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Reviews for The secret life

By : Githoniel
  • From Rokkis on October 27, 2009
    Eh.. though the idea is nice enough and the dialogue is rather well written, that's the problem. This is ONLY dialogue, it's like reading a play instead of story. There are no true environmental descriptions at all!
    You should definitely consider rewriting this

    Cheers!
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  • From balrog on November 27, 2008
    I love this story. It wasnice to see the twins bound. I don't think I read about them biinding before. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - HHS on November 09, 2005
    Haldir did remember his promise.THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!
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  • From ANON - attirb on November 08, 2005
    for an advisor erestor acts very stupid and childish. he is taught in politics and secrency so he should know that glorofindel couldn't go against the orders and wishes of lord elrond or of the king of greenwood.
    now i go back to the story.
    liked it much so far :-)
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  • From ANON - Carinito on November 08, 2005
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. *tear* a beautiful ending my bunny! I absolutely LOVE the ending. So CUTE!!
    *tear* it’s over but it was nice while it lasted! You did Sarik an honor. Though many of the readers, i’m sure, would have loved to see him ... die a VERY painful death.... I liked his ending. You redeemed him. ^-^
    *grin* Oh the twin love and the rest ended lovely!
    I also like the ending conversation with Haldir and Legolas. Hush hush! hehe. Great job love!!!
    All in all.... *sniff and smile* :) hehe
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  • From ANON - Carinito on October 25, 2005
    ..............O_O............ Oh my love!!!! I ADORE YOU!!! my heart was pumping through out reading! It was... is my favorite chapter!
    ahhhhhhhhh... *heart attack*..... *breathe*... *breathe*.... T-T I love you!!!! ....I live for cliffies! Yours are always a thrill!
    ^-^ protect you I will! *shift eyes*... hmmm who is a threat?.... o_o Found one!! *grabs elven rope* ^-^ be right back love!.... Woah... that one just didn’t want to go down! hehe. I’ll always be with you! hehe. And update when you can!... no threats from anyone!
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  • From ANON - Cerelen on October 22, 2005
    Oh my god! Here it come! the true review!

    *close eyes*

    oiiii my poor little prince charming!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 16, 2005
    you have to update soonest!!!! *whines*

    i bet its evil sarik again!
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  • From ANON - HHS on October 15, 2005
    This new look of AFF.net is really different.Anyway,one guess as to who hit Legolas?Bastard!!!
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  • From ANON - HHS on October 01, 2005
    Bastard Sarik!I hope that Haldir gives him a lesson that he won't ever forget.
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  • From ANON - IciaJ on September 30, 2005
    Love the story. Please write more :)
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  • From ANON - Carinito on September 30, 2005
    No crying in this chapter... just tearing eyes... Oh that was sweet and yummy! I loved the way you began it. Reminded me of myself... people always scare me by jumping or screaming behind me. I freak out! knees shake and everything.... The wedding!!! oooo... am I invited? :)... Oh that Sarik and Istari... We should boil them in a ocean of vinegar!... hehe. Oh I love the twins they’re so cute!... Haldir’s dream is such a chill! My heart wrenched for him when he ‘finally’ found out the truth. This reminds me of the little thing girls do with a flower... “He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me...” Only it’s... “Will he go? Or not. Will he go? or not...” Oh I could just die!... But I will miss the update so I won’t! ^-^ Love and kisses lovely!
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  • From ANON - Alu_Fiend on September 30, 2005
    *grabs authoress by her shoulders and shakes her violently* update, update, GODDAMMYOUUPDATE!!!!..ehhh...now *lets go of the authoress* as you'd noticed i like your fic a lot, and just can wait for next chappie, and if you shall not update, i'll hunt you down, i swear ;] if you'd ever seen or read King's "Misery" you know what I have in mind ;]
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  • From ANON - DarkDreamer on September 29, 2005
    Awwww thanks! So now I must say....Go Haldir Go!!!!!

    Wonderful update! Im hopeing for more soon :)~

    ~DarkDreamer
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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 29, 2005
    YAY for Galadriel!!
    BOOOO for Sarik. I'm gonna kill him. Can I kill him? Or is that Haldir's job? *releases Hal* GO GET 'EM!

    He's such a good Elf, really. Hmmm... Gondolin binding traditions, eh?
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