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Reviews for Orc in Ithilien

By : kspence
  • From ANON - Mary on December 20, 2006
    See I'v now finished the chapter and you CAN'T leave it like that! They're about to meet and, argh I have to know what happens next!!!! No really I'm addicted (like you hadn't noticed that before As always a really good chapater (I really don't know how you do it, there has yet to be a bad one) its realy sweet that Ludlow rescued Shagrat, and then Shagrat trying to thank him. But poor Ludlow left alone (now for long right?) Anyway enough of my ramblings, more soon please, make my Christmas!!!
    P.S I really think your characterisation of orcs is good I mean he really works, anyway, bye
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  • From ANON - Mary on December 19, 2006
    I'm only really half way through but I felt the urge to review because I'm as usual really enjoying it, I love the little details like Shagrats unsettling optimism or the way Ludlow is complety a mother hen, (and how Shagrat lets him) totaly sweet and endering. Or the sudden Oh God theres mass amounts of water coming at us, V. amusing. Okay see this is just me gushing but your story deserves mass amounts of it so, um there?
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  • From ANON - nessSachiel on December 19, 2006
    only three?
    :( I want more! ^__^
    what will S do? what will he do?
    Is there a chance, you will make few more side stories (yes, I mean the ones with a lot of sex) ?

    :*
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  • From ANON - Andrea on December 18, 2006
    Poor Shagrat, just when things get better they drop back down again =[
    I'm very intrigued to how things will turn out when he and Faramir reunite *claps excitedly* especially since the pamphlet incident wasn't particularly pleasant for Shagrat :D
    Can't wait for the next update! x

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  • From ANON - AntiDolorifico on December 02, 2006
    Aside from the usual stuff I like to whine about ("Love it", "More, before I start to cry", etc), I thought of one thing I don't think I've told you. I really enjoy the way you write the Orc dialogue. The way Shagrat speaks, Dokuz and his packmates, it sounds, well... just spot on. The words they use, the contractions. Am I making any sense at all? Well, even if I'm not, know that I have never seen anyone write Orcish dialogue so well. Makes me hear their voices in my head when I read it. Which is a good thing. I hope. =D
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  • From ANON - Mary on December 02, 2006
    Oooh, TWO chapters in two weeks, see you made my uh, month? Its getting SO good (not that it wasn't already) just the way you ended that your writing more soon right? (Might possibly be adicted to your story) I really like the contribution of the Hobbit and the Warg, not only do they add humor but they add a dimension to Shagrats personality, heh the giant killing idea was v. inspirational, I don't know where you come up with these things but they're really good. Anyway, do will insert my customary beg for more story here, please please please.
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  • From ANON - nessSachiel on November 30, 2006
    I am responsible for that really nice sexy chapter out there?
    well...good! I loved it :) and will say only one thing:
    MORE, PLEASE!

    I love Shagrat. really nicelly thoughted (o.O is that a word?) oryginal character. and he is funny. and he is smart....in his own, orkish way :P

    poor Faramir :O what they did to him...let me kill them? please?

    and one more thing. ok. 2 more things
    1. there MUST be an happy ending. MUST. or I will be zombie for some time, one who moaning "no...it can not end that way!". And I am shure, You do not want that ;)
    2. I am not good in writing english (as you can see) so I can't espress with words how much I love that tale. keep up the good work! :*
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  • From Moniquill on November 30, 2006
    I would like to say once more that this story is damned good smack and I cannot get enough of it.
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  • From Tazendra on November 30, 2006
    Can't say much about this chapter without repeating myself. It's good work as usual. I liked that bit where Shagrat is confused over the word 'doughty', that made me laugh. As for the end, I hope that Ludlow is wrong about Shagrat's reaction to their reward. The little guy is starting to grow on me and I wouldn't want Shagrat to be too angry with him. Oh well, guess I'll find out soon enough, eh?
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  • From Tazendra on November 22, 2006
    Every update of this story just makes me love Shagrat more. He's so cute when he gets embarassed about sex. ANd the way he actually goes on to explain what he means when he says "playing with myself", as if Faramir doesn't know. That made me laugh a bit. Although it's also a little sad that he can't believe that Faramir actually loves him. I assume that problem will be remedied further along in the story. My favorite part of this chapter has to be the fact that Faramir can sense where Shagrat is in a vague sort of way. It's like Faramir now has a physical bond to Shagrat as well as an emotional one. I just love anything that brings them closer together as a couple.
    As much as I loved reading this chapter it's actually a little torturous. I'm still waiting for Faramir to find Shagrat and have hot make-up sex. Every chapter that they've been apart has only made it more obvious that they should be together. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait for you to write more.
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  • From Tazendra on November 16, 2006
    Dammit! Why do I keep forgetting to log in? That Anon is me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2006
    Wow, I remember reading your other Shagrat stories about a year ago, and the Muzluk ones too. That was back in the days when I never reviewed. Well I intend to fix this now. I really love the way you write. There are some really dark elements but the love story always seems so tender and sweet. It's great that you write these without being vulgar. I read a bit of another fic involving orcs and it wasn't pretty.

    But your stories are different, especially with Shagrat and Faramir. Their relationship is so beautiful. I can't wait for Faramir to find Shagrat and this story so he can tell him it was all a misunderstanding. Watching Shagrat think he is worthless is incredibly hard to bear. I can't say I'm crazy about the hobbit but I like that he seem s to be helping Shagrat out with his self esteem issues.

    This latest chapter was great. Finally, Shagrat gets to experience sex the was it should be. It's too bad that he is separated from Faramir right now. That's why I can't wait for you to write more, Faramir and Shagrat deserve to be happy together!

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  • From ANON - AntiDolorifico on November 08, 2006
    I know, I know, I am such a whiner. But, but, but... updates? =)
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  • From ANON - Mary on October 27, 2006
    I LOVE your stories, and I'm so glad you've continued with this story! I can't wait for updates, your writing is so good. Its not just your main pairing, though that in itself is insiped, tenderly and consideratly written and for lack of better words REALLY REALLY GOOD! But the other charcters, like Eyowyn and the hobbit ludlow (I love him, he's so, cute) And I really like the way your directing the story, you know with the flashbacks to fill us in. Gosh can I gush anymore, what can I say, I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Andrea on October 25, 2006
    I was reading this whilst listening to The Darkness's song 'Growing on me' and realised how the lyrics match the story, sorta how Shagrat thinks about Faramir, have a listen/lok at the lyrics and you'll see what I mean :) just thought id randomly point that out.
    Anyways, your story is brilliant, all the flashbacks filling in the gaps of their journey are so sweet, Shagrat sure has fallen a long way :(
    Can't wait until the next update! x
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