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Reviews for Hide and Seek

By : scotsrock
  • From ANON - angel on September 11, 2005
    Totally cool! I loved it. So, Billy found out that Dom is the boy fom his past. I wonder what he's going to do now. I also wonder what Dom's going to think when he remembers that Billy was there the night Dom's brother was killed. Hurry up and update because I don't think I can wait! :)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 06, 2005
    NO! You can't leave it there! You evil, EVIL person. Just kidding. The story is still as intense as ever. I hope Dom's ok. Who was the guy that shot him? I hope Billy can escape from where he's being kept so he can save Dom. Update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on August 16, 2005
    Great chapter! I'm glad that Dom is finally going to find out all about his past. I hope it doesn't cause him too much pain. And then maybe he can save Billy. I just hope Billy will be alright until then. Can't wait til the next chapter! :)
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  • From Tarlwen on August 14, 2005
    Hi there, just found this story. A really interesting setting you've developed there! Love Billy's accent by the way. I wonder what Billy has to do with Dom's past and what Dom will remember if he stopps taking the pills. Your dialogue is also very good, without any awkward stumbling and such things. Please update soon, you've got me really interested!
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  • From ANON - angel on August 08, 2005
    this story is getting more mysterious by the minute. i love it! i wonder what dom's dreams really mean. and i wonder why billy is acting so wierd. who could that be at the door. guess i'll have to wait and see. update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - angel on July 31, 2005
    pretty good so far. i wonder what dom's dreams mean. and i want to know why billy was acting so strange. guess i'll just have to wait and see. update soon. :)
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