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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - nikkiling on September 29, 2005
    You know, I've really come to like Miradel. Her forthright, take charge attitute is both amusing and refreshing. What a wonderful character!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 29, 2005
    *shakes head* poor poor Elladan, he still has a lot to learn when it comes to Rumil's funny behaviors. But at least Miradel and Elrohir are coming along very well.

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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 29, 2005
    Heehee! Poor 'dan! He has much to learn! Wait! WHY am I saying poor 'dan???? He's getting a bj from Rumil!!!!!!!!! Bah! Elves! :)
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 26, 2005
    Miradel gets a gold star, that's all there is to it. She is showing tremendous power in her faith and her ability to face her fears as far as I'm concerned. I am also surprised with Erestor, in that he was able to return to Glrofindel's lap. I do wish that it had not been a test of trust, but rather one of Glorfindel showing Erestor that he will not hurt him, but oh well. It was very nice.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 26, 2005
    :)
    Yay! For all elves involved!
    Maybe now Glori can help Erestor get over that bit of trauma. I am curious about Rumil, though. I do hope an Elven male copes with pregnancy than a human male copes with a bout of the flu!
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  • From ANON - f.f. on September 26, 2005
    that was just the sweetest.now just want to cuddle erestor and take care of him the poor sweetie. think glorfindel and Tree will find that their loves share a mutual fear of ear licking? loved the update, thanks!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 25, 2005
    Oh wow... Mira really is coming back into her own it looks like. I don't think Harudel is going to be able to get rid of her. As for Rumil, I hope things will be all right with him in the long run. And while I would love to smack Legolas for the puns at the end, he does have a very good point, I hope Orophin is careful.
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  • From ANON - f.f. on September 25, 2005
    aw the innuendoes abound, lol. loved your rumil scene, very funny saying he sounded just like melpomaen. with Tree wouldn't they know as the brothers parents told them rumil was special then wouldn't they have said the same of Tree if he could carry life?personally i think elrond is acting like a sulky 5 year old and as punishment he should have to tell the great-grandparents to be about being great gradparents to be, mwahhaa,very evil. there seems to be a greater leaning to het with erestors sister which is actully making me go aw how sweet. i love mirendils? (erestors sis) interactions with others, especially when she scares them! how long is a male pregnancy, it can't be that long if the effects have hit so quickly right? since cirdan is from the time of males geting pregnant does that mean he can get pregant too, but his body was waiting for his mate? have loved your writing and have even come to love your cliffies;-)
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  • From ANON - Githoniel on September 24, 2005
    Mmmh... Miradel has an interesting method to get the guy she wants... I wonder if this works with human males too :)
    Oh... that bantering in the kitchen was great... I really loved the Tree-joke, haha!!!
    More... more... more...please!!! (you do realise that it was YOU, who turned me in this greedy monster?)
    Hugs,
    Githoniel
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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 23, 2005
    Steamed fish with veggie sauce actually sounds quite good! Minus the beets. I don't like beets. :)
    Nah, having Elrond faint would have been too out of character. After all, he's old and supposedly wise. Heh.. Celeborn admits he likes elflings! He's also admitted to... er... probably aughten't say. Let's try the wheat fronds next, Galadriel!
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  • From ANON - Githoniel on September 23, 2005
    oooh- mpreg!! Yeah!!! But somehow I knew it :) Oh this leaves you a whole new spectrum of funny things to happen: Rumils mood swings and food cravings, and later when the child is born Erestor as desparate babysitter, hehe
    And I loved how Elrond reacted... If I would become pregnant, that's exactly how my mom would react ^-^
    Again another lovely update... I'm so sorry I did not have the time to review every chapter but I'm still hanging on your words.

    Hugs,

    Githoniel
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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 23, 2005
    heehee! Poor Rumil!
    What a mess the little love-birds have landed in. And yeah, which is going to irk Celeborn more? That he's about to be great-grandfather at his age, or that Elladan's put one of his Galadhrim out of commission for a while?
    And yes, I'm learning Celeborn's ways quite nicely. I'm calling his beautiful wife to give me a hand with some tickle-torture later...
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 22, 2005
    ooh... poor Rumil. And I hope Elladan will survive telling his grandparents that they are to be great-grandparents, though I would think that with the long lifespan of an elf, it wouldn't be that dramatic. I am also impressed with the way Elrond handled it, he fainted. ^_^
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 21, 2005
    Oh my god... poor Rumil. Vomiting is most unpleasent. Still, we shall soon find out why he is so special, right? At least he had a good time of things with Elladan before hand. And it was so good to see Glorfindel laugh, he's done a lot more of it in this fic than in others, but he seems like such a sad character.
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  • From ANON - Nikkiling on September 21, 2005
    Oh no! Poor Rumil! Errr.... morning sickness? Gack! I don' know. You certainly know how to keep one in suspense!
    As far as my next chappie, I've promised Friday....and it looks like I'll probably make it! :D
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