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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From HMica on February 17, 2007
    *hugs* I'm sorry to hear about the RL heck that's been going on, I hope that things clear up soon. Now, onto my review. I loved the reactions in this chapter, the characters, as always, were wonderful to hear from. I enjoyed how even as she was dealing with grief and trauma, Omeriel really stood on her own, as she always has in the past, she stayed true to herself. And I loved that Thoniel pounced on his mate, very funny and sensual.
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  • From Logan4lotr on February 15, 2007
    Is it me or is it getting harder and harder to actually use aff.net?

    Anyway - I really loved this chapter - it made me cry twice! will she marry her hero now? the guy that jumped through the window? or will she be in mourning over the loss of her healer-husband?

    p.s. I honoured that you used the name :D
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  • From HMica on January 27, 2007
    Oh wow... I really don't know what else to say... It was just so surprising to lose Torden that way, I really liked him. At least both Ormeriel and her daughter are all right. On a writing note, I am glad that you did not try to write the passing itself, I think in many ways it's more powerful to read it as those finding out as well. I liked that you also were still able to have a few snarky/funny lines from different characters in this, even with all of the stressful and sad elements.
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  • From HHS on January 27, 2007
    Warrior Princess huh?Too bad that her husband died.
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  • From Logan4lotr on January 20, 2007
    Poor Ormeril! I hope she'll be okay and I'm sure Haldir will be mad with her husband!

    and I love the beginning where Thely jumps on Glorfindels bed - thats priceless!
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  • From Macheil on January 19, 2007
    Thank you for continuing this wonderful story. My husband was hit by 2 drunk drivers early September, he survived, but life is a little rough right now. Your updates always make my day. I eagerly look forward to them. Brian, my husband, always knows when you have updated because of the smile on my face.Thanks again for the wonderful story!!
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  • From silmelinde on January 19, 2007
    Cute story. So Ormeli is having her elfling. How cute. I wonder who is next. Mayhaps Elrond needs another daughter or two?
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  • From Cassia on January 19, 2007
    Please update this story as soon as you can. I have loved it from Chapter one and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.


    ~Sprite
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  • From HMica on January 18, 2007
    Yeah! Another chapter! And again, so much is happening. It sounds as if Erestor is ready to make the stone circle for his son. And poor Omeril, I hope she'll be all right. And Glorfindel and Elrond were both silly and funny.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on January 08, 2007
    That was a smart move on Taurcalad's part, to put Thoniel under first. And I thought it was cute for the twins to gang up on Ecthilion.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on January 03, 2007
    yes, you have reached 200, and who knows how much longer this story can go? It's still wonderful. I loved all the silly and sweet images in this chapter, from Haldir speaking too quickly to Erestor being cranky at Mandos, which is still surprising, but he's a strong character. And of course, how could anyone forget the marvelous image of Elrond soaked in front of a wobbly fountain? Simply sweet.
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  • From ANON - Logan on January 02, 2007
    Hi DarkDreamer,

    I just wanted to congratulate you on your 200 chapters landmark! I've never stuck with a story this long before - but everyday I check for an update for "The Fire Dance" and when there is an update I'm sooooo happy and my day is just that little bit better. Thank you for an amazing story *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Eol the Dark Elf on January 01, 2007
    Your plot is quite interesting, but the poor spelling, grammar and punctuation really ruin the story. I would strongly suggest getting a beta to help you out as currently it is very hard work to read. You do yourself a disservice by posting the story in this state.
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  • From ANON - Denise on January 01, 2007
    UAU!
    CHAPTER 200!
    CONGRATULATIONS!

    I love your fanfic!

    A HAPPY NEW YEAR FULL OF NEW FICS!
    And how my people say in portuguese "FELIZ ANO NOVO"!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on December 28, 2006
    Oh, another great chapter. I love that there all of these elves returning from the dead to find love for the first time. It's great. And I'm so glad that Gwee finally found the courage to ask Erestor to gather the stones.
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