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Reviews for Through The Ages

By : Mawgy

From ANON - digdigil on December 13, 2005
This story is a fascinating look at bullying which is sadly a truth that we must deal with even today. I love the way that you combine cruelty with tenderness and you really don't hold back on showing how horrible young boys can be to each other. I have to admit that I sneaked a look ahead to the NC-17 chapter and was blown away with how you handled that. Wow. It was such a refreshing take on Glorfindel as well. We are so used to seeing him as a blond-haired love God. Not that I don't mind reading about him that way, but your Glorfindel is not only hott but baad as well. Hotly cruel. Very compelling story, Mawgy!
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From ANON - Suzie on December 12, 2005
I like this story so much. Poor Erestor though..he must be so scared. I liked the way that Glorfindel let Erestor wipe off his tears before facing the crowd. I just hope that he isn't too mean. I mean..uurrrrr...I just want him to really care about Erestor. It's going to be so sad for Erestor when he goes to Glorfindel's room. But I can't wait for the next chaper.
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From ANON - Lyon's Own on December 12, 2005
If it'll get you to post faster then foot rubs and calf massages abound! Oh the teasing!!! Footrubs yes but we're revoking the fridge!
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From ANON - Eredhien on December 12, 2005
I'm sorry about the reviews, but hopefully everything will be alright now. I supose I don't need to say that I'm waiting for the next chapter to be posted, because I'm dying to know what's gonna happen between Erestor and Glorfindel and I really want to read about that first encounter. I'm anxious...
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From ANON - Crispin on December 12, 2005
Damn , That was an awful tease !! Had me going there for a minute. Here I am thinking , Oh boy this is it ! And bam TBC . I'll be chomping at the bit till Thursday.
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From ANON - zenah on December 12, 2005
hello, sorry about your feet. i hope that you are feeling better, i got mad at you because it was such a short chapter, like i told you longer chapters......please i wait a whole week for these and when it comes, i read it in a less of a minuete, well bye and good luck.please update soon :)
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From DurOltha on December 12, 2005
Oooo...short sweet and to the point...plus its a tease chap! You naughty naughty author! (Hug)
And yes, I cut and paste my reviews when someone posts their stuff multiple places, I do this becouse of whipes and glitches and that way you know exatly what what said. And I say...more soon my friend! *Snort* Oh, and btw, I sent my dog out and he found your feet, as soon as we get them superglued back on, I would be more then happy to rub them for you! :)
~DarkDreamer
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From ANON - Ari on December 12, 2005
O_O... I sense some pervi-ness in Glorfindel... Then again, he's always been a horny man! >__
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From ANON - Eredhien on November 28, 2005
A prize, yes, of course you deserve a wonderful prize for this chapter. This chapter was full of deception, I mean everybody has been using the others, of course that... woman was the worst, but now I wonder how is Erestor gonna take this change, because he's now reaching his majority and he has stopped acting afraid around Glorfindel, beside his heart has been broken and that surely will make him different, the question is how different. Dear Glorfindel, he was Erestor knight, he rescued him from a horrible fate with that woman, but his metods are always so dramatic; anyway I love the milk episode, how wonderful idea, pour milk, make him unconscious and then carry him to bed... very lovely.
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From DurOltha on November 28, 2005
Oh-ho! That was a wonderful update! Glorfindel was so...so...Ooo...and I knew I didnt like her for some reason...and Erestor being all stiff and mono at the end...Excellent! Eagerly awaiting more!

~DarkDreamer
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From ANON - Lyon's Own on November 28, 2005
Nope the boy is not too bright...put manipulative, scheming, ambitious, elleth with a penchant for information gathering and trading that info for her benefit into court service where she'll have the uh...ear...of not just one but of any lord or lady in want of an enticing sex partner??? yeah ooookay...dumba**!! So all-knowing one, we may see more of the faithless wench after all huh? oh joy! But you did remove her from the immediate proceedings so I suppose it is only fair and honourable that we release the fridge--for now!! :P

I loved this chapter, the length was great thank you! Though I'm battling with that sick, fluttery stomach feeling--you know the one you get just before the axe murderer shows up on screen and hacks the partially nude heroine to death...oi! How many days 'til the maturation ceremony??? You played with lots of ideas in this one. It's great that Silindrical throws out the kind of description of Fin that we're-uh...i'm-hoping to see--'brave, truthful, sincere and handsome beyond compare' notice she didn't say smart! heh heh. so far he's been sincere and truthful only about expressing his appetites and brave?? hmmm...that's arguable. At once, I want to applaud her observation, pleased with his development, and fight the chill of dread that reminds me the observations were made by a liar who hopes to use honeyed words to solidify her social position. So is it a "true" statement of how Fin is progressing? Maybe maybe not---after all didn't she use a smiliar line on Erestor who she obviously does not think brave or handsome (stooopid cow!! grrrr!!!!! is it too late to put her to death?)

