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Reviews for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Shanna on July 14, 2005
    Hola Eresse, gracias por dejarme escribirte en español, es más fácil para mí. Maravilloso capítulo, me ha gustado mucho. Todas tus historias me encantan, tienes una forma de escribir maravillosa, es adorable cómo describes la relacción de Elrohir y Legolas ¡estoy deseando leer más! Hasta pronto.
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 13, 2005
    BTW, I forgot this. Though I would love for Elrohir to fall in love with Legolas before he fancies someone else, could you throw in some trouble there? Could he perhaps do just that? Favor someone else other than Legolas before he falls in love with our golden prince? Legolas is ready to fall for him, you've made that evident. How about having him work for Elrohir's love for a change? You've handed him the Elf-knight's unwavering love and devotion in Greenleaf and Imladris; though he did have to wait for Elrohir in the last chapters, he already had him, and need only await the awakening of the valiant Elrohir's dormant love.

    I'd love to see something like this, a reversal of roles of sorts. However, I do know that you've (possibly) hinted that something may occur that would cause Legolas to change his esteem of Elrohir. I'd love this too, and think it a wonderful idea. ...only, wouldn't the work be left up to our favorite twin once again?
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 13, 2005
    Yay! You wrote it out for me! lol. Are we back to that phase again? The one that always makes me squrim and shy away from the computer screen? Where I squeak, curl up in a ball, then chance a look at the next couple of sentences betwixt the fingers of my hand which is currently covering my eyes? sigh... Adolescence is troublesome for *everyone*. And I do love how Legolas always puts Elrohir on the spotlight. I hope that I'll continue to see that throughout the ages, despite their ages. (I hope Legolas realizes the power he holds over Elrohir and intentionally puts him on the spot {the uncomfy one, not the terrible --Rift-- one} ever so often!)
    Oh, and I've decided, I don't like having caught up with you. I'm constantly checking for updates, night and day! And considering I sleep at 12 or later, and go online the first time in the morning, well, its just too many times inbetween updates! Don't you have a mailing list???

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  • From ANON - Jayn on July 13, 2005
    I feel bad that they fought, but I'm glad they made up in the end!! Interesting revelations. *Grins* PLEASE udpate soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on July 13, 2005
    Ah, Eresse. Like all of your other works, this is a beautifully written and emotional tale. You have tackled a delicate subject matter with taste and grace, while still not denying the honesty of new-found awakening... Would that our own world dealt the same with such things. Our own youngsters would turn out to be far better men and women for it. As always, I eagerly await your next installment.
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  • From ANON - Yanic on July 13, 2005
    Omg I LOVE this story! ANd I really love the fact that they actually had a fight, it makes the story much more realistic. Because let's face it, love is never easy and it has its ups and downs. But now I can't wait to see what will happen next. It seems that Legolas has a bit of a problem and I'm dying to know whether or not Elrohir wi;ll give him a hand with this problem ;)

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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 11, 2005
    EEE! I can't believe you didn't include why Elrohir was in that state. (I want you to write it out! lol) Why wasn't Legolas curious? I mean, no jealousy that someone could incite Elrohir like that? What elf had the right? Ok, ok, he may have been too dazzled to think coherently... but I hope you address that in the next chapter. {update! Quick!}
    I love how the other princes have moved on with their life. Like the one brother (too many names to remember...@.@) who used to be N-something's lackey, who has now moved onto more educated pursuits. And the older bro whose revelation of his lover's identity would cause Thranduil to go into a fit to end all fits! I wish G-something the best of luck with his heart's desire. You do too, don't you?
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  • From ANON - Yanic on July 11, 2005
    Wow! The tension between Legolas and Elrohir is intense! But I got the impression that Legolas is still too young for Elrohir. Too bad.
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  • From ANON - Jayn on July 10, 2005
    Wow. Heh, WOnder what Legolas will do when he sees ELrohir in the morning. PLEASE update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on July 09, 2005
    Hola Eresse. Wonderful! The good is amazing that you write! I do not know if the review is written correctly, the English is not my first language, you understand Spanish? Saludos.
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  • From ANON - Karen on July 09, 2005
    Oh Eresse, Elrohir pleasuring himself is a site few of us can handle. I can understand Legolas' less than chaste thoughts. Great chapter, can't wait to see if you tell us what Elrohir was thinking!
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 08, 2005
    OMG! you are such a tease! what happened to my next chapter, ch 9?!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on July 06, 2005
    I love how the elves of Mirkwood and the elves of Imladris have different cultures. It's a really nice touch. Poor Elrohir needs to get laid!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on July 06, 2005
    Hola Eresse. The story is extraordinary. Very interesting and written well. I am wishing to read more! Saludos.
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  • From ANON - Soda on July 06, 2005
    You are an amazing writer Eresse, you don't just write a story, you write it so...beautifully.
    I'm very curious how this story will come out.
    You can be sure I'll follow it to its end.

    cheers / Soda
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