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Reviews for To feel good.

By : fishyz
  • From Kuragari75 on September 16, 2007
    ok, I know you may get sick of hearing from me... but all of your stories... every single one is amazing. You capture the brunt of human emotion so well, it makes me want to cry, laugh, scream... everything with them. I can't tell you enough how much I love reading your stuff. It's so refreshing to find such amazing talent. You are and incredible writer and I hope you have a few more in you for the future. ^^
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  • From ANON - ramie on November 19, 2005
    Alright... I'm actually sobbing right now...*sighing and drying my eyes*
    That was so... brutal... mean... animalistic and yet beautiful as it is rarely seen.

    I love it
    I love you

    your devoted fan
    ramie
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  • From ANON - Lily on November 11, 2005
    hELLO, HELLO!!! IT'S ME AGAIN AND I JUST WANT TO THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND REPLY TO MY PREVIOUS REVIEW, AS ALWAYS I KEEP READIN' EVERY BEAUTIFUL TALE YOU HAVE TO TELL NO MATTER IF IT'S SWEET AND MELLOW OR HOT AND SEXY, I ALWAYS LOVE'EM!!!
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  • From ANON - Kalima on November 09, 2005
    Oh, I think this is one of your better ones. At first it was totally confusing, but the complexities you have in it later are very, very fine. Very risky, too -- shows your growing maturity as a writer, I'd say. You use some harsh sentiments and actions to bring new depth to the characters and situation.

    You need to change this line: " . . . and when you were dead upon my finger, every day since our parting!”

    It brings to mind a pretty weird picture ... to be dead upon someone's finger.

    Again, thanks for writing.
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