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Reviews for The Half Breeds

By : Avaril
  • From ANON - MarzBar on October 24, 2005
    I just read this whole story again. I hope our dark half-breed will be able to tell Celeborn and Haldir about the planned treachery and violence of his former employer. Will Thruanduil sober up enough to get the same message out to Lothlorien? Waiting for more story.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 28, 2005
    GADZ! What a dark story. I keep hoping that our Western elves will come up with a little joy before they are forced to sail. Still reading this and hoping for more.
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on March 03, 2005
    After reading chapter eight of this incredible story, all I can say is... PLEASE update soon!!!. Asa writer, I have always delved deeply in my character's minds and hearts, for I find the most interest to be in what dwells within.. *You*, have proven masterful at showing the *full* scope of your characters and it makes for a gripping, taut story! Thank you...
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on March 02, 2005
    I have just *devoured* the first two chapters of this story and find that I must pause, so I can tell you that you are an incredible writer!. I could go on...and on...and on... But I simply *have* to get back to reading your tale!! :)
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  • From ANON - moxie on March 02, 2005
    Hmmm...i actually like this story but I'm a little confused. There seems to be a lot going on here; a four different sub-stories. Can you clarify in your next update? Will they ever tie in with one another?
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  • From ANON - moxie on January 29, 2005
    Hmmm...IU'm very interested in these new elfs. Very interested indeed.
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  • From ANON - moxie on January 26, 2005
    wow. only two chapters and I'm aleady addicted. more please! more please!

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  • From kathmco on January 26, 2005
    Great beginning! I really liked your characterization of Legolas - strong enough to stand up to his father, and yet still kind of sweet and innocent...but, really...no tutus?
    snort.
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