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Reviews for Practice Makes Perfect: A Smutlet in Three Parts

By : diablerouge
  • From ANON - Chibi Hoshi on June 02, 2006
    And just WHERE is the rest of this story?? How could you just tease me like that?? More, woman! Now!! *gives sugar-filled cookies to the muses* Write more! more!! *raises mob, complete with brands and pitchforks* ^_^
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on June 15, 2005
    ok, where is the third part? you can't just leave us hanging! I always thought they would be good together since haldir is my favorite elf! just update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on May 11, 2005
    Hot!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have got to get to chapter 3!!! and soon! please update soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - snowy on March 31, 2005
    oh how clever, though I don't like it when he is mean and demeaning to the female kind. Do continue with the 3rd part and soon.
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  • From ANON - Anchovyeater on March 17, 2005
    Oh, those naughty, naughty elves and we just love it to no end! Lovely story and so well put. Very descriptive and extremely enjoyable. Great job and how we crave for more!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on March 16, 2005
    Grrr! Dominate Haldir! Yum yum. More please?
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 16, 2005
    Smutty, filthy and delightful! Haldir having fun!
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  • From ANON - snowy on March 15, 2005
    ok, you have piqued my interest. I love the stories with haldir in them and this should be a good one, just up date it soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anchovyeater on March 09, 2005
    Whooooooooo hoooooooooooo! Haldir finally gets some! OMG! She is such a tease too! I hope she will be gentle with him. Something tells me that he is going to surprise her. LOL!

    Love your smut by the way. Good elf smut is hard to find!


    Anchovyeater


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  • From ANON - MarzBar on March 04, 2005
    I can't believe this stopped already!! Where are the next two parts? Love the elves and was always a fan of Haldir.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on March 03, 2005
    Oh, lookie. A whole new way to torture Haldir! Sorry, Hal, when the Lady of the Golden Wood says "My place or yours?" the correct answer is, "What's wrong with right here?"
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