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Reviews for The Fire Dance

By : DurOltha
  • From ANON - TopazKat on October 02, 2006
    Oh hon, I'm sorry you feel unwell, and I hope you are felling better soon. As for this chapter, it was delightful. I loved how cryptic Vel and Ron have become as they've aged, it's very amusing and I feel just a tad sorry for poor Thranduil who doesn't seem to have realized what he's gotten himself into, not that it isn't dreadfully amusing either, but still.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 27, 2006
    Poor Haldir, to so much want a child, it must be hard. But then again, perhaps his connection with his daughter is what he is feeling, 'cause now it seems as if she might be pregnant. Again the question comes to mind, what kind of a grandfather would Haldir be? Spoiling or strict? Or some weird combination of both. It's also sweet that Elrond just feels better in the dress, though I'm not sure why, but it's interesting.
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on September 27, 2006
    Khiii.. hehe, poor Haldir :D
    crossdressing Elrond just strucks me odd, but enyways....
    luv i luv it....
    Poor Thoniel, must be scared right now... :( youre mean...
    I'm late for my ridinglesson because I sit here and comment your awesome story, wait, did I say awesome, I ment anoying! It's anoying, because it is making me late from my hobbies, work and school! Aye, it should be illegal to write story that doesn't allow its reader to leave from computer!
    any ways, must hurry now, be sure to update soon my lovely author :)
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  • From ANON - Nessa Ar-Fieneil on September 27, 2006
    Haldir is feeling empty nest sypdrome and his daughter is pregnant
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  • From ANON - Blushing on September 27, 2006
    I too want Haldir to be with life! just so that he can say "I told you so!" if nothing else!

    Did Hal's daugther (can't spell her name:P) eat cookie dough too? Is that why she is sick?!

    Can't wait for Taurcalad to claim Thoniel!
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  • From ANON - Marille on September 26, 2006
    Ohh.. Haldir and Taurcalad really had a moment there. They seemed to understand each other very well and bring out what the other did not want to admit. And I would be nervous if I was Thoniel. Maybe someone needs to have a serious talk with Taurcalad and explain that love does not have to mean overpowering or posessing. Gentle can be as incredible, if not more meaningful.
    Elrond in his dress... Well I guess if it works, then why not? :-)It's not the cover that counts, it's the heart inside that does.

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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 26, 2006
    Ooh... food posioning... that sucks, but it makes sense. I hope Haldir eventually comes out of this and isn't too upset that he's not having an elfling. And poor Elrond, everyone needs to stop sneaking up on him like that, *giggles*.
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on September 25, 2006
    NAAAUUUU!! It was too short... *weeping*
    heh, just found your story, read all of it in one night :D
    awesome,entertaining ;D
    we want more!
    write pwees??
    I absolutely love Thoniel (did I spel that correctly?) and Taurcalad pairing :D
    Love it love it love it
    (and yes, if you haven't yet realised, I'm insane...)
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 21, 2006
    Oh dear... Haldir pregnant? oh this does not bode well, and yet also promises to be immensely amusing. I can't wait to see how this will play out.
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  • From ANON - Blushing on September 21, 2006
    "He has finally lost his mind" Yes I agree, that cookie dough mut have made him go all loony on them:D
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  • From ANON - Eon Kitty on September 21, 2006
    woot!! i love your story!! :-D
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  • From ANON - Marille on September 21, 2006
    Lol funny :-D Poor Mel though, Haldir will be paranoid from now on.

    Ty for the reply also. I know he is already taken but... well it played out good in my head and I can't help having a mix of 'naughty' and adventurous going with it.

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  • From ANON - sasalou on September 18, 2006
    Oh, thank you, thank you I am so grad you updated. I just can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Marille on September 13, 2006
    Sounds like you had a wonderful time and are now back full of energy :)

    Loved the new chapter though it seemed a bit odd that Tulkas could consider Glorion as a possible lover when the child calls him his third daddy. Very confusing for the child, to say the least ... I thought at first Tulkas had a soft spot for Erestor (his fiesty elf) and it was being shown with his attachment to Glorion ... As well as his unknown want for his own child showing without him realising.
    The interaction between them is very sweet though.
    What Glorfindel might think about Tulkas having a soft spot for Erestor ... As grown adults I am sure they would have worked something out.
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  • From ANON - TopazKat on September 13, 2006
    Welcome back. Hee, it's fun to see how long this going on and how wonderful each chapter is. I re-read the whole thing while you on hiatus and giggled every time I read that you were close to finishing. When it is finally done, I will be both sad and happy, and amazed. I could never write anything this long.

    Now, comments for this chapter. Glorion is simply adorable with Taulkas, but I have to agree with him, it might be very dangerous for him to take little Glorion as a lover with Erestor being his parent. I hope we also get to Torfindel's bonding circle soon, it would be fun.
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