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Reviews for Golden letters.

By : fishyz
  • From ANON - ramie on November 19, 2005
    Sigh... my eyes sting with tears, and my heart feels like it's going to leak - to burst, but not quite that... Had I been in that situation I might just have followed my beloved, I think... but I cannot know.
    You write so well! You truly love the two Elves - it is clear to me. You make their love so strong that it is almost hurting...
    Wow.

    I love you

    your devoted fan
    ramie
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  • From ANON - RoseGarden on September 24, 2005
    A minute ago I was crying my eyes out laughing at some stupid TV show, now I'm crying for a completely different reason. I was having such a kick ass day and now I'm all sad and weepy. You so ruin my day Fishy. Beautifully done.
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  • From ANON - kalima on September 22, 2005
    So how did he die? Are we talking the first time he died?? Or a second?? The plot (or rather, the lack thereof) if maddening. Nicely done, though, the grief seemed very real. I keep thinking how nice for elves, who KNOW that they will see a loved one again, even if it takes a long time.

    Uh, is it all right if I mention you mean "lose" and "losing" and not "loose" and "loosing"? You let loose a horse, but you lose your keys. You are losing your mind (well, I am losing mine), but "loosing" would take a tricky and rare construction, such as, well, now that I think about it, I can't think of any use for "loosing."
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  • From ANON - Ertia on September 21, 2005
    Wow.
    Well done.
    okay... I'm crying now. Good work! Bonus points for making me cry.
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  • From DurOltha on September 21, 2005
    Awww now dang it Fishyz I told myself I was not going to cry and then you wrote this part....

    ((I wrapped your tunic sleeves about me, imagining they were you arms, and nearly screamed
    when I realised that it was loosing your scent))

    Now see, that aint fair...now my nose is all stuffed.
    Wonderful, wonderful "Letters"

    ~DarkDreamer

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  • From ANON - Kate on September 20, 2005
    oh, that was sad... You made me cry:)
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