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Reviews for Fifteen Years

By : Ertia
  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 15, 2005
    Half-naked Legolas on a horse? I cannot tell you what a tease that is. I will be more than happy to ride behind him and "watch his back" until hell freezes over. At that point, I too may ask for some recompense from Sarnlass. Keep writing, you know we love it and worship at the feet of you and your muse.
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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on April 14, 2005
    You just keep them coming dont you, another excelent chapter!

    I must say...you truly know how to describe the way someone looks!
    I could actualy picture Legolas walking with the strap across his
    chest and...hair swaying across his back and...*Thud*

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From MorierBlackleaf on April 14, 2005
    Hard ass! :-) My pouts never work. Stupid Haldir, dampening Legolas' good spirits. Nice imagery.
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  • From ANON - Emma on April 14, 2005
    Hey! I LOBE THIS STORY!!! I am very excited with where it is going. It's wonderfully sexual without being all about the sex...there is a story there.

    Keep up the wonderful work! Also, will u add me to your update list or tell me how to do it?

    Thanks!
    -Emma

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  • From ANON - Tuxedo Elf on April 12, 2005

    Ooooh! *Mops up drool* Very very nice indeed! Heh heh, are you *sure* Legolas really wants Haldir?! He seems to be quite happy where he is!

    Oh and LMAO I am *so* suggesting that for the next novelty shoot! I can pictutre it now...
    *giggles*

    Anyway, lovely chapter, keep it up! I'll err, go do some writing of my own... *scurries off*
    Tux

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  • From ANON - kîan on April 11, 2005
    hey! I adore this story. Sometimes too many hot sex scenes can become tedious (although it is hard to understand). However you have successfully avoided this, whether it is because of the interesting characterizations or the balance between plot and smut..elf smut is the best..you definetly have an interesting story on your hands. I guess we will eventually find out what Verdean did, and how Haldir is connected, but I have a few questions. Will someone find out Sarnlass true name before the end of his term, and is someone (maybe Rumil) going to fall for him without ending up with Legolas at the end? Oh, and roughly how many chapters are left (if you know)?
    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
    Kîan
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  • From ANON - Emmess on April 10, 2005
    Thank Eru...I don't think my head could've taken much more punishment! Hot Elf Sex! Whoo-hoo!

    I really liked the way you pointed out Legolas' feelings of "luxuriating" in Celeborn's body...

    ...excuse me while I dump this pot of cold water over my head.

    ...that's better...

    Excellent job as always, Ertia! Tell me, will our fabulous March Warden being doing a little guard duty with Sarnlass?

    Kath
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  • From ANON - Soda on April 08, 2005
    Now this...THIS is my kind of chapter! *purrs*
    I loooved it!!
    And as I have been saying for some time now.. You ARE a tease... I am so curoius were you will take this Legolas and Haldir thing.

    About Haldir.. I have been poking him with a stick forever now... But he still doesn't move... *hmmm* Did I hug him to hard...? I have a very faint memory of him gasping and that his back made this strange creaking noise... I wonder... *eyes pops out*
    Argh I have to go!!!
    Ican'twaittooseethenextchapteryouknowIadoreyourwritingBYE!!!! ;)))
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on April 08, 2005
    I think I need a cold dip in the Antarctic. Chafing is no good, we don't want Leggy galded by riding a horse naked! Although that would open up some interesting ways to initiate more sex with Celeborn. This side tale of Haldir has got me intrigued, and you aren't playing fair by not giving us more about it! *pouts* Ok, well, more please!
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  • From ANON - Naira on April 08, 2005
    Nice update...very nice indeed...I'm speechless at the moment I'm afraid...so i'll leave it at this :p
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 08, 2005
    OK, so you fulfilled some of our smut requirements for the week. You are still, however, a dreadful tease with the clues and the plot. BTW, I had not realized you were running an escort service for beautiful elves. Since you are, I would like some time with Haldir and Galadriel. Think you can give them up for a bit? I probably won't try to keep them (the SO won't like it) but I promise to enjoy them.
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on April 08, 2005
    Lovely, lovely, lovely! And that momentary vison of Legolas riding nude through the forest...*shiver*...certainly it might end up uncomfortable, but I must admit, What a Beautiful Sight! But, I suppose leggings on Leggy will have to suffice. *grin*
    Can't wait 'til the next chapter, and I am insanely curious as to what happened to Haldir! I hope you won't keep us waiting too much longer!
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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on April 07, 2005

    *Thud*

    Ok, now that I am back in my chair....

    Great chapter! I loved the...let me see if I can walk yet part! *Smirks*

    Naughty...naughty Ertia!

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From ANON - Emmess on April 05, 2005
    *bangs head repeatedly against keyboard* Need hot elf-sex...need hot elf-sex...

    Great job, as usual, Ertia! I'd kinda of like for Legolas to show Rumil a thing or two...but not necessarily on the archery field...snicker.

    Oh, feeling a little sorry for Haldir...poor guy must have had a rough time of it...no wonder he's cranky. Will Legolas sooth his ruffled feathers? Please?

    Update soon!

    Kath
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on April 01, 2005
    Ah, I suppose you are right, and Legolas can't be best at everything just yet. He is the best looking courtesan, though, I think. :-)

    That wasn't dull. I don't know much about courtesans, except what I've read in Victorian novels, but that sour string was a great diversion for rumourmongering. I suppose Galadriel would pick up on everything though, right? Would make it entirely hard to get by with anything in Lorien. I suddenly feel very sorry for Celebrian growing up with a mother like Galadriel.

    But anyway! The promise of Glorfindel sex! Woot! :-)
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