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Reviews for Balrogs, Butterflies & Bondings

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 08, 2005
    Is that Legolas's first time having sex with a male?! Oh man! At least Elrond is there to witness it. Kinda like sharing the first time togther. Hmm..... you get my drift? Hmm......so Legolas realises Elrond's situation now. Hmm.....maybe he will fall in love with Elrond and manage to persuade his father to let him wed Elrond instead? Hmm.....ideas......hehe thanks for the quick update. I have two exams tomorrow and I really needed to relax. Much thanks!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on June 07, 2005
    Oooohhhh... Now Legolas has figured it out. Hmmm.... I do wonder what he'll come up with! And Elrond as instructor? I'm not sure that wouldn't make me even more nervous! EEEK!
    However, he seems to make an excellent pupil.......
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 06, 2005
    Ohhhh, that was very sad. I can see why the butterflies are so upsetting for him. Not only does he fear them for what he considers evil intent, but he associates them with the death of his family. I'm dying to know why the butterflies like him so much!
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 06, 2005
    Awww~ Th butteflies are trying to protect Erester instead. =) That's just so sweet! Hehe I do hope that Erester would be able to overcome his fear one day and learn to embrace his heritage? Hehe *grins* Man you work such long hours! Gosh! After learning that I appreciate you getting out the chapters so rapidly even more. Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on June 06, 2005
    I'm BACK!!!!!!!! And all caught up and waiting for more. :D
    Yes, I know, I'm a greedy thing. Elrond keeps saying so, but somehow it doesn't sound exactly like a complaint. I like the introduction of Warriors Companions: much smuttiness waiting in the wings there, I'm sure. ;) And now we know why Erestor is afraid of butterflies. But i wonder about the story Thranduil wants to tell. Much curiousity!

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  • From ANON - katy on June 06, 2005
    OOOOOOOH what a cliff hanger!!! How cruel!! I'll just have to check several times a day for your next update :) Really enjoying this story.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 05, 2005
    Can't wait for Thranduil to tell the story of why the butterflies follow Erester. Wow~ Erester jumped from three stories high just to get away from the butterflies? Amazing! Poor you.....I totally understand how RL can interrupt writing so you have my sympathies. The more I appreciate you coming with the chapters so fast. I am still rooting for Elrond X Legolas so I am waiting to see how things are going to unfold *grins* More?!
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on June 04, 2005
    Oooh, we get to the mystery! I'd be miffed with Elrond for using Erestor's fear like that, but since it leads to the unveiling of the mystery, I'm okay with it. The whole thing with the warrior companion is a little odd to me, but okay. It's nice that they are so good to them though.
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  • From ANON - Lauand on June 02, 2005

    "The next morning, Elrond woke and sighed as he thought 'Well, I am not dead...so I suppose I should get up'."

    I still think that this is not the best fiction ever, but really, that sentence IS one of the best I've read. XDD Thank you for your quick updates. The idea of Glorfindel the butterfly catcher was sweet and I loved it.


    LAUAND
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 02, 2005
    Wow~ You are fast! Hehe 'onegai' is used kinda like please or when you are making a request to someone. Hehe then again I am not a native Japanese speaker so I might be wrong in my interpretation. Hehe it's so sweet of Elladan and Elrohir to send Elrond comfort. Hehe though I think I'll feel a little weird if I am ever in that situation =P Legolas! Legolas! Legolas! Elrond x Legolas? *grins*
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on June 01, 2005
    Wow~ The next chapter did come out really fast. Arigato. *grins* Where's Legolas?! I still think that it's a good idea if Legolas is the one to bind to Elrond instead *sticks out tongue* I think it's really sweet the way that the twins were trying to comfort Elrond. I know it's not always easy to write a new chapter but more onegai? *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Nikkiling on June 01, 2005
    Aww... how sweet! Poor Elrond, although now I'm really curious over who he was with before... or did you mention it previously... Hmmm... a good excuse to read over the entire story again! Hehehe
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  • From ANON - Ertia on May 31, 2005
    EEE!!!!!! More more more more more!
    Very nice chapter though, the twins all concerned for their Ada and worrying that he might fade. heh... *glances down at Elrond*... I don't think he's at any risk for that. He seems rather... er... content. For the moment, at least. :D
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  • From ANON - Sheeijan on May 31, 2005
    Well, I'm back, and wow, so many chapters I've come back to! Glorfindel's progressed quite happily I see. I loved the mural, that was so funny. It's nice to see the twins support and love their father no matter what. Hmm, I wonder if they could be brought into cahoots with Legolas....
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  • From ANON - Celegorm on May 31, 2005
    My, you do post fast! Forgive me, I fell behind!

    I am enjoying the plot and I'm sure you have a reason for these seemingly silly fears. I also wonder how things will work out for Elrond - assuming you are planning on a happy ending!

    The touches of comedy are very nice, I especially like the banter between Glorfindel and Erestor.

    Concrit time now:

    I notice you often confuse 'there, their and they're'. All you need to remember is that:

    There - always refers to a place.
    Their - is always possessive.
    They're - is simply short for 'they are'.

    Regards,
    Celegorm
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