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Reviews for The Fire Dance

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  • From ANON - TopazKat on August 30, 2005
    *laughs* poor Thranduil... he'll be fine I'm sure, but it's just funny to see him all embarassed and such. I am also glad that Haldir was temporarily removed from killing anyone, that would be HIGHLY unpleasent. It's been great to see Erestor throw the warriors, that was just funny. And I'm also glad that Orophin is hiding with Erestor's sister, who hopefully won't freek out at the tree in her space.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 30, 2005
    Haldir is gonna be one very ANGRY Marchwarden! *laughing hysterically* Yes, I knew Cirdan would have just the thing to help Thranduil and Elrond! He's been most... accomodating... of certain...requests from Celeborn and myself. Quite a handy fellow, that Cirdan. :D
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  • From ANON - Githoniel on August 30, 2005
    oh oh... Haldir unleashed!!! Poor Orophin!!! Aw Rumil is sooooo cute. I just want to pinch his sweet little ass and cuddle him to death :)
    But Elladan will do this job for me, won't he???
    Wonderful chapter... again!
    Hugs,
    Githoniel
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on August 29, 2005
    I love how sweetly Rumil is being treated by Elladan, especially with the line about him being old enough because it would be so hard for Ell to wait. And I think that it's sweet for Orophin to also have his own crush, but sad that he isn't as well known as his brothers. Being a middle child sucks. As for Haldir, he needs to calm down. I mean come on, not even Thranduil reacted that badly... *stops thinks* bad choice of example... Elrond hasn't been reacting that badly! There, that's a good pick, he's been very calm, he just doesn't want to know. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 28, 2005
    :D

    Hmmm... Haldir isn't happy. Elrond is hung... well.. hung.. well..err... Thran needs better lube, I think. And Rumil is very young, but awfully darling! YAY!
    I needed this after this weekend! Thanks!


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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on August 28, 2005
    Aaaargh!. What the hell is ' Ponding eles". What I meant to say was pounding elves. I hate it when my fingers get crossed on the keyboard. But while I am here again... Can't wait for your next update! :)
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on August 28, 2005
    Holly Hanna!. Those last two chapters had Romantic elves, Ponding eles. masturbating elves, eloping elves, tracking elves and one irate Haldir!... DarkDreamer, you are killing me!. What what a way to go.... ;) ;) ;)
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on August 28, 2005
    Haha! Elrond said 'eew!' I love it! The eew-ness is spreading!!!
    Great chapter by the way!
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  • From ANON - Aglarien on August 28, 2005
    *whispers softly in Dark's ear* Oh, Dark...this is your muse, Dark. *Yeah...muse...that's it* Orophin is lonely, Dark....love is all around him and he's all alone. Lindir is lonely, Dark....Elrond has Thranny, Cirdan has Elrohir, Erestor has Glorfindel, Elladan has Rumil, Haldir has sweet little Mel...and poor Lindir has no one....He and Orophin are all alone....so sad, Dark....must do something for poor lonely Orophin and Lindir....
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on August 28, 2005
    Wow... two wonderful chapters in such a short time, I must talk about both. I absolutely loved that even though Glrofindel went to the ladies to learn how to set up the atmosphere to his room you didn't describe it: that leaves it up to everyone's imagination as to how they might have wanted it. And the scene itself was so sweet and tender, simply beautiful.

    As for the other characters, I loved the banter between Elrond and Thranduil as he was being punished. It certainly sounds as if Elrond is very well endowed. The part where Thranduil suggested talking to Cirdan about their situation was simply fantastic, especially Elrond's reaction. The elders are very amusing because they still see the younger ones in the light of "this is my child, I don't care if they're past their majority, I really do not want to know what they are doing in bed!"

    And finally, I loved that it seemed as if everyone knew about the budding relationship between Elladan and Rumil other than Haldir, that must have been very tricky to keep such a thing secret from him.
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  • From ANON - Githoniel on August 27, 2005
    woohooo... Elronds "weapon" - who would have guessed he's hiding such a magnificent sword under his heavy robes- *snort*
    So, Mel is speaking nonsense while lovemaking, lol, oh, I would love to hear, eh read that!!!
    And I'm so curious about Rumil and Elladan!!!
    Great update my friend... please give me more of that, yummy!!!

    Githoniel
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 26, 2005
    :D
    Awwww. That was sweet! Well worth the wait, mellon!
    Please don't make us wait so long for more!
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on August 22, 2005
    I agree with Elrond, it's a smart idea to keep that bit of knowldge that Legolas and his lover have been together for a bit longer than they should be. And as for Rumil getting to be with Elledan for a while Whoo-hoo! ^_^ I hope things go well for him.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 22, 2005
    Yikes! So Erestor's sister seems alright, as long as she doesn't feel threatened. Heh... too funny for Gildor, asking to write a goodbye note to Legolas!!!
    And now Elladan and Rumil alone in the woods together? Hmmmm.... perhaps sending Glorfindel would have actually ensured them returning? ;)
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on August 22, 2005
    I finally had a chance to cath up wih my reading and have just devoured chapters 17 to 23. WOW!! Those were some plot twists!. Elladan loves Rumil... Cirdan and Elrohir are..ahem..perfectly suited for each other ( that line you wrote: " Elrohir smiled as he nodded, then smacked Cirdan across the face." had me in hysterics!. I could just see it for the endearing gesture it was meant to be, for two who like rough bed-play.. ). And then Erestor's sister... What a story, what happened to them. I can see her desire to protect her brother keeping her from fading, ot leaving Arda to heal her mind. And Legolas and...Gildor!. Ay! cannot wait for your next update... This is one hell of a tale, mellon nin. :)
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