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By : Liliana
  • From ANON - Kalima on September 02, 2005
    I enjoyed the intensity of the emotions you described, and it reminded me of my own youthful longings. But! Am I supposed to know who the blond, cobalt-eyed lover is? Are you trying to tell us it's Glorfindel? I need more obvious over-the-head type bludgeoning, if so.


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  • From DurOltha on July 17, 2005
    I loved this! I could actualy feel the pain and you discribed everything beautifuly! Wonderful!

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From ANON - erobey on February 24, 2005
    a beautiful ending! thanks for this wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - erobey on February 24, 2005
    oh it is just so heartbreaking! but i am glad he has such a compassionate friend.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on February 17, 2005
    Oooh! What a surprise ending. And Glori never even knew. Or perhaps he did, and simply did what was best.
    Still, I think it would be interesting for the story to come out now, 400 years later and hear what Glorfindel's reaction would be.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on February 14, 2005
    Well, Laurialas handled that very well. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - erobey on February 08, 2005
    oh that second chapter was so heartbreaking! if i did not know i all works out eventually i would just be sick. great chapter!
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  • From ANON - erobey on February 08, 2005
    a great beginning! this looks like it will be a wonderful tale and i cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on February 08, 2005
    Oh, how sad. :(
    Wonderful chapter. I think I like it better than the first one, even if it has a sadder ending. I hope you're going to make it up to poor thing.
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