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Reviews for The Probability Factor

By : jesuiscanadien
  • From dornons on June 13, 2007
    Well done! I have loved this from the moment I read it and you have ended it beautifully!!!! I look forward to more from you. Keep up the good writing.
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  • From mthorsta on June 13, 2007
    I just LOVE your story! I found it a while back, and have read it twice (I have been meaning to review for awhile now). It was a "feel good" story; a modern-day fairy tale don't we all wish we could live? Your characters were very likable; I was able to easily connect with them. I enjoyed the dynamic between Haldir and Susan from being ackward strangers to being romantically involved; and Alistair was a hoot. I laughed; I cried. It was just wonderful. I have visited Vancouver a couple times, and have been to some of the places you described; it was fun to "revisit" them. Thank you for sharing this story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Morgan on January 13, 2007
    Great story! Poor Haldir, talk about 'Stranger in a strange land' *chuckle* Poor sucker, would have a panic attack in a big city.
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  • From ANON - Devonshirelass on September 16, 2006
    Well, this was well worth the wait, another fantastic chapter added to the story, as soon as I saw the e-mail informing me that an update had been posted, I wasted no time in opeining it and reading this! Brilliant! I look forward to re reading how Glorfindel gets on living on 'Earth' and look forward to reading more about Susan & Haldir's attempts adding to their family!
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  • From ANON - genna on June 27, 2006
    I came back and read your story. It is much richer in detail than what I normally see. I think you are on your way.

    I am concerned. Does Susan have a problem with fellatio or does she like to get hers and leave her husband hanging? It would drive me crazy if I was with a man who just wanted me to blow him and never was concerned about cunnilingus. If Susan can't do this married, when if ever is Susan going to do it?

    I like the way all the LOTR characters love Susan but what has she done for them? I like that they stand up for her, look out for her, and worry about her needs, but a life without giving is a difficult life for me to picture. Giving makes me happy. Why doesn't she give of herself? What about Haldir's dead parents or the relationship with his siblings? What did they think about Haldir giving away his immortality for his mortal bride? They might be FNs to your story, but I think if you explored Susan's Mom and Dad, her baby brother and her friends' relationships surely Orophin and Rumil rank somewhere in the picture.

    I read to the last chapter posted chapter 22 because I wanted to see where it went. I find that when I read I either buy in completely and my mind fills in the gaps with a story. If I don't buy in completely, I generally keep reading to see if the writer fills in the holes wherever he or she has created them. I think you just didn't think about them or don't think they are important, but it is the small details that make the reader buy into the world you have created.

    I always had a soft spot for Thraundill. I wished he would have acted better.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2006
    Finally I have gotten to read this and I love it! After waiting what seemed like a year, AFF finally got its act together and uploaded. Now, I hope you will continue this and soon. Love the detail and the sex, well what can I say? Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on March 14, 2006
    Ya, Ya, Ya!!!!!!! after what seems like eternity this was just a wonderful story to read! So they bonded? now what? a big wedding, lots of kids, happily ever after?! don't think so, too many "if's" gald its back and hopefully you will update soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tangerine on February 06, 2006
    Love it! Now that she has faced her fears, she can love haldir the way she wants to! So, on with the story, please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on February 06, 2006
    Alrighty then!!!! good for her, got that CREEP back but good!!!!!! I think haldir would be a very intimidating force! Now, with that out of the way she can proceed with loving him as she wants to and help him get back to his world or will he choose to stay with her?! oh, the possibilities are endless! anyway, love this and hope you update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nicky on February 05, 2006
    Ideal, she has put her past to rest. Now she can concentrate on moving forwards with her new life and dare I say new love?????
    Fantastic chapter, I liked the way she contronted Greg, and the way his nasty barbed comments ran off her like water off a ducks back. Dear Haldur also rose to protect her and saw right through the jerk! I liked the bit when they were teasing each other on the bed! Lighthearted, and a happy moment! Excellent, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From jesuiscanadien on February 02, 2006
    Nicky,
    I would be happy to put you on my email reminder list, but I have no idea which Nicky you are, and you've not signed in when you post. Please send me an email, or sign in so I can find yours and set you up on the reminder list.

    Thanks,
    Jesuiscanadien
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  • From ANON - NIcky on February 02, 2006
    Wow! What a fantastich chapter, and the one before it! It was a treat to read two chapters together! I like the way that Haldur is so considerate, and thoughtful! - If only men were like that for real!!! (Well mine is sometimes! lol!) This story is really great, i'm really enjoying reading it, and cant wait for the next chapter, I only hope it comes soon! Fantastic, till next time cheerio!

    Is there any way you could let me know when you have updated via e-mail?? It's just too god a story to miss!
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  • From ANON - cowsgirl on February 01, 2006
    Oh yeah!!!!!! maybe he can wait, but I sure can't!!!!!!!!!! So when do we get to the real jist of why he is there? is it to save him from being killed by an orc at helms deep? or something else? Tell me she is going to go back with him, would like to see her in his world! Oh do continue and update soon!
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  • From ANON - sugarplum on January 31, 2006
    Oh, do I love this chapter!!!!! Patient, kind, caring of her feelings - knowing she is not ready to love just yet! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - nicky on January 26, 2006
    I have just finished reading this and thought it was wonderful! So sweet a story! I hope you update soon, this is a great read and I look forward to reading more!
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