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Reviews for Through the Window

By : Finnmaccumhail
  • From ANON - yue on October 04, 2005
    Humm. what an unexpected turn. celeborn's gone bonkers!! he's deffinitely out of character in this fic and haldir's a bit dumb for not finding a really safe way for the girl's trip to rivendell. i mean she just got attacked and they have no idea who the hell really set the evil farie loose. galadriel's even out of character. definitely weird but i do like the main plot that your goin for. it really does get lost at some points especially when i get caught up in the spelling and grammer mistakes. well i'm sleepy and i got other stuff to do so i'll just stop my ranting here. i do look forward to the upcoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Linde on August 02, 2005
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Write more!!!
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  • From ANON - an on July 26, 2005
    okay cant believe that i cnat believe the fairy finally got her damn him lol well right soon later
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  • From ANON - jossy on July 23, 2005
    awesome awesome okay ?? is celeborn like over come by the fairy ????ttyl jossy
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  • From ANON - Josalyn on July 15, 2005
    haha man i think celeborn just cscrewed up m well i hope that the writing is up intime b4 i leave for holiday later jossy
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  • From ANON - Josalyn on July 09, 2005
    okay loved that chappy next lol well write more soon later jossy
    what will celeborn have to say ??
    the evil farie??
    his men??
    helms deep when he is slew??
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  • From ANON - Josalyn on July 08, 2005
    DAMN YOU i love this story and u just left it that is so wrong i hope that u write more or i will go nuts later jossy
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  • From ANON - Enely on July 01, 2005
    Oooooooh cliffie NOOOOOOO!!! I'm going to kiiiiiiiiil you!!! *pout*
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  • From ANON - yue on July 01, 2005
    WOOO!!! Man that was a bloody death, or was it just a dream? hum. anyway ur chapters are getting better. my eyes didnt have to strain that much now that u have paragraphs that are separated with spaces and such. i found less grammer and spelling mistakes too!! im starting to like the shakespearian kinda language in this story but the characters sometimes seem a bit flaky, eapecially the heroine but i guess thats to be expected with a young teenager. i look forward to ur next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MoB on June 22, 2005
    Awwwww!!! Cliffe you suck! Keep writing PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - yue on June 19, 2005
    i really like ur story. i even like how u began the story. the way that naipha traveled to middle-earth made sense and the story takes on different myths too. this sotry is really sweet and flows somewhat smoothly. however there are quite a few grammer and spelling errors, not to mention the format of how u wrote the chapters are a bit hard to follow without my eyes growing tired. i suggest putting spaces in between each paragraph. i look forward to ur next chapter.
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  • From ANON - titania on June 17, 2005
    Yeah, but see I heard that the all over gaelic language was composed of Finnish, gaelic, latin and something else that I can;t remember. I just don;t know any Finnish so I did mainly Gaelic/ Latin for the elves. Hey! At least it's partly correct! : )
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  • From EnelyaLinde on June 17, 2005
    Awwww how sweet!
    PS: Sindarin is aminly Finnish yeh so thats Gaelic/Latin? Huh...
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  • From EnelyaLinde on June 15, 2005
    Oooh he's posessed! Wheeeeeee! Again, LoVe your take!
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  • From EnelyaLinde on June 15, 2005
    Ooooh I like it! Well written; a coule spelling errors, but I LOVE the style!!! Keep going!
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