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Reviews for The Next Level

By : deathskiss
  • From ANON - Sam on January 04, 2007
    Wow! That was so graphic, erotic and sensual. If the next chapter's half as good...well you'd have to publish it. So long as Elijah and Orlando okay it first i guess. But I have had the biggest crush on Elijah lattely so this story really made me...dare i say it...hard and horny!!! Thanks for a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on September 03, 2005
    uhn. HOT.
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  • From ANON - vampyreice on August 30, 2005
    Please update soon! I love this fic and can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    ...
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  • From ANON - Mood on June 17, 2005
    That was hot.
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  • From ANON - jasmine on June 15, 2005
    Tease. You just had to stop there didn't you. Your middle name must be evil.

    Loved the 3rd chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    again Please, Please Please Please Please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! with lots of cream and sugar



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  • From ANON - jasmine on June 12, 2005
    love the way Lij reacts to Orlando's confesion of love.

    Please write more soon. Please, Please, Please, Please!!!!!!!! With cream and sugar.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jacquie on June 03, 2005
    Yay! *claps hands in glee* Another chapter and it's brilliantly written yet again. :-D

    Keep up this excellent work ......... looking forward to some Orlijah bedroom antics!
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  • From ANON - Bridgie on June 01, 2005
    Of the two chapters you've written, I think the first is so far the best. There was a bit too much *girly* fluff in the second (fluff is good, as long as the guys don't behave like girls..) The way I see this, it's a bit too serious to be jumping in a couch for and it's rarely a good idea to go rough on someone right after you've admited you're in love with them, but that might just be me. Think of how it'd be written if it was a f/m fic. Things would probably be a bit more..ehm..slow? The way I read it now, it was going a bit fast, like it was a goal to finish the chapter ASAP. I dunno..Just my two cents.

    I don't know what you think, but I've got an impression (not specificaly from you) that whenever girls write slash-fictions, they for some reason assume that since the guys are gay, they must be so much different from straight guys when it comes to stuff like this. I've still got left to meet a gay guy who is less cautios about love and relationships than a straight, just because he's gay. Am I making any kind of sense?
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  • From ANON - angel on June 01, 2005
    whew! is it getting hot in here or what. that was a great chapter. can't wait til the next one . :)
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  • From ANON - Bridgie on May 30, 2005
    That's one of the best EW/OB stories I've *EVER* read (and I've read quite a few..). LOVED the way you've written the two of them, the characterisations are great and the conversations and actions just as good!
    It was just the right amount of "fluff" and not too girly (as slash-fics tend to be..).

    Please do write more! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s hopefully?) ;-)
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  • From on May 30, 2005
    I agree the story is very hot! You did a great job for your first story it really makes me look forward to the next chapter..please post soon.

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  • From ANON - Jacquie on May 28, 2005
    Great writing! Well done. Makes me think i ought to try as well, but it's getting the courage up to publish - you took that step and it's brilliant. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for the next chapter ..... please post it soon :-)
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  • From ANON - angel on May 27, 2005
    wow! that was hot. more please. :)
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