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By : pip
  • From ANON - Anon on February 22, 2016
    Ah, that's a painful bit of remembering, and I find myself being unable to fault Elrond. His memories of Oropher are more than precious, and I think I would feel equally violated in his place. His grief is justified, in those circumstances, and his anger.

    But, because there is always another side, Thranduil's anguish is very real as well. The love he has for Elrond, his desire that they be equals, all this falls on deaf ears because Elrond cannot move past Oropher to see how much Thranduil loves Elrond. His anguish is no less real.

    But it is a heavy weight to have been carried between them all these years. Now to see how it's resolved, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2016
    You never cease to amaze me with your ability to draw me in. Elrond and Thraduil are so beguiling, and their tangled past just makes this all the more powerful. Elrond is learning as much about himself as he is about Thranduil, and I wonder how comfortable it is for Elrond to to acknowledge his attraction to Thranduil's submission, and pain.

    I simply can't wait for the argument.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 18, 2016
    A, i theilin in edhil teiliar…

    I'm telling you, they are too delicious, these two. Elrond is doing marvelously well, and I will admit, I did not expect Thranduil to come up with a true confession. And yes, it is an evil cliffhanger, and you are an evil woman, but I'll wait happily for the rest because it will be well wroth the wait!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2016
    Oh, my dear pippychick...

    This line: "They moved together like the tide of some unnamed sea: in and out, back and forth." I am just rendered breathless by how perfect those words are. Elrond and Thranduil are delicious together, and I am simply enthralled by their evolving relationship. I must say, Elrond is quite good at this!

    Thank you, so much, for this beautiful chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2016
    You've conjured a fine sense of dread, and spun webs of your own! I reached the end of the chapter and whined out loud because I needed it to continue. The hobbit in the web was a lovely touch, very powerful and a reminder that the Mirkwood lured in more than elves with its dire spell.

    Beautifully written, as always!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2016
    Oh, this was a gentle and lovely chapter, and Elrond and Thranduil are just sublime together. The reminiscence is very well done, and I'm not surprised Elrond refused to see the truth until now. It's a very astonishing burden to bear, such love. But what a love it is, and how deftly you paint the picture of their centuries-long dance.

    Just beautiful, and I'm off to have lovely dreams now.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2016
    Elrond in a dominant role is truly delicious, my dear and very clever Pippychick. And Thranduil submits so very beautifully to his teacher.

    It struck me as I read this chapter how elegantly you write. You convey such depth of emotion and sensation, and yet you manage to make it all flow with a graceful delicacy, never the wrong word or phrase to jar me out of the sensual web you weave. That is truly magnificent, you know. You have a rare talent, and I'm very grateful you share it with us.

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2016
    Have I mentioned that I'm a very unattractive crier? Oh, well...

    My heart broke at least twice in reading this, and my consolation is that Thranduil will receive the love and comfort he so desperately needs, now that he's finally told Elrond what's been tormenting him. The cursed subtlety of elves, though... can't trust runners with messages, no sealed notes for Legolas to deliver... silly, silly, creatures.

    Of course, now I want to know what Thranduil was telling Celeborn. I'm as curious as a cat! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2016
    What a lovely chapter, and well worth the wait. You write with such grace. It's sheer poetry to read your work.

    But such a bitter ending, and my heart aches for Elrond. It's beautiful, and bittersweet, and I found myself wanting the sweet moments to return after reading the letters. I'm a sentimental old thing, I am.

    I'll wait to see what lies in store. :)
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  • From MercuryGarden on March 01, 2015
    Hello there,

    So I recently f nod your story and fell completely in love with it. You're an excellent writer and the take you have on Elrond is amazingly creative. My favorite bits are with Legolas because he's a cute little newbie.

    You have inspired me so much that I started making some sketches featuring what I imagine Elrond and the others would look like. The first one is with Elrond and Oropher and you can view it here if you like : https://www.flickr.com/photos/129917212@N04/sets/72157650704514400/ it's nothing good or particularly special I just thought I would share how you inspired me.

    Thanks for all the great writing. I'm looking forward to the rest.

    Be well,

    Carmen
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2014
    So, I've made it to the end, and I'm entirely bewitched. Elrond is so vivid, perfect in his roles as warrior, healer, lover, and even teacher. While his grief for Oropher is still so powerful, so is his love for Thranduil and Nimbrethil, for Legolas, and for Celebrian. This last chapter, Chapter 21, was one of the most moving and magnificent celebrations of love, but you've left me entirely curious about that one dramatic episode that ended Elrond's visits to the Greenwood.

    Gorgeous, dark and yet sublimely erotic. I'll wait eagerly for an update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2014
    I'm reading this and I'm just entirely swept away by this story. Elrond is completely compelling, and I find my breath taken away over and over again. But I had to stop and review because right here, in Chapter Nine, this line:

    "When he came up he was still alone, and he couldn’t be sure if he was crying, because the water too ran down his face like tears."

    That is just perfect. I'm in awe, and green with envy.

    Now, back to reading!
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  • From ANON - Moriel on April 17, 2011
    Wow, just found your story. It's rather well written and, I have to say, even a possibly "realistic" view of the history of these characters. Love it!
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  • From kathurien on November 29, 2010
    TBC... three of the most precious letters reading your story about Elrond. I've read all chapters in one go - and I'm pining for more.... Thanks for sharing your version of the lord of Imladris.
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  • From ziggystardust3 on November 14, 2010
    Could I politely remind you, dear Pippychick, that it is a month now... and I am pining!!! Really missing this beautifully written, tender and passionate piece with all those gorgeous characters.
    Love
    Ziggy
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