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Reviews for Bitten

By : Jeffree
  • From Jeffree on January 30, 2005
    Hey thanks for the review! Glad you find the fic interesting so far. The timeline/setting is supposed to be present-day Earth (not Middle Earth mind you), and I've tried to update the characters the best I could while keeping at least some of their original personalities (some have been changed on purpose though). I do have the basic plot in mind, & it's actually going to deal with rather dark themes (hopefuly I'll be able to pull it off!). The first 2 - 4 chapters will be pretty much introductory, and I am currently working on the next chapter. Thanks a lot for the advice too :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2005
    Yep... once again you show that you can write. I'm not too sure what timeline they are in as their names are obviously based on Tolkein's world but the very place where they exist in seem to be modern. That's a little odd, but I'm looking forward to where you might want to take this story. A word of advice, cut back on the excessive use ot punctuations such as ??? or !?! so as to promote a fluent reading of your story. Also, usage of modern swear words with Tolkein's characters is a little odd, so you might want to think about that a little.

    Your writing is on the whole rather fluent, but at times rather child-like especially during the conversations held between the characters. Still, a story is a story and yours is interesting. I hope to read more of this series soon.

    Cheers.
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