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Reviews for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on August 07, 2005
    I do love how you don't necessarily pick up where you left us at in the previous installment, but do touch on it somewhere along the way in the next. It gives it a little extra something, like you've started anew, and thus if you don't remember exactly what happened previously, its not so big a problem that you would have to go back n reread sections of the preceding chapter. You slowly bring us back to it, and mention it off-handedly, so as to not leave us burning in curiosity if we do.

    Now, on to other things. Do luv how Legolas has the balls (Sorry! just *had* to say it, lol) to initiate those...lively encounters. Ok, this will satisfy me, if I can't have Legolas...

    *****Ok, a disturbing thing, not remembering what it was you said in previous reviews… I have to go and check!********

    ...And Elrohir exchange roles as I asked in that review. I suppose Legolas is, in effect, the one who’s doing the pursuing. But I"m still not giving up hope of seeing something like it in the future! ::HINT:: ::HINT::

    ANND, oh, DO update Quicker! I can't take the wait. Its nigh excrutiating. You didn't update chapter 12 b4 I went off on vacation. Don't know why, but I was so sure that you would. I was so disappointed. I'll have you know that I'm a spoiled brat, so that's never a good thing.

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  • From ANON - Yanic on August 06, 2005
    Well we can't really blame Legolas for trying. If Elrohir were my intended...hehe. Yea I wish. You've got me nervous though. I really hope his brother doesn't screw things up for Legolas and Elrohir...
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  • From ANON - Shanna on August 05, 2005
    Hola Eresse. Como siempre maravilloso, leerlo es una delicia...es tan romántico ¡estoy deseando leer más! Un saludo y hasta pronto.
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  • From ANON - Karen on August 04, 2005
    I was looking for a new chapter, really looking. I hope Elrohir and Legolas will be very cautious of his older brother. Thanks for the treat, Eresse and I wil be looking for more.
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  • From ANON - Jayn on August 04, 2005
    If that's how Legolas acts BEFORE his majority, I don't want to know what he's like after! Lol. PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jayn on July 26, 2005
    *Snickers* Well, just watch Leggy go! Lol. Very *Ahem* Interesting chapter. PLEASE update soon! I wanna know what happens next!! ^_^
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  • From on July 26, 2005
    WOW.
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  • From ANON - Lianna on July 25, 2005
    I believe that, some decades ago when people still cared about such things, there was a concept known as "technical virginity."

    Legolas seems to have been the one who invented it.
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  • From ANON - Shanna on July 25, 2005
    Hola. Un capítulo maravilloso, me ha gustado mucho. Eres una de las mejores escritoras que he leido. Un saludo y hasta pronto.
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  • From ANON - Tasha on July 25, 2005
    My goodness gracious!! I am soooo happy you made us wait for this chapter. You have been forgiven.


    P.S. I love you
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  • From ANON - Yanic on July 24, 2005
    That was so hot! Elrohir really did give him a hand! Lol well done can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Karen on July 24, 2005
    I would say that Elrohir is in trouble. It looks like Legolas knows how to get him to stretch the limits of what is allowed and what isn't. He is still an insistant prince, isn't he? I say he should go for it and get his reward before much longer and I believe Elrohir will be hard pressed to deny him. GO Legolas!! Poor Elrohir, but lucky Elrohir. I love this pair, I love the way you write them. I can't hardly wait for more. Thank you Eresse for sharing this with us!
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on July 18, 2005
    have been following this story arc and like where you are headed with it. I felt so sorry for legelos and would have loved to beat his sibilings! please continue and update as soon as possible.!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 16, 2005
    Hi! Well, here I am. *Again* LOL. I have nothing better to do ...eh, at one in the morning, there is something i should be doing... But, who cares? I had a thought ealier, while I was preparing some food. Wouldn't it be surprising and romantic if one of the two (Leg or Elrohir) had a hidden talent with food? I can think of few things that are more romantic than a guy making a delicious dinner for the two of you. LOL. If I'm making too many requests or if I'm just getting too annoying, just tell me to shut up ok?

    But b4 I go: I forget to comment on the more important aspects of the story, like how realistic the characters, their reactions, and how believable the circumstances are. You do a terrific job of protraying their emotions. All too often, authors fail to properly convey the intended sentiments. You do so consistently well, and you manage to do it with a mature aura to it. Like Legolas' reaction to his accidentally witnessed act, his confession, and later his questions on the future. I was browsing through some other works, and the stories were...just very two-dimensional. There is little depth to them, and after reading *your* fics, a bit too painful to read. [::glares:: Thanks for spoiling me!] It made me appreciate your work even more. Continue the superb job!
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  • From ANON - Karen on July 14, 2005
    You painted us a picture of Legolas' needs and desires after witnessing Elrohir in such an intimate setting. Elrohir should not have been surprised by such a question coming from his little leaf.....but I guess Legolas will continue to surprise him. I loved this chapter, of course, and can't wait for more. It is getting more interesting by the paragraph! You are just awesome Eresse, just awesome.
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