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Reviews for Mael-Gul

By : Aislynn
  • From Lee777 on April 03, 2008
    Eeeee, you did it! Another chapter!

    *So lovely!* *So happy!*

    Can't wait to see what happens now...
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  • From ANON - miscanthus on March 15, 2008
    Great! I was afraid you dropped the story ....but we're finally in the golden wood with nasty Haldir! Please continue !!!!
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  • From BrucesGirl on November 26, 2007
    Well, I think if I were to sit down and write a review for every chapter, I'd end up writing a novel myself, and since I'm stuck on my own projects, let's just do this one, shall we? XD I just want to say first and foremost what a wonderment it is to have an author such as yourself publishing their works on AFF! You could easily do personal works that would probably make Ann Rice blush at her own inadequacy.

    But, let's just start at the beginning.

    First off, it's so wonderful to have something original. I realize that your story was based on the others, but I have never seen anything the like of your style or the blatant hard work and effort you put into your story. Your originality is stunning. You see very deeply into the characters as you would have them in your world, and I appreciate that so much. I hate reading stories where the characters have the depth of a matchbox. I can tell you take the time to analyze your characters, and that adds to the unique quality of your stunning work.

    Secondly, I would just like to say that I congratulate you on making an AU where the characters are still in character. I can red this story, compare to book, movie verse alike, and still see it in my head. Thank god for you and your ability to keep them in character. Horribly out of character stories annoy me and generally incur my very not-so-nice critique.

    Finally, I want you to know that I see the hard work you put into this. The references. The memory. The Elvin that you painstakingly incorporate. I'm just awed by your ability to mix the movie, the books, and the taste of your own world to make a story that is not only filled with smutty, hardcore goodness, but also is believable and makes some of us wish it were true canon.

    But then, Tolkien would roll over in his grave.

    You are amazing. Thank you so much for the piece of incredible work. I look forward to your next update. It's been a pleasure reading this far.

    Sincerely,

    ♥ BrucesGirl ♥
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 30, 2007
    I DEMAND THAT YOU FINISH THIS STORY AT ONCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Pleeeaaase?
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 29, 2007
    You know I love romance and stuff but I would REALLY like a fight so Legolas
    show Boromier just how good a fighter he really is.
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 29, 2007
    ~end of ch.39~

    Purhaps Aragorn has finally come to his senses. I do hope that
    he does find a way to break the Mael-Gul.
    HE HAD BETTER!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 28, 2007
    Is there some particular reason Boromier is trying to get to know Legolas?

    (i'll probably never get an answer but i felt i needed to voice(not literally) my thoughts.)
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 28, 2007
    ~end of ch. 17~

    I fear for Legolas.
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 28, 2007
    ~end of ch. 16~

    *rips Aragorn to shreds and sits fuming quietly*
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 28, 2007
    ~just finished ch.15~

    I couldn't even read all of that! *shivers*
    I hate Aragorn. He doesn't even seem to care about how
    much pain he just put Legolas through! If I were Legolas,
    I would hate him SO much! I hope they find a way to remove
    the Mael-Gul from Legolas. If so, I would not be sad to see
    Legolas leave Aragorn. He'd be so upset. It would be some
    punishment for him, though not enough in for me.
    Aside from that disturbing chapter the story has been very good.
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  • From ANON - Dark Angel on October 28, 2007
    I officially hate Elrond. To inslave one as noble as Legolas....
    I'm not to fond of the painful bedtime habbits Aragorn has but oh well.
    At least the storys pretty good.:)


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  • From Aislynn on October 20, 2007
    In the last chapter (chapter 50), you put in the line: "'Fool of a Tuck! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!'". Pippins last name is Took, not Tuck. Just be careful of that.
    Anyway, Keep up the good work.

    o_O Well, thank you! I totally overlooked that, and I cannot believe I missed it, now! *blushes* Fixed it, now, and will have to go and do so at four other archives...

    Thank you for noticing and mentioning, and also thank you for the praise! I really appreciate it! :) -- Aislynn
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  • From Epsilon on October 20, 2007
    Wow, you've done a great job with this, keeping to the storyline while adding a completely new aspect. Not easy to do.
    I've just got to point out one thing, just a nitpick. In the last chapter (chapter 50), you put in the line: "'Fool of a Tuck! Throw yourself in next time and rid us of your stupidity!'". Pippins last name is Took, not Tuck. Just be careful of that.
    Anyway, Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    Thank you so much for writing some more!
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  • From ANON - Omnni on September 23, 2007
    Hope there will be more soon.
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