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Reviews for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 05, 2005
    I love how Legolas has a jealous streak, and how he totally misinterprets Elrohir's teasing comment on his nurse's comely looks. I can't wait til he grows up and all the trouble starts! LOL. As much as I love fluff, I have got to have the plot! Will we be seeing a double bonding here?

    I just realized after writing that review that there were six brothers....sigh. Thank you for clarifying all that. Hmm... I rather like reviewing a couple of days after I originally read it. Makes the wait seem...shorter. Really, the wait is killing me. I know they say patience is a virtue. How unfortunate that its one that I do not possess.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2005
    your story is simply fantastic! i love the emotions and issues faced by the characters. i can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Jayn on July 05, 2005
    A few more years and the lil Legolas won't be lil any more! *cough* Ignore that remark.... *Grins* I like ... i'm bad with names, and brothers whose name starts with a G, well, I like him now! Picking on lil kids is NOT cool. PLEASE update soon!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on July 05, 2005
    Next time you write a fic, could you leave out a brother or two? Five is an awful *lot* to remember. I can't recall who wants the Elf-knight for himself and which brother wants Elladan. Its awwwwful! LOL. I'm sitting here trying to figure this out like a crossword puzzle (no good at that; couldn't even finish this one from a *teen* magazine! I mean, who knew you needed that high an IQ??!). I don't even know their age!

    What *exactly* did you mean by Thranduil expectations/full intent behind the betrothal? Do you mean that he wanted Legolas to love (or feel something akin to that) Elrohir enough so that he would refuse any overtures from other, perhaps less well-meaning elves? Is that what you meant by "the letter"? LOL. I love your choice of diction (all those archaic words do set the mood/tone right), your creative ways of phrasing things, your broad vocabulary--all of it helps to avoid repitition n monotony and enriches the story, its just sometimes I get a tad bit confuse. ::sheepish grin::


    And what of thranduil's comment on the Peredhil's tendency to chose a mortal end? Is that foreshadowing Elladan's choice of mate?



    Also! You seemed to have misplaced all your fluff!! Did you try checking under the bed? I have plenty, just ask if you need any! ;D
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  • From ANON - Jayn on July 01, 2005
    I like him. He's actually a pretty decent guy if you get him away from his brothers. And lil Legolas is getting a backbone against his brothers! I luv the way he did it too! PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on June 30, 2005
    Hola Eresse. What evildoers the brothers of Legolas! But it has to Elrohir... I am wishing to read more!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on June 30, 2005
    Legolas's brothers can be such beasts! Well not all of them it's good to see that some are changing. I really hope they stay away from Elrohir. It could be disasterous.
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  • From ANON - Yanic on June 27, 2005
    A possesive Elfling Legolas is too cute! And Elrohir's explanation of his previous relationship with Gildor was hysterical. Now all he has to do is keep it in his pants until Legolas's majority. Why do I get the feeling that may not be exactly how this story goes? LOL can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on June 26, 2005
    Oh! I forgot! Is this whole chapter meant as a peek into what's ahead of the two? Two instances from reliable sources warning of trouble should Elrohir fail to uphold his oath... Interesting. Esp since he is often protrayed as being extremely devout, unwaveringly faithful to whom he loves, far more often than I've seen Legolas cast in such a flattering light. I can't wait. Now I don't know if I want to see more Lil'las chapters or FF a bit to where their relationships starts or to where the trouble starts to brew.
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel@aol.com on June 26, 2005
    LOL. I'd be permanently shocked/unnerved by what Legolas is capable of. I agree with Elladan, i must commend Elrohir.
    Hmmm, not as much fluff in here...more plot. T_ T Fluff r plot? Plot or fluff? ... Can't decide what I want more now...
    ::sigh: I can't believe that I'm even having this debate!! LOL. I usually go for plot, though I do very much love fluff...


    How old must an elf be before reaching his majority? 50 or 100?
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  • From ANON - Jayn on June 26, 2005
    Maybe I shouldn't read this when I could be snickering while everyone's asleep... *Grins* Lil Legolas is adorable! PLEASE update soon!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on June 25, 2005
    Hola Eresse. How interesting and exciting! Pretty what a jealous Legolas...
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  • From ANON - Vanice on June 24, 2005
    OMG!! *bounce* I can't believe I didn't read this story of yours till today. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Jayn on June 20, 2005
    I wanna hug Legolas and give him lots of cookies! Lol. PLEASE update soon and i'll give u some cookies too!
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel@aol.com on June 20, 2005
    LOL. What a kid! I' hate to be in such a position, queried like that by one only a fraction of my age!! LOL. Glad your utilizing Legolas' age to the max. What better way to get to know Elrohir than to have him interrogate by Lil'las? Who could resist, or accuse him of an ulterior, unseeming motive?

    Just to let you know, this fic has thus far not left me unsatisfied, or without a beeming smile on my face. It leaves me with a good, warm feeling. And i love it.
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