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Reviews for Fifteen Years

By : Ertia
  • From MorierBlackleaf on May 06, 2005
    No, it wasn't too much. It came suddenly for me, since it was the most intense sexual encounter yet, but not in a bad-sudden way. No, what made me worry about it was that you said somewhere in the chapter that Legolas didn't quite trust the good elf Santgalas. I just thought that might end badly, but it didn't. At any rate, the new chapter of SP is done, waiting to be uploaded, but my laptop was broken, and I couldn't get it up just yet. I should be putting it up today.

    Ok, and now for this chapter -- ahhhhh, now we have a murder mystery on our hands! The murder of the trees, I mean. And I am still wondering what crawled up Haldir's ass and died. *kicks Haldir* Play nice! :-)
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 06, 2005
    How long will it take the MarchWarden to soften his attitude toward Sarnlass? After the work at the fire he should be able to see that our Prince is not a lowlife and has no political or power seeking plots against the Wardens.
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  • From ANON - Soda on May 06, 2005
    Ah! These two latest chapters were wonderful!! Sorry I haven't been reviewing these last weeks, but I've been to a rehablitation with Haldir that you sent... So, I'm now returning him in perfect shape. Feel free to check for damage, and my deepest thanks for the borrow. ;))))
    So...where will things go from here?? I can't wait for the next chapter!! You're still the best Ertia!

    Love/ Sda
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  • From DurOltha on May 05, 2005

    Very cool! You realy could feel the stress of the situation...Oh and poor Legolas, running around half nacked
    during a fire with...ouch...welts and such on his back...ouch...I loved this chapter...and poor Galadriel, loosin her friend :(

    *I have had to pull some emergency 15 hour shifts at work...4 days in a row, so I am slightly fried...I will have more of Ayagoon up soon, more then likely tomorow...Im gettin squirly...so many days without updateing my stuff *twitches*...and you know me my friend, I be just a tad obsested with my updates and dont normaly go this long...sucks*

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From ANON - Gabby on April 30, 2005
    Excellent chapter! Your best so far. Yes i too was pleasantly surprised by the nice little games Celeborn and Santgalas(sp?) played with Legolas. And i for one am happy to see your story is turning out more slashy than het. ; ) Though i don't expect it to always stay that way.

    Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Tuxedo Elf on April 29, 2005
    Mmm that was well worth the wait! I like the new elf, though I hadn't expected him to have those tastes! ;)

    The switch from smut to action was wonderful, really made me look twice! I really liked how sad the elves were at having to destroy the tree. Reminds you of their connection with the earth.

    Hopefully though, it's the start of a better relationship beetween Legolas and Haldir!
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  • From ANON - Nikkiling on April 29, 2005
    Oh, that was... breathtaking! I think I may have to reread that chapter... Probably more than once.... Maybe print it off so I can have a copy beside my bed... That was incredibly HOT! Best scene yet! Hmmm....Perhaps I'll have to reread the whole story to compare...that could be fun...*grin*
    Wow!!!
    *deep breath*
    Anyways...
    The fire was an interesting twist too; for a moment I thought Legolas might inadvertantly reveal himself. And Haldir...that was a nice little moment despite the tragedy of the death of the tree. It will be interesting to see what evolves from that.
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on April 29, 2005
    Hmmm. I was a little worried there for a moment – about the sexual encounter, I mean. I am truly worried about the forest now, though. Can’t imagine much that would be more painful for a woodelf than seeing the forest burning.
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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on April 29, 2005
    You did it again...you do such a wonderful job a discribeing
    events...I can actualy picture them...and Ooo...a forest fire...ya that
    would defonatly me a major fear to elves!
    Another excellent chapter my friend!

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From ANON - kîan on April 29, 2005
    Marvelous chapter!! I love this chapter, it shows so many sides of Legolas, and the ending was great! Can't wait for the next update, good luck!
    Kîan
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  • From ANON - Gabby on April 23, 2005
    Please more!! Soon! *insert smilie cracking whip icon*

    Question.... is it possible that Celeborn might have other lovers besides just his wife and the courtesans? Like maybe.... a marchwarden or two....? And if such time should arrise, would perhaps Celeborn wish to add to the occasion by having a courtesan hanging around for scenery purposes? Holding towels? Handing over lube? Suggesting positions? Wiping away the afters?

    And i DO think it is cruel for Celeborn to put Sarnglas right under the nose of Haldir there, with that bare chest and cute little ass. I for one don't necessarily see Haldir as hating courtesans- just being bitter about that one sneaky little guy who tried to usurp his position. Maybe he is too bitter for sex right now, but when he does decide to whip it out and take his courtesan I am sure whats-his-name is in for quite a ride. *poor fellow*

    Oh... and hurry.
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  • From ANON - Othello on April 22, 2005
    YAY! HOT ELF SEXXX! *achem*, i _loved_ the past few chapters! when are you going to update? i cant hold on much longer! and when do we find out about hardir's hatred of courteseans??? UPDATE!!!!!!!!!-- Othello
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  • From ANON - * i n c o h e r e n t * on April 16, 2005
    ending there? poo.... more please!
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  • From ANON - Emmess on April 15, 2005
    What do you mean "BROKE" Haldir? No, no, no...a broken Haldir is an unhappy Haldir...and we certainly can't have that. Am faxing you a "Haldir Repair Kit" immediately. It isn't difficult to use, but does include the use of a large bottle of chocolate syrup and a hand-pump.

    Great chapter...but need I start banging my head again in order to receive more hot Elf sex? Sigh...people are going to start wondering at the bumps on my forehead...

    Kath
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  • From ANON - Soda on April 15, 2005
    You better keep Celeborn busy for a while.. Haldir is looking kind of strange.. Oh I fixed him alright, but he's not very happy about his.."new looks".. ;))

    Hmmm. I can't wait to see where the next chapter will take us!
    Does Haldir really dislike Legolas so much? Or is it just because he can't get him out of his mind eh eh?

    And I think we all just should take a deep bow and thank our dear Ertia for making the spring just a little bit more brighter!
    THANK YOU! ;))))))

    Cheers/ Soda
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