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Reviews for One Good Turn

By : nuwing
  • From nuwing on December 28, 2005
    Hi Lianna,

    Thanks for giving this one a chance, even though it *is* a bit different!

    I have to admit that I prefer my P3 elves, too - I just couldn't get them to cooperate with the Slashy Santa request! **grin**

    **hugs**
    Minuial ;)
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  • From ANON - Blaise on December 27, 2005
    Who knew Elladan had such a filthy mouth? Elrond had better get the soap and wash that word right out of his son's vocabulary! Ha Ha Ha! These certainly weren't your typical 3 princes and you know what...that's Okay! What's a little gratutitous violence and mindless sex (or is it mindless violence and gratuitous sex? ) between friends. All I know is my three favorite elves had hot sex...so I'm happy. What a little wanton tease Legolas was! And the twins were certainly quite the aggressive pair! Well, I guess it's Merry Christmas to me (compliments of you)!

    On a more serious note, I have to tell you that your descriptive writing just really struck a chord in me this story, especially the simile "White knives flashed like starlight on water as he spun, his face set in fierce concentration, his hair now streaked dark with blood." It just stuck in my memory. I always appreciate your talent as a writer but for some reason your descriptions just jumped off the page at me this time. Your adjectives, verbs, and just general word choice brought vivid images to my mind. Thanks for always providing such high quality writing as well as interesting and entertaining plots.
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  • From ANON - Lianna on December 27, 2005
    Well, that was -- er -- intense. And perhaps realistic, since some guys probably would react to the adrenalin rush of combat in that way. Besides, Cocky!Legolas was just asking for it. And he knew it.

    I still prefer the more considerate and thoughtful (yet no less erotic) trio of Princes Three, though.
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  • From ANON - Sangel on December 26, 2005
    ...deserves another! LOL. I'd like to see you expand a little more on this. (This isn't part of your princes 3 series, is it.) Perhaps go back to their first meeting... LOL. I wonder that Legolas' elves didn't come running back upon hearing the howling.
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