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Reviews for Awakenings

By : fishyz
  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2005
    okok i love it - you cannot write it fast enough
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on February 26, 2005
    Ok, I finally finished the story, or at least what you've written so far. Wonderful! The use of Glorfindel's death to advance the plot is interesting -- but poor Erestor! I felt so bad for him, losing Glorfindel again! The death scene was filled with sorrow. And I really liked the account of how Glorfindel convinced Namo to release him! The twins were so cute, especially the part where they convinced Glorfy to show his muscles. :-)

    I really love your story... I hope you write lots more!

    Morier
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on February 25, 2005
    You are playing the plot out very well. :-) The misunderstanding between Erestor and Glorfindel is wonderful... for me to read, I mean, not for them, obviously. And that it happened on Yule! :-) Nice touch. I do hope they make up, though.

    Well, I've only finished chapter 10, but I must be off to bed!
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on February 25, 2005
    The interaction between Glorfindel and Erestor truly captures the innocence of the 'awakenings' of sexual interest! This is the first story I have read that deals with such a topic, and that deals with it so nicely. It's been awhile since I've read something so sweet but also so wonderfully smutty at the same time!

    I've only made it to the 4th chapter, so I'm sure I'll have more to say when I finish reading! Thanks for the great story.
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