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Reviews for Fifteen Years

By : Ertia
  • From kathmco on February 02, 2005
    You would have been nicer if you let him get laid...but I guess we'll just have to settle for non-torture...:D Good chapter! Explains a lot...I liked the fact that you took the time to explain the difference between courtesan and concubine. Almost reminds me of the role of the traditional Geisha...although sex wasn't usually in the deal with them...

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tuxedo Elf on January 30, 2005
    *Nods* Yup, I really like it! *Packs bags* Oh Ruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuumil! *Grins*

    *Snickers*

    Poor Legolas! Thranduil certainly knows what he's doing, getting Legolas sexually frustrated to the point where he'll agree to anything! Though I'm sure Legolas won't be regretting his actions! :)
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  • From ANON - JennL on January 30, 2005
    First off I have to say that I love slash, especially lotr slash. But there things about this story that just bug me. I like the concept. Mostly I love the story, but well here goes. So Thranduil loves the male concubine, cool. In order to have him stay they need another male to go as a concubine, understandable. So Thranduil and the head concubine lady plot and plan to basically trick and torture Legolas into going to Lothloren. Now what bugs me is this, why plot and plan and tease and torture, Legolas obviously love his father and wants him to be happy and by his behavior wouldn't be adverse to slutting aroung the golden woods for 15 years. So why not just exlpain the situation and ask him to go? Rather than basically mind fuck and torture him into going. See I realize that we the reader are supposed to like the head concubine but basically her and Thranduil really just piss me off.

    Also you haven't really explained if one can stop being a concubine or not. Is Thranduil wanting his son to pretty much go into a voluntary slavery (which won't be very voluntary if it's the only way he'll be allowed to have sex). And since this is a voluntary thing can't Thranduil's lover just stop being a concubine and just be Thranduil's lover. If not right now then as soon as the exchange (since we know he won't be going) takes place. If he can't then how can Legolas. You've explained that the exchange is really important but not why. Why can't Thranduil just explain that they've fallen in love and expect the other elves to understand.

    Another little thing, if Legolas goes (which we all know that he will) and is known to Lothlorien as a concubine how is he every supposed to be respected there in the future as the prince he rightfully is? One of your characters said that he could go there as a concubine since they didn't know him as a prince but then wouldn't he always be just a concubine to them in thier minds even after they knew he was royalty?

    This is nothing against your writing, the story is wonderfully readable and delightfully free of mistakes. I actually am intrigued and will keep reading it but these things are just pissing me off a little. Not at you the author but at certain characters and I just really want to understand better from your point of view as you're writing. See it's a good story because it makes me think. Bad stories don't do that or at least in bad stories I don't actually care about the answers.

    Please respond.
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on January 30, 2005
    Hahaha!!! Thwarted at every turn! I'd almost feel sorry for the poor bloke, if it wasn't so humorous! (grin) Another wonderful chapter! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Emmess on January 29, 2005
    Oh...oh...poor, poor Legolas...and I thought he had it bad in the last chapter...he may literally explode all over the Cavern if he doesn't get laid soon...

    Great chapter...much too short, dear, but great nonetheless!
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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on January 26, 2005

    **giggle** Poor Legolas! He'll have to go to Lorien to keep from withering away... **LOL**

    Nicely done!

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - Tuxedo Elf on January 26, 2005

    You know, I hadn't been reading this because it said het, but then I noticed it was slash as well and decided to give it a look. I'm glad I did - it's great! Thranduil is *so* funny, I'm sure Legolas will be packing his bags for Lorien in no time! Hmmm... Lorien...Galadhrim... can I go too?!

    Ignore the fool who flamed you, clearly they have nothing better to do. This is exactly where it should be. :)

    Tux

    PS: Thanks for reviewing Silent Song! *Hugs*
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  • From ANON - Nikkiling on January 25, 2005
    Oooh, so cruel! I wonder how long he'll last... (snicker)
    Fun chapter; can't wait 'til the next!

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  • From ANON - Algara on January 25, 2005
    elves dont say damn
    why is this in LOTR book fan fic category? it has nothing to do with Tolkien.
    this should be in ORIGINAL fiction as all you have done is used Tolkien character names and made up a bunch of stupid nonsense about them that has nothing to do with Middle-earth, elves, or LOTR
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  • From kathmco on January 25, 2005
    Het's fine...slash is fine...some odd combination of the two is fine...heh. Great chapter...poor Legolas! No sex? How ever will the poor darling survive? Methinks poor Legolas is going to become very well acquainted with Mary Palm and her five sisters...snort!

    Keep 'em cumming...er, coming!


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  • From ANON - Minuial Nuwing on January 19, 2005
    **grin** OOOOooo, Legolas as a courtesan. This should be good! Anxiously awaiting more!

    **hugs**
    Min ;)
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  • From ANON - TJ on January 18, 2005
    This seems like it's going to be fun.
    What an interesting idea!
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on January 18, 2005
    Hehehe! Very good! It doesn't seem he would be too put off from being endlessly shagged, (grin) but then again...
    Eagerly waiting the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Emmess on January 18, 2005
    Whoot to me...I figured it out! hee, hee...great chapter...I absolutely am loving this story...update soon!
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on January 14, 2005
    Interesting. Promising. Yum! I know which elf my vote's going for! heheheh. Oh prince?
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