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Reviews for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

By : MPB

From ANON - Gingitsune on October 29, 2005
Yes!!!! I love you! Another chapter and Legolas still has the regard of his beloved elf knight! Yes! True true that it's going to be a tough battle ahead and I do hope that Legolas is able to win the battle and regain his elf knight once again. Can't wait til your next chapter. As usual, your stories are riveting and fascinating. More? *puppy eyes*
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From ANON - Shanna on October 28, 2005
Hola Eresse, espero que hayas pasado unas gratas vacaciones con tu familia. El capitulo me ha gustado mucho, podria pasar todo el dia leyendo �sta historia maravillosa. Estoy deseando leer c�mo Legolas y Elrohir renuevan el amor que se tienen... Un saludo.
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From ANON - Yanic on October 28, 2005
Woohoo! An update and Nimaras got what was coming to him. You had me so scared with that line about Thranduil seeing the shadow, and then he wasn't wearing his ring, I thought he didn't love Legolas anymore! But he does and now there is hope for the the two. Wheew! Thank you for the quick update, I can't wait to see the next!
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From ANON - Daeomae on October 27, 2005
P.S. You are a saint for keeping your composure with and showing incredible patience for someone who is too coward to put their name upon these unnecessarily mean-spirited reviews.

*BIG HUGS*

Dae
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From ANON - Daeomae on October 27, 2005
That was so very heartrending. *sniffle* However, I do not doubt the tenacity of Legolas in his resolve to have the Elf-Knight's uncensored affections once more. As always, I am eager for the next installment.

I hope that you enjoy your holiday as well. Everyone needs a break now and again. *smile*

Dae
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From Jayn on October 27, 2005
I know I should know what non-con means, but it completely slipped my mind. Anyways, I feel so bad for Elrohir. He still loves Legolas but he is so doutful of himself! I know Legolas will win him back! And I can't wait to see how he does it!! PLEASE update soon!! ^_^
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From ANON - HHS on October 26, 2005
What a bastard!Too bad I wasn't there when Thranduil judged him.I just hope that Elrohir is all right.
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From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2005
And apparently, all of those around Legolas blames him as well, as stated in your previous chapter. Why is that always so? This is blatantly Elrohir's fault and yet everyone, even Legolas' brother blames him for it. And why should Legolas feel regret? If anyone did that to me, there would be absolutely no regret. A lie, no matter the truth of the situation is still a lie. Fundamentally, Elrohir had lied even if he didn't know what had happened. He didn't say anything about it for years and when he did, the situation turned it into Legolas' fault. Instead of Elrohir fighting tooth and nail for Legolas again, with all his profession and love and all that, he runs away. He always runs away. Even with your explanation of him not wanting to see Legolas with someone else and all that starts to sound a little lame with the third variation of this theme. For someone so fiercely devoted to Legolas, wouldn't he try his very best to save this relationship no matter what instead of running away with his tail tucked between his legs and wait for everyone to blame it on someone who doesn't deserve it at all?

Why do you always feel the need to make Elrohir look like a saint? I honestly loved your stories. Then when this trend started happening, it makes me wonder if you can only write a variation to this theme?
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From ANON - uppacrick on October 23, 2005
I think it's a wonderful story and I am enjoying the twists and turns. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Shanna on October 23, 2005
Hola Eresse. Me ha gustado mucho, escribes maravillosamente bien. Es un placer leer una historia tan hermosa y tan bien escrita. Ahora espero que Elrohir pueda perdonar a Legolas y sean felices aunque creo que ser� complicado despues de todo lo que ha sucedido �verdad? Un saludo.
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From ANON - Yanic on October 23, 2005
My God do you have a talent for leaving me on the edge of my seat! Thank you so much for the update, I swear this story is like an addiction- after a while I just need to get my fix! Lol, don't know what I'm going to do when it's done! Wonderful writing as usual, I love your use of the old language, it really enhances the story. And I love the way you portray your characters-all those emotions in Elladan's eyes...Love it love it love it! But now I can't wait to see how Elrohir's doing, and what it takes for Legolas to win him back ;)
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From ANON - Vanice on October 23, 2005
Oh my gawd! This chapter just about killed me! Poor Legolas... but at least now that he knows the truth he can make up with Elrohir. I really hope you'll update soon! I check your journal eveyday for updatesLOL ^___^ I might not be completely accurate, but the next chapter would be a pinnacle in the story seeing as it touches on whether or not Legolas will have a chance to make things up to Elrohir and if not, whether their relationship will suffer further (but I know you won't torture us so with too much angst right? *puppy dog eyes*) Just when I thought your stories can't get any better .... =) Thank you for writing such a wonderful story Eresse! Ooh~~ two weeks is just too long T_T
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From ANON - Daeomae on October 23, 2005
Darn that Nimeras! Thranduil is being rather kind to send him to Aman. Legolas seems to have his work cut out for him indeed. It will take a lot of groveling to win back the trust of Elrohir after his venom-laced last conversation with the Elf-Knight. Eresse, you never cease to amaze me with the way that you completely draw me into one of your stories. Though admittedly I do not review as I should, know that whatever you write I'm reading it with great enthusiasm for the current chapter and barely contained anticipation for the next. Always a pleasure.

Dae
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From ANON - elle on October 23, 2005
Another great chapter. I really can't wait to find out what happens.
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From ANON - Jayn on October 23, 2005
Oh wow! He actually did it! But I'm really glad that he didn't take him. *Whew* Now how will Elrohir react? I'm dying to find out!! PLEASE update soon!!!
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