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Reviews for Forbidden Falls

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - Soda on February 28, 2005
    Great story! I really like the way you described the trees and how they protected Legolas. I will follow the progress of this fic closely.. Regards/ Soda
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2005
    I loved Glorfindel's description of Erestor, very funny.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2005
    Another quick update! I was wondering what Legolas would do when he met Elrond. You did well that he didn't show instant acceptance even though Legolas' fear was heart-breaking.
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  • From ANON - Jane on February 27, 2005
    Aria; 1. A solo vocal piece with instrumental accompaniment, as in an opera. 2. An air; a melody.

    Area: 1. A roughly bounded part of the space on a surface; a region: a farming area; the New York area. 2. A surface, especially an open, unoccupied piece of ground: a landing area; a playing area. Etc....

    Hmmm. Ch 4 Eladan furrowed his brow “I do not remember hearing tales of trees moving so much in this aria” (Which literally means- I do not remember hearing tales of trees moving so much in this melody??).......
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2005
    Yeah! Glorfindel found Legolas.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2005
    "aria" should be "area"......

    I love the way that you handled the talking of the trees, nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2005
    I love the trees! And it's wonderful how they protect Legolas.
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  • From MorierBlackleaf on February 25, 2005
    Argh! Poor Legolas. I like the threats the healer made -- they made a nice means for the healer to obtain Legolas' compliance.

    Can I make a small suggestion, though? It would make the chapter easier to read if you broke up the dialogue so that only one person is speaking in each paragraph. It might make it easier to know who is saying what. :-) Other than that, I've no complaints! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2005
    Great story so far, very riveting. And thanks for the quick updates!
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on February 24, 2005
    Oh, how perfectly horrible! I love it! Poor Legolas... and by his healer too. I'm glad he's dead, but now I'm on the edge of my seat. Update soon! Please!

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  • From ANON - riverlady on February 24, 2005
    Chilling and powerful beginning. "Victim" takes on a deep meaning. Deception and abuse and failure of those who you should be able to count on to protect you --- to even see the problem --- is clearly drawn. I was so glad that the healer ended up with a dagger in his throat. Good for Legolas.
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