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Reviews for Fifteen Years

By : Ertia
  • From ANON - Soda on April 01, 2005
    I thank you my dear for that lovely present from you. I'm afraid that our dear marchwarden can't stand upstraight right now since his back is kind of...twisted.
    I appreciate the air holes you did in the box, he did look a little blue when I unfolded him. Lucky the elves are so patient eh? ;))))

    Even though it was no sex *pulls my hair, screams, kicks and bite at the computer screen* your chapter is still great. As usual.
    Hmm, I was kind of suprised that Glorfindel didn't use our dear little princeling... Or is it coming up?? Or is Celeborn keeping him just to himself eh eh eh?

    And I can't wait to see where you're going with the Haldir & Legolas thing...
    If there is a 'thing' going on?? Legolas just seems so intrested of hearing about him.

    Ah Ertia. You make me proud as always. And since you sent me Haldir I will ignore the fact that you haven't updated "A More Serious Elf" yet. I understand that it can be kind of too much with two fics at once huh?

    Take care!!
    Cherrio/ Soda
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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on April 01, 2005
    Oh PLEASE let Celeborn let Glorfindel have legolas for a few hours...PLEASE!!!! :)~
    Excelent chapter...and no need to apoloyse for no sex in the chap, when it is a great story like this, you dont need sex in every chapter (tho it is nice) Your story is intrecate and needs the 'info' chapters, and I enjoy them just as much!
    More? more please? pretty please? With naked elves on top?

    ~DarkDreamer

    P.S. I snuck into Glorfindels chamber and tryed to find your Jelly Bellys...Sorry, he hid them well :(

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  • From angstyelves on April 01, 2005
    Oooh, lovely! Your Rúmil gets my full approval! ;) *Grins* So glad Legolas wasn't the better archer! (lol have you ever shot at hanging targets?! Seriously NOT easy!)

    I'm really wondering what the full story is behind Haldir's bitterness... but I'm sure we'll find out eventually! In the meantime I'm sure Legolas will have plenty to keep him busy! :D

    I'll be running off now with these spare Galadhrim before Celeborn notices...

    Tux

    PS: Thanks for the review of Away with You - you probably never saw it before because it's been 10 months since the last update!
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  • From ANON - Naira on April 01, 2005
    Whew...Just spend a few says reading what you have posted so far, I love it. Please update again soon
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 01, 2005
    Yikes!! More clues to the mystery. Has Haldir been wronged and will it take the beautiful Sarnlass to heal him? Do we get a lot of 3-ways? Sorry, I'm a female and hate to be totally left out of good smut. BTW, regardless of how many or who with, I'm totally loving this tale.
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  • From ANON - Gabby on March 30, 2005
    Excellent story! Nice plot device with the courtesanship. I just hope Sarnglas is ordered to serve Glorfindel on his last night in Lorien. Its kind of painful to having Glorfindel under our noses all this time with only a handjob to show for it. ; )

    Since this is my first review I will harp back to earlier chapters and comment on them as well. Hard to believe Thranduil would let his own son- a royal prince- accept a servile position. But then again... just who was Toress anyway? And what is the deal with Feanal, he seems a little damaged somehow, like not all of his experiences have as a courtestan have been so positive. One wonders why Galadriel mentioned she'd wished Haldir had chosen Legolas instead- is it because she realizes he needs a little extra care that Haldir in his obvious put-out mood is not up to giving?

    Why was Legolas ordered not to see his lover anymore in Mirkwood- is it only because of his lack of discretion?

    Questions, question! Hopefully there will be more explaination of how the courtesanship works- i suppose its different with each house, since Legolas was clearly told he is to serve Celeborn and Galadriel only unless commanded otherwise. Where back in Mirkwood the courtesans seemed to be available to quite a larger group of people. And having sex with a courtesan seems to be an acceptable exception for married people. It will be interesting to see how all this unfolds.

    Hurry please!
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  • From ANON - Tuxedo Elf on March 27, 2005
    You probably guessed, but I liked this chapter *a lot*! I adore your Rúmil, it's great that he beat Haldir... now I just hope he doesn't lose to Legolas! *Would be highly irritated if he did!* ;D Hope he can help Haldir be nicer to Feanal.

    You know, you missed me out a couple of chapters ago - do I get elves too?! LOL actually, I just want Rúmil... *grins*
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 25, 2005
    Good to get a little more Haldir along with some hints that our author may cough up some more info about what went wrong with the courtesans here before Legolas arrived. Loving this courtesan plot device. Sounds like good training for life.
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  • From ANON - Soda on March 25, 2005
    Ey! A great chapter as always Ertia. I can't stop being amazed at how well you capture our dear elves in your writing. I really can see everything infront of me!

    Hmmm... Well, I do not think the elves would be so impressed by little ol' me..with a name from sugar-sparkling-water? No no no. I think we'll have to throw that thought to the wolfs eh?
    Although... If you'd throw in Glorfindel in the story with me... Nah. Forget it. ;-)

    I'm very curious about how Legolas & Haldir will work out in the future.
    And poor Feanal...! Being "owned" by such a gorgeous elf and not being ravished by him!! *awwww* It's hurts to think about it...

    Until the next chapter and review. Take care!

    love/ Soda


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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on March 25, 2005
    Another great chapter...I loved the way you discribed the fight.
    Rumils the best archer in Lothlorien ay? Uh oh...sooo...is Legolas
    going to be true to his craft and beat the leggings off of him? :)~

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From MorierBlackleaf on March 25, 2005
    Hugs, chocolate, AND a naked Elladan? Well, you're certainly forgiven... although I wasn't angry anyway, I was just teasing. :-) I promise I won't kick you anymore. And if you want, I'll send a sober Thranduil to make you feel better. He's a much nicer elf when he's not drunk.

    I'm very worried about Feanal! And I hope Legolas beats Rumil at archery. It's all about rhythm and aim, it is. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on March 25, 2005
    Hmmm... I must admit that I am *most* intrigued by the Haldir/Feanal part of your captivating story. Loved the chapter!. Have a wonderful Easter, sweety!! :)
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  • From ANON - Othello on March 25, 2005
    SQUEE! i love this story! *pouts* aww...no sex this week??? damn plot development.... anyway, i have only found this story yesterday, and already im addicted! UPDATE SOOOON! ^_^ -- Othello
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  • From on March 22, 2005
    Oh and I also want to hear more about Haldir and his little courtesan, both of them are quite interesting.
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  • From on March 22, 2005
    This is by far one of the best LoTR stories I have come across on this website, and believe me, I've been reading them for quite some time!! I sincerely hope you mean to finish it, because I can hardly stand the waiting now and I've only just finished what you have so far. I hope that Legolas does something bad and gets punished (Yes, I'm mean like that) Keep up the excellent work!
    XOXO, Blue
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