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Reviews for True Bow (Cuthenin)

By : fremmet

From ANON - TopazKat on July 09, 2006
I thought that the way Thranduil reacted to the news of his son's feelings was perfectly logical and incredibly believable given the storyline and background of the story you have written. It was still very hard to read at points simply because the emotions written were so raw and very painful. Beautifully written, as always.
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From ANON - TopazKat on June 22, 2006
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, took me a bit to get caught up. I am, as always very impressed with your writing. In reading the last chapter, I wanted to reach in and smack the advisor, so glad was I when Glorfindel finally did. Furthermore, the sweet surprise in finding another ally for Legolas is wonderful and I can't wait to see what his character adds to the drama.
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From ANON - Nim on June 11, 2006
Another great chapter - all the more so because of the many revelations! But now that Galion has revealed his intentions, does he really think badly of Thranduil and Lhoss, or was that just part of the ruse?

I am confused by one thing. Galion says to Glorfindel, "As Faer Hebron, you cannot help but strive to prevent that." This is the first time Galion calls Glorfindel Faer Hebron. And so far, Glorfindel had not revealed himself to be Faer Hebron, no matter what Galion thinks! Yet Glorfindel does not react when Galion calls him that, not even inwardly? And when Glorfindel doesn't deny being Faer Hebron, shouldn't Galion have made note of this, at least a mental note?

As for including more of Galdor and Thranduil's talk about same-sex relationships, I think you have already covered the subject well. But since I don't know what you have cut, it's hard for me to say whether you should add it back in another chapter.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Nim
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From ANON - Yanic on June 03, 2006
Oh goodness! An update! And the plot thickens.... They should probably fess up to Daddy, make things easier in the long run. But then where's the fun in that? Lovely as usual!
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From ANON - Kalima on January 25, 2006
I've just read ch. 1, and I like your story very much. (I saw it recommended by an author I know and respect.) Beyond the thanks for writing, I might mention that I was puzzled that Legolas would leave his last arrows stuck in the 50 orcs he slew. He knew they were all dead, or so you heavily imply when he speaks of it to Glorfindel at the ford. That group of orcs attacked him after he'd already lost his other three companions. What if another troup of orcs were to attack before he got to Imladris? And sure ly it takes time to make an arrow. Would one retrieve them even if just for the arrows themselves?

I'll read on, of course, I'm enjoying it.
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From ANON - Yanic on January 16, 2006
Wow I didn't see that one coming! They're going to Mirkwood! Not that I don't like it, because in all honesty I can't wait for Glorfindel to meet the in-laws. And now there are falcons and battles and kisses! Yes! The kiss! Finally they're getting somewhere, although if I were Legolas I'd have thrown Galdor in a river and had my wicked way with Glorfindel a long time ago. I can't wait to see more wood-elves I love the differences in culture that you have created and i can't wait for the interactions!
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From ANON - JastaElf on January 16, 2006
I could have sworn I left a review for your previous chapter, but I don't see it... :-( I guess it didn't take? Frack.... Ah well, anyway, I am coming at last to tell you this story is so absolutely superb, the characterizations are brilliant, the prose excellent--and I flat-out love the theology behind it all, and the intensely rich background you have created. GOD I hope Thranduil loves his magnificent son.... :-)

Your writing style reminds me of another writer whose stuff I adore--narcolinde (e.robey) who is just brilliant. :-)

I've been reading all along and just enjoying this enormously. I feel so badly for poor Legolas and his burdens... and now the universe seems to be conspiring to keep him and his beloved Glorfindel from, umm, enjoying each other's company... even a bird! LOL! Just lovely... life is in the details, and it is wonderful to see such close attention paid to such things.

I am glad Anarien recommended this tale to all of us over at RMH; and I hope you will get the reviews you deserve, for they are indeed life's blood to a writer! Thank you for sharing your brilliant work with us all!

