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Reviews for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

By : MPB
  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2005
    I don't get it. Why is suddenly Legolas' fault? I note in many of your stories, it is suddenly Legolas' fault and time for him to go beg for the self sacrificing Elrohir's forgiveness.

    This doesn't forgive Elrohir for lying. He lied and for many years. An omission is still lying. If anything, Elrohir, NO MATTER WHAT, should be begging for Legolas' fault. If I was Legolas, I wouldn't bother. In the end, Elrohir, STILL LIED.

    Legolas shouldn't need to 'win Elrohir's regard'. Your stories are starting to have the same repetitive theme, and most of them revolves around 'Legolas begging for Elrohir's forgiveness'.
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  • From ANON - Yanic on October 19, 2005
    OMG I can't take the suspense any more! Do they get him to confess that he didn't actually sleep with Elrohir and made it up? Do they get to tell Legolas before it's too late? please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - Jayn on October 16, 2005
    I hate to say it, but I hope he Did it. Then Elrohir and Legolas can be happy together!! After what happened, I'm really surprised that neither of them faded yet... PLEASE update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Nirina Illusier on October 14, 2005
    Oh my gosh...i'm trembling, and my stomach is in knots, and I'm trying really hard not to start crying! This is an amazing story!! May I say, that you are an amazing author. though, I had to keep a dictionary with me at all times becuase I didn't know half of the words that you used >
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  • From ANON - HHS on October 13, 2005
    If what they're thinking is somewhat true,then a serious crime was commited.
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  • From ANON - Jaylen on October 12, 2005
    Lovely Chapter!! Poor Legolas and Elrohir. Can't wait to see what the brothers do to Nimaras. It's amazing how much they have changed in regards to Legolas. The plot thickens and I am totally enthralled with it. Wonderful as always.
    Jaylen
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  • From ANON - elle on October 11, 2005
    To be honest, I haven't read this story in quite a while and thought I lost interest in it. I the new chapters anyway. And you reeled me right back in. :P Now I'm once again anxious for the next update.
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  • From ANON - love4slash on October 11, 2005
    Of course I want them to be together (FAST!!!) but I can also understand Legolas. I mean he was betrayed. Even although Elrohir can't remember it which makes his fault alost unexistand, he still lied. I think that's what pains Leggy the most.
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  • From ANON - Sesshyangel on October 10, 2005
    OMG! omgomgomg! WHat happened??! What Happened that night!?!??
    I shudder to think of how long I must wait before you next update!!!!
    UGHHGGHGHHGHGHGG@!!!
    Spasms!!!

    Aww, poor Elrohir! I hope he doesn't do anything too drastic, like jump off the side of a cliff. And what exactly did happen that night? WHAT did that bastard do?? I had kept hope that it was Elrohir who did the taking. Though it would have meant that he *did* break his oath to Legolas, at least he retained his virginity, which to me I think would have been a greater blow, a more grevious loss to Legolas, for it can never be taken back, even should they get back together. I think that Legolas prized that highly, perhaps more so than Elrohir's fidelity; that the Elf-knight would surrender for him, ever and only for him as a sign of utmost trust and love...that he would be the 1st and the last... I would rather have Elrohir have done the taking instead of receiving. Their relationship can be repaired, but how does one give their virginity to a second someone?
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  • From ANON - Blaise on October 10, 2005
    Forgot to add my name to the above Anon review...I was so incessed by that Nimaras!!! Sheesh.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
    Hurray for Aelluin!! He has now become my favorite brother!! Only in my most desperate hopes have I allowed myself to think that perhaps Nimaras took full advantage of a totally unconscious Elrohir or even dared to think that he just planted evidence to make it look like that something had occurred. Of course, you can still squelch my hopes and reveal that Aelluin is totally off-base and everything occurred as Nimaras (or demon-filth as I like to refer to him) told. I can understand Legolas' need to strike out at Elrohir but to tell something so devastating as that he turned around and slept with others must be destroying poor Elrohir (at least we know that he really hasn't). I wouldn't have waited until morning to leave if I was Elrohir. I hope the brothers get to the truth and then some really satisfying consequences (involving humiliation and bloodshed) are levied on Nimaras (warg spit that he is!). Can you tell I really hate Nimaras? Such great writing to instill such a hostile reaction to a character. I can't wait to read next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Shanna on October 10, 2005
    Hola Eresse. ¡Qué emocionante e interesante! ¡Ay Legolas! Está muy dolido con Elrohir y eso le impide ver lo mucho que le ama. Pobre Elrohir. Me encanta y estoy deseando leer más... Un saludo Eresse.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on October 10, 2005
    Poor Elrohir! I only hope that Legolas can regain his heart after he realises how vicious he had been to his beloved elf knight. Always love reading your stories. Heartache, happiness, with doses of reality. Totally absorbing!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on October 10, 2005
    Thank you for an update! And now there is a ray of hope, but will Legolas stop being so stubborn about it? I just want to smack Legolas and tell him to take Elrohir back already. I ahte seeing both of them in pain. As usual a beautiful chapter and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - jamie on October 10, 2005
    ooh... that was hard to read. Angsty and so so sad....

    If I know your style well, I expect that things will remain thus for quite a while yet.

    And I bet that the tables will be turned on Legolas, wherein he'll be begging for forgiveness from Elrohir who will refuse to let Legolas take his hurtful words back that easily. But to be honest, I'm not really keen on that scenario, as I'm one of those types that can fully understand how Legolas must have felt. His anger, resentment and need to hurt/wound back is hugely understandable in my eyes. But you're the author, and I sense that you're heading towards the 'Legolas is being too unreasonable' track.

    Whatever you write, I will continue to read and enjoy!

    Till your next update!
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