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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - TopazKat on November 01, 2006
    ooh! I'm glad that Vel and Thron showed up to help Glorfindel and Erestor; although I would have thought that it would be Erestor that they were helping more than Glorfindel. And the small bit between Aglar hugging Mandos was just very sweet. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 28, 2006
    Oh wow. Poor Erestor, he seems so scared as to what Talkus may do with Glorion when he is older. And while it is very understandable, it's still very sad. I'm was glad to see that Glorfindel was able to get him out of there so that he could calm down some. Hopefully, he'll also be able to talk to him about gathering the stones for Torfindel's bonding circle.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 23, 2006
    Ha ha! I love Erestor's reaction and I can't say I blame him for being nervous that it will be Mandos to watch over his son's mating. On that note, I think it's really sweet that Taurath is courting Torfindel the Gondolian way.
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  • From ANON - Eon Kitty on October 15, 2006
    lol that was funny. poor haldir getting covered in puke.
    been really great so far although Tulkas wanting Glorion when he's older even tho he's still a baby is kind of lechy. carry on with the great story and don't stop with the funny chapters :)
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 14, 2006
    Yeah! There was an "eww", granted it was not the same kind of "eww", but still. And it was just funny having Haldir be the one to say it ^_^. Another wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 12, 2006
    Hee hee, yes, we must not disturb Erestor's quiet, it's a bad, bad, idea. ^_^ As always, I enjoyed the chapter very much. Want more ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on October 12, 2006
    Aye, idiot balrog, what was it thinking? we'll never know. Must have been suicidal one. *giggles*
    Erestor is just over adorable...
    Failed a math exam today... f*ck it... so really, thanks for uplaoding, saved my day (again)
    I'll be (as always) impatiently waiting...
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on October 11, 2006
    It's taking too long!! yes, I'm whining, see what you did?? you got me to whine! Happy now?
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  • From ANON - Blushing on October 09, 2006
    I am sorry that I can not reveiw every chapter but I have a lot on my mind:) Taurcalad and Thoniel must be the best most erotic and hot couple in the whole story so far!

    Can't wait to hear more about Elrond's new fashion trend!
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on October 08, 2006
    Why can't I keep him?? If I try to look extremely adorable, like a puppy, would you let me keep him??

    Aye, this upload came quick enough. Thank you very much. :D You have pleased me. Okay, I'll drop the act before you get mad (who am I fooling? I wanna get you mad! I might recieve another lef! :D)
    I love you for uploading today, You saved my day, which, by far has been crappy.

    Must be hart for Glorfindel, poor fellow, heh.

    13 hours... jai... not nice... well, I'll still be impatiently waiting :D


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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 07, 2006
    Ha ha! I love this. Little Glorion is obviously very strong willed indeed if he can scold a valar. And as for poor Glorfindel, I have to agree, I am not sure if he is cursed or not either. He probably really isn't, but it is certainly more amusing that way. As for Elrond's new wardrobe, they do indeed sound wonderful.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 06, 2006
    Hope you feel better soon. "Sucking into oblivion" I love it! that has to be one of the best lines you've come up with, right behind "eww". *laughs* I love it so much.
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on October 06, 2006
    You think that beeing spanked by Haldir would be somekind of punishment for me? Well, if THAT is what I get for pissing off an author, I'll GOT to do it more often! :D Bring it on!
    hee, Thoniel finally got it! :D good good...
    "I'll be as rough with you as I can without killing you" how sweet. Go go Taurath!
    I'll be patiently, no screw that, IMPATIENTLY waiting your next chap.

    BTW, I was having weird fun with your fics, you see, in my mothertongue Rumil means the-ugly-looking-ones-have and in one fic, his once called Rumin, whitch means the-most-ugly-looking-one. Nenu is a childis word for nose, like tummy for stomach. :D these are not the only ones whitch have a weird meaning in my motharlanguage, but I don't just now remember more. Aya, such a noble names our proud elves have! :D The most sad thing is, that I'm pathetic enough to spend half an hour laughing at their names... Gotta get life...

    In the mean while, I'll just gotta amuse myself with internet, and patiently... err... impatiently wait for your next update. Do update soon, and make me very happy! (and even if I didn't piss you of this time, I wouldn't mind you sending one of elves to spank me :D)
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on October 06, 2006
    Hey... where have you gone?? it's been.. what, 4 days without upload...
    thecap is funny btw x)
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  • From ANON - Marille on October 05, 2006
    Hope you are feeling better very soon. I have a bad cough and cold at the moment so I know how you feel, though I am glad it is not flu (which every second person around me seems to have.
    Your writing has not suffered in the slightest and it is still written with the same thought you have put into all other chapters.
    On that note ... Thoniel ... I would still be very worried. Taurcalad needs to understand that he may have one way of doing things but others have their own way. Just because 'his' clan done it does not mean it is the right way. And his way seems more like an animal rather then actual love. Passion is one thing but to have to have someone there to make sure you do not hurt your patner... Well I would be running. That's base dominating and not in the slightest anything to do with partnership. And Elves are meant to be more then just the physical, it's why they bond ... That is, unless the other person wanted it that way. But Thoniel, well even if he likes being taken care of, he would be better off letting a beast take his innocence. Least he wouldn't receive the degredation and possible harm from his new mate. *sigh* You have probably already thought of all this but for Thoniel, it just sounds all too brutal. He is too sweet and he will be nervous being his first time and to have to have someone else there, to have to plan ahead knowing he may get agressive ... Ouch.
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