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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - nikkiling on August 13, 2005
    Not fair! I was just coming back to review the last chapter, and the chapter before that which I somehow missed, and you've already posted again! You're too fast! You make me look bad. *grin*
    Wonderful chapter! You had me going through my mental list of elves there at the end, trying to figure out who was left single for Legolas... unless you're bringing in a newbie. Let's see... unless there is someone new coming in from Lorien... Lindir or Melpomaen?
    And I love the scene between Thranduil and Rondy. *snicker* And the poor guard! At least he seems to be enjoying himself!
    And of course, i can't wait to see more between Cirdan and Elrohir. I really love those two together!
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  • From ANON - Thalionwen on August 12, 2005
    My home has been under such ferocious thunder ( and lighting! ) storms for the last week that I just got a chance to catch up with my reading and writting!. And, whoo-hoo!!! I find 3 new chapters of your story to delight in. From Cirdan making his intentions know to Elrond, Elrohir whispering, Glorfindel scooping Erestor into the Hall of Fire; Erestor getting ALL drunk on Haven wine and then turning into a sexual firebrand, to Glorfindel re-claiming his sword... WOW!. Have I told you yet just how much I LOVE this story?! :) :) :)
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  • From Githoniel on August 10, 2005
    Woohoo... I think if I were Glorfindel, I would keep Erestor drunk... such a wicked rabbit. So, Erestor has a sister and she musn't know and .... (*still brooding*) YOU ARE SOOOOO CRUEL, YOU KNOW!!! ;-)
    Hugs
    Githoniel
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  • From HMica on August 10, 2005
    *blinks after reading the last two chapters* I would say that Erestor went from slightly toasted to flat-out baked! Wow, was he different thanks to the booze he downed so quickly. I do hope that he is feeling better soon, that way he can get even more flustered when he realizes what he did to Glorfindel. *laughs*
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 09, 2005
    Oh My! That wine is potent stuff! Poor Erestor! I imagine he's now DOUBLY mortified! And Glorfindel's probably a little sore! YIKES!
    Glori's sword, huh? Wonder why Elrond never said anything to Glorfindel about it? But then, maybe he thought it would be too hurtful to mention? *sigh*
    He managed that after four glasses?!?! Elven constitutions are amazing, aren't they? I only had a glass...maybe two... ;)
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  • From ANON - erviniae on August 09, 2005
    Dark!!
    I love this story! This chapter was great!!!! Ooo---love drunken Erestor!!!--wait till he remembers all he has said! I vote for humping Fin and
    Res!!! Can't wait for more!
    Hugs,
    Kat
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  • From Githoniel on August 09, 2005
    OK- forget my request about the wine. My friend said to me today, that I may love the elves, but behave like a dwarf... and all just because I drank a malt beer today!!!
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  • From Githoniel on August 09, 2005
    That was - wow! Your drunken Erestor was so great. Where can I get me some of this Haven wine??? But I would not want to be in Glorfindels place now. I hope he survives Erestors hang-over! So why is the advisor afraid of warriors? I will be brooding about that 'till your next update... Don't let me wait too long - I'm already chewing my fingernails!!!
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 09, 2005
    Hmmm...now I wonder what's up with Erestor all over again!?!?! Oh, he is gonna be MORTIFIED when he remembers what he said! "Hump like rabbits"??? Oh..the poor thing! He's never going to show his face in the Hall of Fires again! lol
    Ah...but look? He left a half a bottle of Cirdan's wine on the table... I'll just take that... and er... some of this fruit...and maybe a bit of cream.. and go and see what Celeborn's gotten off to....
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  • From ANON - Nikkiling on August 09, 2005
    Oooh! He's funny when he's drunk! And weapons?! Glorfindel had better step carefully!
    There you go again; just when I think things are all figured out, you throw in a new twist! What did happen to Erestor! Ack! You're such a tease! *grin*
    And thank you for the great compliments! Slapped you in the face, eh? Hmmm... I wonder if I can beat that.... *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - nikkiling on August 07, 2005
    yeah! I'm so happy Elrohir is trying to speak, although his tale is quite sad. Very interesting about the vocal cords... physical injury aggrivated by emotional pain and psychological influences perhaps? Ah, I love how you are always making me think. You do it so well! *grin* I think that's one of my favorite things about your stories.
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  • From ANON - Ocean_Soul on August 07, 2005
    Damn I was so sure that Elrohir and Elladan would have been lovers. I couldn't have never guessed that Elrohir and Cirdan would become lovers.
    Hmm...that leaves us one question: who will be with our dear Legolas? hmm everyone are taken except Elladan... ;))

    Aye I'm working my butt off.Luckily after tomorrow I have two days off and then I have to do 5 night shifts in a row.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 06, 2005
    Ah. So now we know what's happened to Elrohir. Guessed it was something like that. Poor 'roh. Or rather, poor anyone who can't read his hand speech fast enough!
    Yes, Elrond is a remarkable healer! I feel quite... refreshed. Hannon le for sending him! :D
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on August 06, 2005
    I am very impressed with the way in which you presented Elrohir's speachlessness. Many times, an author will end up using an idea that is often related to some severe emotinoal trauma or something similar. But this time, this made a great deal more sense. It would not have made much sense for Elrohir to have suffered some emotional trauma that didn't bother his twin. I'm not saying that the loss of their mother wasn't a traumaitic experience, but her rescue could easily have lead to something serious happening to her rescuers. I was very glad to see you use that route of explanation, and wonderfully well written.
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  • From ANON - Ertia on August 04, 2005
    Ah, Legolas and Elladan didn't give them a very hard time at all. I guess, as Thranduil mentioned, they've grown into quite the mature elves. So why IS Elrohir silent?
    Hurrry! I'm dying of curiousity...(is that even possible?) Oh dear, I think I need a healer! Oh, Lord Elrond?
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