I also liked the "hey buddy I'm just looking out for you" spin Fin tries to throw on at the end of this chapter...ah yes, remind our dearest counsellor-to-be that *she* was using him....heh...and what his plans are just so very altruistic and based in a growing sense of love and devotion??? yeah right! Poor Erestor is so primed now--he's emotionally wide open--his option of marital protection is gone--even if he'd been able to overlook Silindrical's betrayal the ink was dry already, he's hurting and reeling with the way his whole perspective of fidelity has been upended and Fin is just so slick to be stepping in with his oh-so supportive self. He's still not worthy--hrmph (but uh...he might just be getting there...)

Oh and having her voice that it is Erestor who is one who's dishonest and plying false hope was brilliantly done as not only is she a commoner seeking advancement in a way that is socially acceptable (being Fin's or any Lord's whore is of course okay, but the idea that she'd actually bond with a noble is funny--stoopid cow), but it reminds us that it's more than just the nobility eyeing Erestor's professional success with uncommon interest. Ahhhhhhhh...the plot thickens--and dammit we have to wait 'til next week for more...waaaahh!!!! *note the boo-boo lip*

Ummm, oh yeah....so....it was HUGE huh? Did they have the glow-in-the-dark, purple nubby one too? That one is uh...highly recommended :D!!!!

Btw--I just have to say for the first time ever...I actually like Mondays now :D hmm...wonder why that is--hee hee. Though I wouldn't be adverse to liking Wednesdays in addition...hint hint :D
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From ANON - zenah on November 28, 2005
wow, this story is amazing. please, pleaseeee update soon. i�m waiting pactiently and i hope that you will update very soon and i promise that i will review as soon as you update, poor erestor, my heart is suffering for him and glorfindel is making me so angry, i hope that they will be together very soon and do not make me wait so much, please?
that girl i hope that she dies, she�s such a slut, fucking whore. i hope she dies, fuuuuck heeer!!!!!!!
bye, see ya in the next story.
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From ANON - Ari on November 22, 2005
*Whistles innocently* Fine, fineeee... Glorfindel has never been good at this "wooing" thing before. I mean, lookit him! He's harassing poor 'restor! T__T... Oh well. Glorfindel has never been the brightest nut in the tree, anyways. That really was a short chapter, but it made sense... Looks like Glorfindel is looking this up, yah? *Waggles eyebrows and nudges you* "Male/male bonking books, if you please" =3 That's Glorfindel for yah, blunt and to the point, never embarassed at his actions at all.

o_o... Though I am sorta shifty about how Glorfindel got all that information about 'restor...

~Ari

YES, UPDATE, YEEEESSS!
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From ANON - Eredhien on November 21, 2005
I like the chapter (well it's obvious by now that I like when Erestor and Glorfindel are together, but that's beside the point), but it was too short, I hope for a longer one, with lots of Glorfindel (the elf knows how to make Erestor nervous! ) and Erestor and no elleths around, that would be so wonderful. (I have nothing against elleths, I mean I'm one, but I really don't like them around them) Anyway I can do nothing else but hope you could post another chapter sooner.
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From ANON - Lyon\'s Own on November 21, 2005
**Always** worth the wait! I love the sexy bad boy of this chapter, eh he's still a prick but at least Erestor isn't overly molested plus steamy library scenes are always a good thing in my book. Of course...it -was- too damn short *sigh* s'okay you will make it up to us right? *bats eyelashes* cause you know it's hard to enjoy cookies without milk, your fans may have to take the fridge hostage....hmm...

And yeah, he's hard to resist I know...In Fin's place I'd probably be an obsessive stalker psycho too faced with yummy Erestorness. Then again I know where Erestor is coming from as I had this same sort of problem in a library once-course my uh ??suitor?? wasn't a devilishly handsome elf, if he had been well things probably would've ended differently. As it is Erestor would probably be beheaded if he clobbered Glorfindel over the head with a chair but I have to say the sense of vindication is highly rewarding--lovely snapping sounds, straining and splintering wood, groaning boy on the floor... Eh-maybe he'll get his chance at straining wood and groaning boy on the floor-heh heh-soon, who knows? Oh yeah I forgot *you* do :p! Well all-knowing one thanks for a great chapter. I liked it lots and lots (even if it was a bit short *pouts*). Ummm...and uh...thanks for sharing about the nipple vibrators I guess??? eh and people say slash serves no purpose, didn't we all just learn something rather...um...interesting. hee hee!

Onward to next week (and more story!!) YAY!!! :D cause everyone has a price hmm....stupid elleth and stupid elleth's daddy--hrmph--add my vote to the 'we don't like her' tally love the story though ;D
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