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Reviews for Sin and Slavery

By : pip
  • From Baileyboybee on June 12, 2018

    Hi there! Can't remember if I ever left a comment here. I followed you over from ao3. I really enjoyed the whole world you created with Sauron and Maglor and your different fics. Your storytelling is amazing. You are very skilled in describing the psychological impacts on your characters. Anyway, just wanted to say thank you.


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  • From CL.Mustafic on April 16, 2016
    Okay so I should really have reviewed every chapter but I just kept reading. LOL I love this, I know it's dark and I shouldn't but I do.

    Meglor is so beautiful in his suffering and the fact that he thinks he deserves it just kills my heart. I really do hope you come back to this because if The Hook is sort of a oneshot of how this all ends (or somewhere in the middle of it even) I want to know how they get to that point.

    CL
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  • From ANON - SMB on March 11, 2008
    I love this story! I enjoy the Silmarillion fanfiction. Maglor and Feanor are my two favorites. Sauron sounds interesting. It is not how I originally thought of Sauron. He seems all the more cruel for it.

    Please keep writing, I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From DrkDreamer on December 23, 2007
    Chapter 1...

    This is so beautifully written... Deep and complex. Enjoyable on so many levels.

    What an exquisite gift to find so close to Christmas.
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  • From Logan4lotr on March 11, 2007
    Wow Pip! that chapter was a lot deeper than I was expecting and I'm not totally sure I understood it all but I really did enjoy it. When is the next chapter due?

    Logie
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  • From Laurefindel on March 08, 2007
    Punishing Maglor with pleasure - only Sauron would think of that (I assume he is dictating this to you lol) You write so beautifully - it is like being in a dream and waking at the end of the chapter. Loved it Hugs Binky x
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  • From ANON - chaotic_binky on January 08, 2007
    sauron is such a master at the mind games - may it always continue for Maglor lol

    Loved it and have read it several times because i just love the way the words flow.

    tx *hugs* Binky x
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  • From ANON - tiz on January 08, 2007
    so exciting! so dark but stll so exciting! i'm afraid for Maglor but still need more! please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Okaydy on January 08, 2007
    Read both chapters.

    That was something.

    It was so descriptive I could feel the dark and feel the slipping of his mind. Angsty, sad...it makes me feel sort of uneasy.

    Making readers feel, you got that down! Stories like this are the hardest thing to review, when it's written this well. At least for me. But give me credit for trying, okay?

    I guess I want Maglor to be rescued, but that doesn't seem likely. I like this very much and if you write more, I'll definitely read it.

    Thanks, pippychick, for posting this. You are an excellent writer.
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on January 06, 2007
    “I promise I will take my time with you.”

    That almost made him seem nice. And that light. That was really something. There is some light needed for you to be able to see all the darkness.

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  • From ANON - tiz on January 03, 2007
    very interesting so far!
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  • From ANON - chaotic_binky on January 02, 2007
    You know i love your sauron/maglor stories - now hurry up and update lol
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  • From ANON - ElenadiVita on January 02, 2007
    A great story to be sure, I'd love to see where it goes

    ((When you use elvish, put the translation at the end of the chapter...Now I know somewhat what the words mean, but it's just a hint to make it more fun for the reader))
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  • From ANON - elfy3 on January 01, 2007
    i love dark stories hope you will continue it soon! sauron is really evil but I still want more! ^^
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