Now I'm going to leave a review at ff.net as well.... :-)
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From ANON - Daphne on January 16, 2006
Me, again, Fred. I had an epiphany at about 11:30 last night. I misspelled seamlessly! I have an exteme dislike for misspellings, being that I'm a court reporter and have to proofread thousands of pages a year. So please forgive me. (bg) Don't you just hate it when those lightbulb moments hit you when you're about to fall asleep?
Later.
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From ANON - TopazKat on January 16, 2006
Another wonderful chapter with even more details and description of the religion you have worked so hard on. Reading it can be a little confusing at times, but that might because I have no real personal reference point for such a deep belief. I applaud you for having the courage to keep working at it. I must also say that I loved the small exchanges between Glorfindel and Legolas with Galdor in the background acting as chaperone, they were very amusing; espceially the last one. Having a discussion of "who will be on top" after just surviving a scrimage was a wonderful way to release the tension.
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From ANON - Rivergirl on January 15, 2006
Fred,

Anarien mentioned on a ML that you may be getting a bit blue because of a lack of reviews. Anyway, thought I would pop over and let you know that I am still really loving this story. I will admit I got a little trifle confused in the beginning of this chapter about who was going where. But then I got the idea and things were good. i really liked Legolas's taunting of the orcs and i liked the messenger bird. That was cool. And now diverting off to elf-battles. Yay! Plus, the sexual tension between Glorfindel and Legolas is so thick you can taste it. And I just love how Legolas is now a frustrated virgin with the promised land in sight but he isn't allowed in yet. Poor baby. And now even the bird is a chaperone. *chuckle*

Anyway, thought you would like to now that I have this fic bookmarked and check just about every single day for updates. So believe me when i say I am enjoying it. I stumbled over it late in the game, but am happy to have finally made it.

Take care and keep your chin up,

Rivergirl
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From ANON - Daphne on January 15, 2006
Hiya, Fred
I'm getting redundant in my reviews, but he last two chapter were wonderful. I am consistently amazed at your depth of research and your ability to weave the story so seemlessly. The action seems to be heating up a bit -- fighting wise, that is. Looking forward to seeing Legolas and his family interact over the turn of events in Imladris.
Hope all is well with you.
Take Care, Daphne
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From ANON - Kitty on January 15, 2006
I love this story and how it varies from the most common scenarios used by others.

You have gave thoughful insight into the culture in which Legolas adheres to but are able to show that there are some aspects that others such as Glorfindel do not agree with, as all cultures and beliefs in todays world are viewed.
It also lovely to see that Glorfindel will of course tolerate and respect this for Legolas though.

Can't wait for more, in particular Tharnduils reaction and to gain more insight into how Legolas is treated by his peolpe and sibling.
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From ANON - Kimmy on January 14, 2006
Again, good ^-^... I liked the ending very much ;D........ although I must admidt I've forgot which places it is I find somewhat confusing 0_o.....but I think it's sometimes when things are explained that I have tendences to become lost; as when the cuture about the people Legolas belongs are explained, i think I got a little lost there......I was also wondering how much of that cuture and theire traditions you've come up with yourself? coz it seems really thought through to me.... or if it is some really cuture from somewhere???
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From ANON - TopazKat on January 04, 2006
Another wonderful chapter. I loved the discussion between Glorfindel and Arwen as well as the later discussion when Legolas, Elrond, and Galdor arrived. I have enjoyed how you take some very important issues and continue to revisit them rather than talking about them once and setting them aside. I do have a bit of constructive criticism for you regarding the format: there was no real clear indication of when we were shifting from the talks and play before the ceremony in the previous chapter to afterwards. The spacing had been the same throughout. The only thing that I would suggest is that when/if you do another chapter that will have two different time periods in it, to separate them with a clear marker. It didn't detract from the chapter overall, but it is a little confusing at first.
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From ANON - Yanic on January 03, 2006
Damn it Galdor! They were finally making some progress and then you go and interupt. Seriously, F.E., I think they need some alone time. LOL. I really liked the back story, it cleared it up some. But I really liked your take on the relationship between Arwen and Glorfindel. I'd never thought about it that way, but it really makes sense. Both would be alienated because of who they were, it would only male sense that they would seek each other. Great job, can't wait for more!
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