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By : mthorsta
  • From ANON - Aderiana on February 05, 2008
    Awe hunny I know how you feel with the sick over the holidays stuff. Two of my kids ened up in there back to back, got them out my hubby went in with a heart attack got him home then I went in. Hopefully everyone is feeling much better. I loved the new chapter. Im anxiously awaiting the next. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on January 03, 2008
    Oh Jordan. You're such a fool. And now Eowyn's pissed off at her and rightly so.

    Sigh. I'm dying to know what happens next. I hope your mother is better, and that we'll see a new chapter very very very soon!


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  • From ANON - Rozzan on January 02, 2008
    Lovely surprise to get a new chapter for the new year. Hope your mum is OK now. Great writing. I like a bit of angst and lovely image of Legolas half naked in his quaters reading a book hair unbound. I do hope they can get their problems between them sorted soon. Please post more quickly. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on December 09, 2007
    D'oh! False alarm. Very nice.

    Poor Jordan. Things just ain't going her way. I did a little cheer when I saw your update in my inbox the other day. I just wish I didn't have to wait another month. I go back and read the whole thing as a way to console myself as I wait. At least, you're consistent with your updates. Sometimes I read a story that I start to really love, and the author up and abandons it! Please promise you won't do that!

    I must say that I'm a little puzzled as to Jordan's despair over her lack of virginity. I suppose that it's my modernistic post-feminist view of sex and the female's right to pursue it under the right circumstances, married or not. It's not right for everybody, and I suppose that if she felt she did something wrong by having premarital sex, then it's a personal feeling, but I can't help but think she shouldn't be so hard on herself.

    I understand that compared to Legolas (I'm not sure how old he is in this fic, since his age is not specified in the books) she feels awkward about the subject since his people (both the male and female) wait until marriage, since the act alone marries a couple. They're very stalwart about it, and not as easily ruled by their passions as humans are. But feeling impure...well, I guess that's just me. I don't like the idea that having sex makes one "impure". It's a natural act that humans are hard wired for, and though we should be discerning when it comes to sex, there's nothing wrong with it. It's even okay to make a mistake.

    Sorry about the diatribe, your story is indeed wonderful, and I gobble up each chapter as they come. That's just something that has felt a little "off" in my mind since Jordan learned of Legolas' sexual status. Keep writing, it's lovely, and I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on October 28, 2007
    I am sighing in despair that I will have to wait a whole month for a continuation of this marvelous story. You have written a heart wrenching chapter, and I can only guess at what may come next. Argh! Cliffhangers! I've written them myself, but I know what the outcome is. Alas, I cannot know what you plan until you write it and post it.

    I usually read your chapters on your website. I can't review there, because it won't accept hotmail for some reason. It's a beautiful site, but if it's too much for you, don't sweat it.

    Please update soon!
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  • From Rozzan on October 26, 2007
    I love this chapter. Perfect how you explain the different sexual cultures of Jordan and Legolas when they have to stay in the same room. You are so right that sex with someone ties you to to them physically and emotionally. Poor Jordan, having felt coming alive again with Legolas and realising that her previous affair with Christian would not be acceptable to him. Oh dear I hope she does not leave, but whatever are they going to do? And I must admit the thought of Legolas as a pure virgin makes me want him even more, how special! I love how you write their emotions and thoughts. Nice to see Legolas's friendship with Aragorn too.

    Loved the descriptions of the city and the gardens and Aragorn and Arwens dining table. And now you leave us with another cliffhanger. Please write some more quickly. I am loving this story.
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on October 01, 2007
    La de da de da! An update. Yay! I love this story. And more Jordan/Legolas kissage. Need more, and very soon!
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  • From Rozzan on September 25, 2007
    Oh Lovely another long chapter to read. Great how Legolas and Jordan's relationship with Jordan is developing, slowly but sensously and emotionally. The kiss was gorgeous. I love the voice you have given to Legolas, so courteous and precise, perfect for him. Hope you are over your illness now and look forward to more soon.
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  • From Rozzan on September 10, 2007
    This is a wonderful story. I like Jordan a lot and appreciated her backstory so we got to know her as an individual and now having got onto the middle earth chapters I am thrilled by your characteristaion of Legolas, so noble, chivalrous and kind with an undercurrent of emotion and passion. Just gorgeous. I like how slowly you are building the relationship between them and showing their respective doubts and desires. Am very much looking forward to more. Totally hooked.
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  • From Rozzan on September 06, 2007
    Wow, I'm really glad I found this. I am up to chapter 7. I NEVER read girl falls into middle earth stories because usually they are just dire rubbish, but this is fantastic. You have built up an entire world and back story with the D'ni universe and the father as archaeoligist and many minor charcaters in the D'ni universe and in the hospital, who are totally beleivable and Jordan herself is wonderful, so richly drawn, her profession as a doctor, her identity as as a daughter and her inner emotional life are brought to life so skillfully and you make us care about her as a person. This is fantasy at its best. Can't wait to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on August 27, 2007
    Oh dear. Ominous indeed. Faramir, Faramir, Faramir (shaking head). And those two a**hole guards! Why is it when people do wrong, they cannot accept responsibility for what they've done, but in turn blame the person they hurt? They brought it on themselves, the yutzes!

    Oh, I want Jordan and Legolas to smooch again. More smoochies!
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on August 15, 2007
    I looooooooooooove this chapter. LOVE it!

    I especially love the kiss.

    I'm sorry I can't be more thorough in this review, but please know that I am checking every day for updates. (I tried to sign up at your website, but it won't cater to hotmail. :(

    Excellent story, please keep it going!
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  • From borntodoit on August 13, 2007
    And so it begins... Oooh, very, very promising!
    Lovely chapter! Full of emotions and amazing description of places, feelings and actions!
    The kiss... what a kiss!!! Legolas and Jordan are so meant to be... I know I sound like a teenager, but they are so good together!
    Excellent work as always! :)
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  • From ANON - rapunzel215 on August 07, 2007
    Yaaay! An update!

    And a kiss!

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From Roushijin on July 30, 2007
    MEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I must have resolution! Gah, talk about killer story. This one is a bombshell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in utter awe! Buuuuut, I'm dying for the next chapter! You're making die a slow death at my monitor. Just so you know. =]

    This is the first style of reading I have read that you have. It's great! I love it. I'm going to say that you are now one of my favorite Authors! YAY!
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