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Reviews for Killing Beauty

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  • From ANON - moxie on August 04, 2005
    Wow. I am really sad. I can't believe Ashva died! at first I thought you were going to kill off Rumil. Or perhaps Atluf's death qualified as a "character death". Oh man, i'm sad. Did Ashva actually kill her mother or was it all for naught? I knew you said you were trying to finish the story but I had no idea it would be this abrupt! Now, when Ashva's spirot came to Haldir in his sleep and she said they would meet again, does that mean there will be a sequel...?
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 04, 2005
    How does this Kalan manage to bypass all three of the elves' heightened senses? Don't they smell him or hear him even if they can't see him? Makes me worry for them. More please.
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 03, 2005
    Hot.
    I wonder if she has bruises...?
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 03, 2005
    I have a bad feeling about this...oh no!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on August 02, 2005
    I am glad Haldir has found Ashva. Does her mother give lessons to people not in her family? I think I would like to know this skill in case I can find some elves. WEG More please.
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 01, 2005
    I love it! Haldir actually admitted emotion! And I LOVED the way in which you put it! "I don't want to fall in love with you..." Excellent. I also like how you intersperse Kalan and Mother and the Os preparing for vengance; makes it spookier.
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 01, 2005
    Don't worry - the angst isn't that bad. Good chapter - it made the story more full. Orophin really is quite naughty isn't he? I was a little confused by the last paragraph. Ashva caressed Haldir and not Orophin while they all slept together, right? I would be upset if I was Atluf as well. He genuinely loves Ashva whereas Haldir has feelings of possession for her but has never actually spoken about his real feelings for her. He's never even told her he cares for her - well, not in so many words. While it is obvious he cares deeply for her, that seems to be where it ends. Especially that comment in Chapter 26 about how Haldir only allows himself to be with his women until he discards them and then they are once again free game. It does seem, even though he doesn't seem to be able to admit it to himself, that he is slowly falling for her. He seems to have abandoned all his other women and be consumed with thoughts of Ashva. I love how independent she is; that she left even though she loved him because it was something she needed to do for herself- good move. Anyways, thanks for writing this story and thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - moxie on July 30, 2005
    lovely
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 29, 2005
    So, the brothers are off on a dangerous journey but some human female gets really lucky with Rumil and Orophin. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - moxie on July 27, 2005
    *gasp*
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  • From ANON - moxie on July 27, 2005
    Thank you!!! The additions are GREAT and much appreciated.
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  • From ANON - WorshipAllElves on July 26, 2005
    I usually don't read Het but this story looked interesting so I started reading it. I was not disappointed!! This story was very entertaining. It had everything a good story needs...adventure, humor and much smuttiness. Loved your portrayal of Haldir...brave, arrogant, beautiful, funny and even tender at times. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks!!
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  • From ANON - moxie on July 26, 2005
    yay! Definitely more smut in chapter 21 and to follow please!
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  • From ANON - moxie on July 26, 2005
    oh god, I hope she's safe! what if the Osman get to her! Ack! Awful! Maybe now that she's gone Haldir will realize his true feelings for her and get rid of/phase out his hussies.
    thank you updating so soon! yay!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on July 26, 2005
    Is Haldir going to keep this wild woman? More soon please.
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