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Reviews for Forbidden Falls

By : DurOltha
  • From balrog on June 20, 2008
    This was a very loving story. I'm glad everyone got what they wanted. Even Haldir.
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  • From balrog on June 20, 2008
    I cannot believe it was Thranduil!!!!!!!!!!! This is just precious.
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  • From balrog on June 20, 2008
    I think I have fallen in love with Legolas. His Elder Tree talk is so adorable. This is a wonderful story. Now back to reading more.
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  • From balrog on June 19, 2008
    this was a warm heartfeld chapter. Nicely done.
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  • From balrog on June 19, 2008
    I had a hard time reading the first chapter. It broke my heart. But seeing what happened made me even cry harder. This is a wonderful story so far. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - animebishieluver on October 17, 2005
    hello, me again, still an insane fan of your work and I will continue to follow it! now that I have reviewed a few of your stories, I think I have a good basis to ground more... specific aspects of reviewing. don't be alarmed, I promise to be nice... for the most part... I love the way you write, I really do. every type of sexual play is included in your stories, and I respect and enjoy that fact. the fact that you use more than one couple also keep it interesting, as you have several dramas going on at once, and couples in every stage of relationships. your use of language and story-telling skills are expertly put to work. there are only three things you could improve on: first and formost, you spelling. I kid you not, I must have found at least two pages of spelling errors, and I write small. try a website like dictionary.com if you're not sure, or get a beta reader. if you can't find one, I'm more than willing to help. but I do comgratulate your lack of typos! second, you have a few grammar errors. you might use the wrong word, like except instead of accept, to for too, or there for there. also, you NEVER use apostrophes, so you have cant when it should be can't, or Elronds ring instead of Elrond's ring. also, you leave out a lot of commas. try adding a few more. you also have a very few tense problems like woke instead of awakened. lastly, you need to work on your flow a little bit. the fact that you cut from one couple to the next, or say 'the next day' or whatever makes it a bit choppy. try to eliminate that. overall, however, you did an excellent job with this, and I hope to read more of your excellent work. bye, feel free to email me, even if it's to bitch me out about my harsh review!
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  • From ANON - Ethilen on April 26, 2005
    I was on the edge of my seat waiting for your next chapter. I just love the legolas and erestor fictions. Legolas as strong and silent and Erestor as just this side of bad.
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  • From ANON - Frances Rolfe on April 26, 2005
    Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
    Frances
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on April 26, 2005
    But...that's the end? Uhm...no? Argh! I mean, I suppose all good things must end at some point, and you did tie off all the loose bits, but....well...*sniff*
    I guess I should just thank you for writing this wonderfully lovely story and for sharing it and tell you that you have to write another. Soon.
    Please? *...attempts her best begging puppy-dog look...*
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on April 25, 2005
    I have loved reading this from beginning to end. Between this and your other story, I am so hooked on your writing. It's so wonderful to see the interactions between the characters being done so well. I hope you plan on doing another story soon.

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  • From ANON - Ertia on April 25, 2005
    The End? The END!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!
    Just throw me in Thranduils bed and drizzle me with hot wax, why don't you? It would be better than finding that we're at The End!!
    *sigh*. I guess I'll just have to take my jelly bellies and go home, now, huh? Will there be a sequel? Or do you have something new and exciting in the works? I certainly hope so! :D
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 23, 2005
    Whew! Haldir and Thranduil having fun with toys and without me (drat). And the lovely Legolas overcoming his fears. Don't s'pose we could get a peek at Elrohir and one of his elleths?
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  • From ANON - Ertia on April 23, 2005
    :D YAY! Very nicely done indeed! I just adore your Elladan. He's so kind and wise and perfect. Legolas deserves him, I think.

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  • From ANON - Ertia on April 22, 2005
    Hmmm....borrowing Erestors *toys* hmmm? How very ... interesting. Hee hee... Poor Haldir. He's not likely to really know what he's getting into, is he?
    As for Legolas and Elladan - now I can't wait to see how this experiment pans out! Will they need Elrohir's rescue? *staying tuned for more*
    OH, Glorfindel, get over it! Nobody is going to torture and rape you just to see if it can be done! What? Is that a challenge? Hmmm...
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 21, 2005
    Thank you so much for the faithful updates. Erestor assisting Thranduil? Gotta love the pictures in my head.
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