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By : Espip

From Aya_Holbytla on November 01, 2021
*fans self* Oh, dear me -- that was bloody well amazing HAHAHHAHAHA <3 I really made an account just to track this story down and be able to leave a review, your works are just that good.
I also have to say, a large part of me was hoping against all hope that the child would be Elrond's, but ah well, I'm sure things turned out for the best the way they did. I did love seeing the tenderness between Elrond and Legolas develop, too! I hated Elrond's guts in the first few chapters for the blackmail (and I'm also glad seeing that part thoroughly discussed in this installment--both in-story and as a response to some... unsavory reviews) but ahhhh their brand of affection is just too endearing to ignore.
Also loved seeing dominant Legolas against submissive Elrond, mmmm the flavor was absolutely exquisite.
In addition, aaaa!! I loved the development Legolas gets in this story. I've finished the main stories in the Anestel universe and I'm glad to see an AU version (as it means more stories to read, of course! I'm quite the voracious reader myself, ahahahaha!). In the little things, with his shoulders broadening and him physically growing up and maturing--and his little friendship (companionship?? Academic... bonding...ship?) with Erestor was a delight to see. After all he's been though, it was wonderful to see him gain more confidence in himself, and see everyone's (or mostly everyone's) treatment of him get a bit better as the story goes on.
*Looks at publish date* Oh dear goodness, this story is more than ten years old and it's still beyond amazing. To give context, I had just come on legal age two years ago so by the time this was first published I was... very, very, very young SLDFKJHV and I do love it! There's a particular tone to "older" fandom stories that newer ones right now just can't replicate. And this--along with all your other works, yes, Esteliel and Pippychick--has it in droves.
Ahh but I'm rambling! All I could say is thank you very much for writing and letting us read your wonderful works <3 I could only hope that one day I'll be just as good as a writer as both of you! Thank you!! <3
-Aya

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From ANON - kurage on February 26, 2011
Damn, that was an excellent read. I found the Anestel series up on AO3 yesterday and absolutely devoured it, and then went looking for more goodies in the Anestel 'verse, not expecting to find much . . . imagine my surprise and delight when I stumbled on this little gem. (Although given the word count, "little" might not exactly be the right word . . .) Protracted jealously/infidelity scenarios aren't necessarily my favorite trope, but you did an excellent job of capturing the tangled emotional web that is G/L/E, and all three of them came across as flawed, complex, and -- most importantly -- sympathetic. And the fact that the love triangle resolved itself into a more or less stable triad . . . well, that was the icing on the proverbial cake. (And some finger-licking good icing at that!) It was also a real treat to see Legolas experiencing a (comparatively) egalitarian relationship, and even discovering his sexually dominant side. So, um, yeah. I've been rambling, but in conclusion, ♥.
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From ANON - VeronicaD13 on June 14, 2009
What can I say about this story? I don't think that 'WOW! That was effing AWESOME' quite covers it. This story actually managed to take most of the squick-iness that I felt upon the original reading of many parts of the Anestel Series and turn them into warm fuzzies. :D I can't wait until similar feelings emerge from the rest of Cuil-Eden. I get the feeling they are on the way but might take a while.... ;D

I loved the way that everyone finally realized their atrocious behavior towards Legolas and that he had done nothing to warrant their behavior of him in his entire life. The scenes of admission between Elrond and Glorfindel about their past sins were particularly great, let alone the scene where Erestor let them have it. Go Erestor! I had totally made my mind up to dislike this version of him and in a few sentences he totally pulled a 180 on me and redeemed himself. Elladan wasn't far behind him either!

When Legolas finally started to gain his self confidence I was cheering him on. And when he subdued Elrond I was bouncing up and down shouting 'you go boy'-s to him through my computer. That scene alone was vindication for so much that I wanted for him. Outstanding!

I'm glad that Gloriel was Glorfindel's. It would have turned from warm meadow feelings to major angst if she hadn't been. Wiped the sweat off my brow for that one.

When Legolas confronted Glorfindel about everything I was soooo happy that he finally realized that he could be free of the shackles that had been placed on him, and simultaneously he doesn't have to apologize for to people about the things that they have done that hurt him and that he doesn't have to accept it unless he wants to. Glorfindel's little panic attack was well worth it. At least he figured out that he can't just take Legolas' submission for granted = It is something that he is GIFTED with.

Their little 3-way -- OMG HHHHOTTTT!!!!! Little concerned about how it would be if Legolas actually DID wind up pregnant with Elrond's child this time around but other than that - HHOOTT!!!

Great story!
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From wetheril on April 22, 2007
I'm not an avid fan of d/s, though I think your stories are pretty hot. I'll admit that Anestel had a lot of squickiness for me, as a lot of the situations you've portrayed are probably a lot more painful in reality. I had been hoping *secretly* after reading Chapter 11 of Cuil Eden that Legolas would end up with Elrond, and that they could eventually be lovers. XD I'll just have to finish this story and find out. The continuation of Cuil Eden is nice too--especially after Glorfindal discovers his love for Legolas.
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From ANON - micmar on January 07, 2007
Although I read AFF all the time, I have never reviewed a story. I could not help myself this time. I check everyday for updates to this story. I love this three way relationship and would love for it to evolve more. Thanks for writing and please don't stop. The places one can go in a story are endless. I thank you.
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From ANON - ElenadiVita on January 07, 2007
I'm starting to think Elrond and Legolas make a faaaaaaar nicer couple then Glorfindel and Legolas, no, Glorfindel is not my preference anymore, he's mean :p
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From ANON - ElenaDiVita on December 18, 2006
Wow, I actually don't know what to think anymore hahaha
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From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2006
errrr... i hate the concept of chapters, it means waiting, which in turn means patence, which i dont have... err..
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From ANON - ElenaDiVita on December 03, 2006
Still not liking Glorfindel...haha, first he gives Legolas hell over being with Elrond and now he wants to share all of a sudden becuase it turns *him* on...Ugh
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From ANON - Nina on November 28, 2006
To say the truth to each other is always the best path to choose. About true friendship among them I doubt. Regardind Elrond, Glorfindel may follow this: God protect me from my friends cause from my enemies I protect myself.
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From ANON - Nim on November 24, 2006
I like the story a lot, but please don't have Glorfindel parade Legolas around in the collar. Legolas has been gaining the respect of others in Imladris, and this would just drag him down again. Glorfindel can play all the D/S games he wants in the bedroom or other secluded places! If he feels he must do something to remind Legolas of his place, let it be something discreet that can be hidden by clothing.

Please let Legolas keep his dignity. Besides, didn't Elrond ordered his people to treat Legolas with respect? Wouldn't that apply to Glorfindel as well?

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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From ANON - ElenadiVita on November 22, 2006
Still don't think I like what Glorfindel does to Legolas, while it's sexy as hell, it doesnt exactly say 'i love you' :p
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From ANON - Nina on November 21, 2006
Gladt that you updated. Finally, legolas learns how to say "NO". Bye.
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From ANON - lenagirl on November 14, 2006
I love your story, I hope you show Gil with the new baby next chapter that will be sooo cute!!!
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From ANON - Nina on November 10, 2006
Glad that you updated. Finally, legolas made his choice, but that kiss scne with elrond was not necessary. Yeah, I really don't like Elrond. Bye.
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