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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 13, 2005
    Yeah! Lindir will be able to get better now. It was very sweet and gentle between them, just what he needed. And I'm so glad to see Haldir, Mel, and his son eatting dinner, there were an awful lot of words without a breath, which is probably how it sounded to Haldir.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 11, 2005
    Aww... Haldir is being very sweet in so many ways in this chapter, I really enjoy it. To begin with, he's very tender Mel's ion, especially with what he was saying to Mel later on: how he loved him and wanted to know his son. And to top everything off, he's just so cute with the new little twins.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 10, 2005
    Well, at the least this set of twins are going to be distguishable from each other. And I am sure that Haldir will be a good friend to Mel's son, now that he has learned of him.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 06, 2005
    Wow, so it's finally getting started, I hope it's a fairly easy birth for Rumil, having twins would be terrifying enough without additional trauma. As for Mel, there is obviously a story there, but one that I hope is not too painful. At least it is bringing out some of the best in Haldir at the moment though and Mel's experiences will be helpful for Rumil.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on October 06, 2005
    Oooooooooohhhh! Rumil has a secret!
    A big secret! And there's a baby on the way.
    errr...kinda mean of you to leave us here, Dreamer. I shall have to send Haldir to appropriately punish you! *Hands Haldir two bags of Jelly Belly and sends him on his way.*
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on October 06, 2005
    Sorry I haven't had much time to review (Work and school have been keeping my both busy and exhausted), but I have been reading when I can! Your story is a much needed break at the end of a long day... or in the middle if I can sneak it in durning one of my computer classes! *grin*) I really loved the last few chapters (you did a great job with the het scene!) and this one was really great as well! Mel had a child once? I just LOVE that elf! What a interesting twist! I love it! Who? When? How? Why?
    Hey! My typing speed really is improving! LOL!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 05, 2005
    *Laughs* oh poor Elrohir, he just can't win. But perhaps his father is right and he does need a volume control, that is still very silly.

    I am glad that Lindir is getting closer to being with Orophin, if only because it will help rid his mind of the memories that he had or at least get him some new ones.


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  • From ANON - Ertia on October 05, 2005
    Wheee! Is it time? Is it time?
    Oh, dear. I certainly would NOT want to look up from such an encounter and find Elrond chastising me!!!!! That...errr...that would break the mood a bit, I think! lol
    And yes, you're het scene was great! I like that you gave Mira and Hur that opportunity!
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  • From ANON - Macheil on October 05, 2005
    Thank you, thank you, thank you! This story just keeps getting better and better. The romance with Hur and Mira makes my heart sing. Everytime I log on and find a new chapter, my day has been made. Your story actually makes me giggle, and I don't giggle. Thanks and keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 03, 2005
    I'm glad things are going well with Miradel and Harudel. But I also can't say that I was really surprised, he's been presented as a gentle enough character, and also if her were to step out of place, Erestor would beat him into the ground AFTER Mira tore him to pieces.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on October 03, 2005
    *goes back and rereads just to make sure*
    Uh...
    *shakes head and reads it again.* WHOA! Dreamer wrote HET! And it was HOT! WoW!
    Okay, now that the amazement has worn off! Excellent all the way around! Poor Lindir, thinking that 'Phin might leave him because of his abuse. Poor thing. Good work on 'phins part, I must say!
    And Mira and Hur! Good work those two! Bravo!
    As for Glorfindel, he has no shame, does he?
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  • From ladyazmodan on October 03, 2005
    WOW... just wow! - youre amazing :)

    -Az
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 02, 2005
    I am so pleased to see how well Orophin and Lindir are coming on. It's simply wonderful to see how carefully Orophin is proceeding with such care and tenderness for him. It's a bit similar with Miradel and Harudel, it's such a wonderful thing to see how they are healing those that have been hurting so severely.
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  • From ANON - f.f. on October 01, 2005
    i do think miradel is confusing huradel lol! umm delicious elladan cream perfect for all types of cravings, sweet or salty. How is Tree progressing with lindir? *sniff sniff* and where is erestor?
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  • From ANON - Githoniel on September 30, 2005
    Mmh.. twin of my choice... I can't decide which one to take? Can't I take them both... or rather can't they take me both??? eh, whoops, eh, did I write this??? *Bad girl, tsk tsk tsk*
    Ok, I forgive you turning me into a monster because you wrote such a interesting new chapter. My stomach still hurts because of the fit of laughter on Rumils craving, hehe...
    More please!!!

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