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Reviews for Anything For The One You Love

By : Zetta
  • From bonksie on May 24, 2008
    Oh Wow.
    Why is Karl being so mean. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on July 14, 2005
    ok,princess pirate, lets get this thing moving. please don't delay in updating this story, a little on the mushy side, but hey, its your story! and what, pray tell, do you have in mind for Karl?? maybe a good beating, or maybe some torture, or does he just need to get some!? any way, please continue.!!!!!
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  • From sivan325 on June 26, 2005
    It is a hilirious story, that I find myself waiting and waiting until you will update, and that is good, mellon-nin.

    Keep up the PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic, and pretty please UPDATE ASAP!

    Yours,

    Sivan Shemesh sivan325@walla.co.il
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  • From ANON - angel on June 26, 2005
    OMG! i had forgotten all about this story, i'm so glad you finally updated it. i really like it. karl is such an asshole, he needs to get his ass kicked. i'm glad viggo and orli are finally together, they make a cute couple. keep up the awesome writing! :)
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  • From ANON - Siri on April 26, 2005
    Good story. Would like to see it finished.
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  • From ANON - angel on April 18, 2005
    i like it! thank god orli is ok. write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Isaldaria on April 15, 2005
    Hey!
    That`s unfair! How can you stop at this damn cliffhanger...Please write a new chapter soon! I like your story!
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  • From ANON - snowy on April 06, 2005
    ok princess, lets get to number 5 of this story. Like how you did this story so far, a little corny, but hey, its better than all of the bad words and cruelty that some other stories have got in them. please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ruby on April 02, 2005
    Well written, good grasp of narrative for a first-timer, nice descriptive style. But the story has a problem... it's about real people, yet the actions described are not realistic.

    REAL adults don't push their co-workers into rivers, and if they do, they get fired or arrested. If Urban had done the pushing, and Bloom had been injured as a result, Urban definitely be arrested and probably do jail time.

    When REAL people are pushed into rivers (the river in the scene you describe is calm), they either stand on the riverbed or swim. They don't just let themselves be helplessly swept away.

    REAL leading actors get paid lots of money, they don't room together.

    REAL river rocks aren't sharp enough to cut flesh.

    REAL hospitals don't send people with nasty injuries home, until they're sure they're not going to get fevers or pass out.

    And so on.

    That's the problem with writing about real life, you can't get too dramatic. Too much drama isn't realistic, and isn't believable.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2005
    Yay!!! Bring update.
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  • From sivan325 on March 29, 2005
    Yes, angst. How have I missed angst? That much!

    More please, I love it.

    Please update ASAP, please... pretty please?

    While I'll be waiting, please keep up your PERFECT work that you are doing with your fic.

    Sivan
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  • From ANON - leila on March 27, 2005
    great... great...just great! please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Zoiry on March 26, 2005
    I really like it so far and this story line interests me as i like viggo/orli. please continue, i would love to read more. its great, spec for a first fic :)
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  • From ANON - Marius on March 26, 2005
    Ok, the story idea was really good. But... You need to improve your description. If I wouldn't have known the part of the movie when they head out from Lothlorien, I would not have been able to picture the scene in front of me.

    And current? What current? The scene was shot in a lake and not at the great river Anduin. (don't know the real name). If you write a real person story you need to consider that, too.

    Besides that, I like to read the next chapter. And don't think about this as a flame. Take it to improve your writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2005
    aaahhh orli write next chapter soon please
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