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Reviews for The Fire Dance

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  • From ANON - Sage wolf on November 30, 2005
    Aw. His father is kinda cute now. I feel an urge to give him a squeeze!

    And Haldir isn't killing him! I thought he'd at least poke his eye out with the scratch thorn!

    I'm a sick and twisted individual, you'll have to ignore forgive me. ;)
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on November 29, 2005
    Wow! Erestor really means business! Glorduin has better watch his back because a couple of quills might find their way there! And Haldir is very surprising; he is actually more understanding then Mel, in a way. But I am sure that Mel will realize that Ormeril has still a long way to go before actually becoming Tordren's mate. And 22.000 hits, how cool is that! You rule, my friend!
    Maelle.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on November 29, 2005
    Ah! The reason at last is revealed for Glorfindel's father's reactions to things. And as for Tredror and Ormeril, I hope things will work out for them once Mel has calmed down.

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  • From ANON - Tiryaroofshadow on November 29, 2005
    *rubs hands together* Hehe! Yummy little dirty family secrets!! Anyone else's yummy little dirty family secrets we should know about? ... And so the first Imladrian gossip newspaper was born.
    Ooh and I cannot wait for Haldir's reaction when he'll be told that healer Tordren intends to bond with his little Ormeril when she reaches her majority. Luckily, healer Tordren comes prepared ... with the ScratchThorn.

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  • From sagewolf on November 29, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOOO! Haldir's gonna open a can of whoop ass! LOL!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on November 28, 2005
    At least the discussion went relatively well and no one got hurt... I am also pleased that Tordren brought the Scratchthorn for Haldir, he is going to flip so terribly. And I must agree with the healer, Mel seems to be in shock.
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  • From TICS on November 28, 2005
    'ROG? Snortsnortsnortsnort...I LOVE that, Dark! And I can't WAIT to read Erestor's reaction to Glorduin, as well as Haldir's reaction to Tordren! Hurry and update! I know I say that in every review, but that's only because I really, really want to know what happens!

    :D

    Kath
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  • From ANON - animebishieluver on November 28, 2005
    fluff... and oh the staring and scratchthorn to come with Torden and Ormeril... I think that's her name... anyways, once again, good chapter, AND IT'S STILL CREEPY! I don't care if he's gonna wait, he's attracted to a FIVE YEAR OLD! PEDOPHILE PEDOPHILE PEDOPHILE! okay done now. I may or may not do that again... so, update soon, bye!
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on November 28, 2005
    Oooohhh The scene between Glorfindel and his father was so sweet! It brought tears to my eyes! I am so glad that they are trying to mend their relationship. Perhaps they will understand each other better now that they are actually speaking to one another. As for The Brow, I am not very successful. Maybe it is in the genes! I am not scared to go to the dentist, I never was. I do not mind the needle either. It is the "root canal" part that is getting on my nerves! But I guess I will survive...Great chapter, as always!
    Maelle.
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  • From ANON - animebishieluver on November 27, 2005
    ... *long pause* PEDOPHILE! sorry, had to get that out of my system! wow, love it! sorry I haven't reviewed, but I lost you for a while! fear not, however, for your author page is now bookmarked! keep it up, you always manage to find the most interesting plot turns!
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  • From sagewolf on November 26, 2005
    Ormeril is so cute! LOL!

    And Haldir is very patient... all that fast talking... I would have killed them all by now. LOL!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on November 26, 2005
    Ooh... another absolutely wonderful chapter with too many things to mention... I think the highlights were when Glorfindel punched out his father shortly followed by him then going to talk with him (I hope their walk is sucessful and healthy) and finally, Ormeril is simply too cute: and I really have to agree with her love interest that Haldir will simply have to come around.
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  • From TICS on November 25, 2005
    Ooh, Dark...I'd love to see a companion piece to the Fire Dance written about the Elven Daycare! It sounds adorable! And I'm almost feeling a bit sorry for Glorduin...although hearing his confession about not knowing how to relate to his son shows that there is hope for him. Great update - and I'm so sorry about your tooth! Feel better and update soon!

    :D

    Kath
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  • From ANON - MaelleConstance on November 25, 2005
    Oh yeah Tordren will definetly need the ScratchThorn; knowing Haldir like we do. I really like little Ormeril, she is just marvelous; like all of your original characters. And Fin's father deserved that punch! I just hope that he can mends things with his ion. Sorry to hear about the root canal and how weird is that? I am scheduled for two of those darn things! My appointment is only in 2 weeks which gives me all this time to get scared over the whole thing. But I had an idea: maybe I can learn to do THE BROW so that when I am in the dentist's chair with a thousand instruments in my mouth, I can do THE BROW to scare the dentist away! I am gonna start practicing right now!
    Hugs and kisses to make the pain go away,
    Maelle.
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  • From ANON - tfutcher on November 25, 2005
    Hey I love this story. What is going to happen on the walk with Glorfindel and his adar. Please update as soon as poss
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