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Reviews for The Fire Dance

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  • From ANON - Lena Hart on January 24, 2006
    OMG! *hugs little Gwee* its alright baby you can play with Little Las he will make you feel better *pats Gwee's hair* i love this the pot thickens!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lena Hart on January 24, 2006
    OMG! *hugs little Gwee* its alright baby you can play with Little Las he will make you feel better *pats Gwee's hair* i love this the pot thickens!!!!
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  • From ANON - animebishieluver on January 24, 2006
    YOU UPDATED!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY DAY! DO DO DOD DODODOODODODO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT, DO IT AGAIN! WHEE!!!!!!!! okay, bye!
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  • From ANON - oli on January 21, 2006
    awwwwww....what a lovely chapter...lots of love and fluff...hehe! looking forward to the next one..
    Oli xXx

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  • From ANON - Daeomae on January 21, 2006
    Yey!!!!!!!!!! This was a terrific chapter, Dark sweetie! I love to see these glimpses into the elflings maturation. To think that Gwee is 25 now, halfway to the age of maturity. *sigh* They grow up so fast.

    *Mwah*
    Dae
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  • From ANON - g.h.k. on January 20, 2006
    nice chapter ,but wheere is thrn he didn't go back did he??
    poor Elrond ánd nasthy torfindel , to make his parents such a worry.
    he killed an warg ??
    good think taks after gorfindel !!his ada could be proud!
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  • From ANON - angelsfyre1 on January 20, 2006
    another fantastic chapter!! I love the reactions when she said she would make a better Stalker LOL Having kids myself i know the feeling of "good your not hurt NOW I am going to KILL you!! " it was a wonderfully natural chapter!! your characters are fun and alive! I can't wait for the next update!! keep up the great writing
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on January 20, 2006
    I'm sorry, I agree with Erestor in this case. I am so glad that Torfindel wasn't hurt, that would have been just terrible.

    I love how everyone has been growing up, it's wonderful to see how much they have changed and yet are still very similar to how they were as little ones.
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  • From ANON - Lena Hart on January 19, 2006
    oh my goodness!!! i giant eagle!!! how cool is that!? really cool! as my dear brother would say super excited!!! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on January 19, 2006
    Aahh poor Mel! Caught between Haldir and Ormeril like that! No wonder he cannot stop speaking. And the little twins are growing up nicely! Very considerate to other people's need. Now who does that remind me of...perhaps a certain writer who is en route to write her first "100 chapters" fic? Nicely done, Dark!
    Hugs,
    Maelle.
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  • From LenaOfTheWood on January 17, 2006
    oh i love this story so much i just finished reading it again! i cant wait till you get the time to put another chap up! gosh i just published my first fic and i totally freaking out! i dont know why!!! oh im still Lena i just decided to become an author so yeah hope that didnt confuse you but whatever!!! i cant wait till you get another chap out!!!!!! i think im gonna go read this again i love it so much!!!!
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  • From ANON - angelsfyre1 on January 17, 2006
    ROFLMAO Now that is the father in law from Hades!!!!! Talk about something to cringe over when family reunions happen LOL Your wonderful stories have addicted me!! They are fun, creative, entertaining, hilarious and well written. The characters are well fleshed out and stay true to their charaterization throughout the story! I love the way you made the rituals and the erotic yet sweet and fun interplay between Glorfindel and Erestor when they were first bound. As they have progressed so have the relationships between the others making each so different in the way they interact with their mates and also the way the characters interact as a group. I do a happy dance every time I see a new chapter!! Can not wait for the next update of your fantastic story!!
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  • From ANON - Ithilwen on January 16, 2006
    ZOMG !! I had so much fun with this chapter !! Daddy Mandos being a meanie was really hilarious, and Gwee was, as usual, adorable !!! Poor Círdan must have been scared of being smited by Mandos for doing kinky things to his son, LOL !!! And while we're at it, everyone else who shared his bed. :P I hope Aglar and Glorduin will be happy and have some hot arse coupling. XD Loved the chappie !!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on January 15, 2006
    I'm glad you have a new computer, it's always fun to play with when they first arrive. Now, on to the story: I should think that it would take some getting used to. I enjoyed this chapter a lot, it was wonderful to see some interaction with the new characters. I also loved how little Gwee wasn't afraid at all, it was too sweet.

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  • From ANON - animebishieluver on January 15, 2006
    well... that went well! and Gwee remains the most adorable elfling! update soon, bye!
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