777 on August 23, 2014
    bravo...still crying
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  • From mthorsta on January 02, 2007
    I was so happy when I came across your story. Finally, a complex story that takes me more than 15 minutes to read. I absolutely loved it! I liked the fact that you didn't have Legolas and Alex get together too soon; all the more sweeter when they finally did get together. I was so excited for them. Great job! I look forward to more stories from you.
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  • From ANON - Nick on May 06, 2005
    Oh My God This Story was so awsome!!!! By The Time i got to the End I started to cry. I'm not normally a Emotional person but i really loved your story!! I Look forward to reading more of them! :)
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  • From ANON - Vi Janaway on March 27, 2005
    This was so very very very well-done...Thoughtful, plauxible, emotional...totally believabe.....The end had me in tears...both kinds.
    VERY good end. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Lucifer on March 18, 2005
    WOOT! excellent story once again!
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  • From ANON - yue on March 13, 2005
    I noticed that when u revised that u deleted the part of how she did end up in the M-E dimention. Like the part where she thinks that she passes through a rip in space and that she's part of a starfleet. it's the same as the one in the other category. Please correct that if that was unintended.
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  • From ANON - uppacrick on January 23, 2005
    Hi. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story very much. I especially appreciated your strong heroine. When I first started reading, I didn't know how you were going to pull off an ST/LotR crossover, but you did it masterfully. It's also very clean in terms of grammar and spelling. So many of the stories I try to read are riddled with errors, some beyond bearing. Thank you for sharing your gift and your story. The only constuctive criticisim I might offer is that i would like to know what Alex was wearing on her trip to Lorien, Rivendell and beyond. You might have described her outfit, and I just missed it. I couldn't imagine her wearing a gown, so I picutred her in tunic and leggings. I was also looking for a reason for her failings in archery and hair care -- something to do with her alien influences, perhaps. Regardless, they were charming asides that lent well toward building relationships between the characters; and I'm sure having Legolas fix your hair isn't the worst thing in the world! One other thing, toward the very end... I find it unlikely that Legolas was the only one in Ithillien to have to bury a mate, what with all the deaths among the Elves in the wars. I would think many would understand and even relive their own grief. Of course that would be tempered by the promise of meeting their loved one in Valinor and that is what you meant. All in all, it was a very good story and I hope many others enjoy it as I did.
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  • From ANON - shadinah on January 15, 2005
    I loved this story from the beginning to the end. Beautiful!!!
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  • From ANON - rangerboy on January 14, 2005
    WOW!!!! You had me in your grips. I couldn't stop reading. I like how you keep the story moving along. I have not read books by Tolkien all I know by him is through the ring movies. I must admit I am really impressed with how you used each characters and the development of their circumstances. This is the first fan fiction I have read all the way through. Some fan fiction stories did not really do anything for me and I found myself moving on and not completing it but yours was really well written and kept me wanting for more. I hope you are starting another story as a write this review. Hope to read from you soon. You should really make a living doing this kind of thing. I assume that writing is your passion. Hey why not do something you love and get paid for it. Just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Lucifer on January 14, 2005
    YYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! THAT WAS THE COOLEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ GOOD FUCKIN GODS THAT WAS BAD ASS!!!
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  • From ANON - LisaB on January 10, 2005
    It's going to take me a while to work through all of this, but what a great start! I like the way you worked the two universes together---not forced at all. I also like Alex's sense of humor. I'm only a "movie-verse" LOTR fan, but all your referneces ring true and Legolas's voice is perfect.
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  • From ANON - OcraEoj on January 04, 2005
    Wow ! ! ! What a great story. I'm sure you could ghost write for JRRT or the Trekies any time (just tame down the HOT parts). Again, W O W ! ! ! Have you talked to a publisher about this ? ? ?

    I am more of a SciFi person, but surrounded by LotR people, so I knew exactly what was going on without the annoying detail knowledge that could drive you nuts... The detail was incredible, including the cross-over stuff. Very very detailed, great action, continued excitement and adventure, with measured amounts of angst and suffering.

    I hope that you have a couple of more chapters to finish out the story line... You've got me hooked ! ! !
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