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By : TAFKAB

From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2016
Oh, my poor heart! Legolas was so fierce and proud, and I was almost in tears at his eloquent and passionate defense of Gimli. Thranduil deserved every word, and Legolas is far wiser than Thranduil to see Gimli's worth and cherish their friendship.

Now, if poor, sweet Gimli survives the shock of Legolas engineering his freedom...

Lovely, as ever, and so beautifully written!
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From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2016
Ah, Gimli, if you could dare to speak your heart...

Gimli has such honor, and courage. He defends Galadriel, even at his own peril, and he loves Legolas with such steadfastness, and no expectation of his love being returned. He is noble on so many levels, and I'm looking forward to his finding out Legolas cherishes him as more than a friend.

This is so beautifully written, I find myself reading each chapter twice, to revel in the gorgeous prose and in the superb characterizations. Thank you for this lovely, lovely chapter, and this exquisite story.
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From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2016
Ah, poor Gimli! He is so reluctant to speak of that dreadful vision, having no idea that Legolas suffered as well. And of course, sweet and honest dwarf that he is, Gimli would have to confess his true heart to Legolas, and he fears that as well. What will he do, I wonder, when he finds out Legolas' own truths? It will take such courage for them to take the next step, and allow their love to shine forth.

And of course Glorfindel is glorious, and beautiful in battle.

I love your writing, and how musical it is to read. It just lifts my heart, to hear it in my mind's ear. Thank you, so very much, for another perfect chapter!
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From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2016
Oh, poor Gimli, how hard it has to be to have to speak of being in servitude, but even more so to have Bilbo treat him with disdain. And yet, Gimli takes joy in Legolas' enjoyment of hearing Bilbo speak elvish. He has a generous and loving heart.

I very much enjoyed Aragorn in this chapter, and how well he coerced Bilbo into joining their quest. Bilbo never had a chance against Aragorn's powers of persuasion, and his ability to remind Bilbo of the danger Bilbo himself represents to the Shire. It's quite apparent who Aragorn truly is, when he lets himself be the king he truly is.

A lovely chapter, and I can't wait to see what comes next!
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From pip on April 24, 2016
I love Bilbo, and you write him so well here. The atmosphere changes as soon as he enters the story (in a good way). Nothing's that bad when there's a hobbit involved! :)
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From pip on April 21, 2016
Mmm.. I love the descriptions of Legolas dancing in this chapter, while Gimli watches on. And Aragorn sat beside him, completely clueless - it makes me giggle.

Also, I love Gimli's thoughts about Elrond being long-winded. lol While Galadriel, as ever, knows all. Excellent!
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From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2016
And again, Gimli's honor and nobility shine so perfectly. He is truly a prince among dwarves, and more than a fitting match for the prince of the Greenwood. And Legolas flaunts his beautiful gift, which is only fitting.

I will say that the gift of Galadriel's hair is done so well here. Gimli is careful, asking for nothing for himself, but when pressed, he wishes only a remembrance of the Lady who showed him kindness and care. It's the beginnings of a friendship that one hopes will serve them both well in days to come.

I just love this story, beyond words to tell...
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From pip on April 17, 2016
I am always amazed at how you manage to include so much in your chapters, while it still reads like a dream. I loved the bathing scene, and that Aragorn doesn't get as detail an explanation of Gimli's tattoos as Legolas, and how this makes Legolas feel, listening in. I love the bits of Aragorn/Arwen. But I adore the piercing scene itself. This line in particular though stands out for me:

�And for decoration as well, because what you have made is beautiful, and as an elf, I am a vain and shallow creature.�

This shows how close Legolas and Gimli have become, that they can share private jokes. It's beautifully done.

And of course, I love that Legolas is eager to show off the piercing straight away. Brilliant! Thank you so much for sharing this story (and of course for letting me play in your world from time to time.) :)
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From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2016
I did so love this chapter. Gimli and Legolas are beyond wonderful as they start to explore what they mean to each other. I love that Legolas isn't shying away from showing his favor, and Gimli's sweet and honorable nature is so lovely to see.

I feel all warm and tingly now, and so very happy to see them grow closer.
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From pip on April 08, 2016
I love this chapter so much. Galadriels words especially make this special here:

�It happens just as rivers create valleys: a little at a time is worn away through custom and use, through fear and pain and anger, until we hardly notice the channels carved through our souls and folly seems as natural as reason.�

And as well as this we have the preparation of the jewellery, and all the teasing touches of Legolas' ear. So wonderful. I particularly like the matching of the two sentiments here:

Let there be talk/Let them wonder

And if all that wasn't enough, we have the comedy that is the silently waged battle between Gimli and Lindir. This story really has it all.

Beautifully crafted writing. I feel honoured to read. Thank you so much for sharing your vision with us all! :)
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From ANON - Anon on April 08, 2016
This chapter is a song of grace, a sweet and delicate beginning, and it was just so beautiful to read. The respect that's growing between Gimli and Legolas, the friendship and more, is exactly right, every note perfect. The gentle companionship of Galadriel and Aragorn is just as flawlessly done.

Every chapter draws me deeper into the subtle and lovely relationship you're crafting here, between two such disparate souls who are so much more together than they could be apart. I'm in awe of how superbly you capture their voices, and long after I finish, I find myself smiling as I hear them in my head, and in my heart.

Thank you!
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From pip on April 03, 2016
Love how Legolas and Gimli are getting closer here. It's so nice when Legolas rubs Gimli's feet. But the juxtaposition of Gimli recalling the wraith's vision, and realising he no longer sees Legolas as cold and haughty (as he did before), in fact that he's most relieved to see Legolas again - that's really well done :)
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From ANON - Anon on April 01, 2016
This chapter was breathtaking!

I was mesmerized by Galadriel in this chapter, both for her control of her magic and for her insight into Legolas and his heart. She's been Gimli's friend and ally, so I wasn't surprised that she spoke in his favor, but she showed such kindness and mercy, even toward Thranduil. To his credit, I believe Legolas heard her.

But Gimli just broke my heart throughout this chapter. He could not trust the braid Legolas wears for him, nor could he think that Legolas might have wanted to mend things. He fought with such valor and he defended Galadriel, and at such a cost. My heart was in my throat, and I'll confess to an anxious tear at the end.

I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter.
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From pip on April 01, 2016
From Legolas' conversation with Galadriel at the beginning, to Gimli's heroics at the end, this chapter is brilliant! Your description of Galadriel raising her arms to the sky is such a beautiful image, but then we've Legolas and Gimli arguing over numbers, then walking hand-in-hand back to camp *loves*... great work! Thank you so much for sharing your vision with us :)
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From pip on March 29, 2016
Things I love in this chapter:

Unhand my beard! lol.. that is so spot on, and I laugh every time I read it. Also, when Gimli has to name Legolas as a friend.. kind of. And this line is fantastic:

Even should the battle be won, evil will surely retreat and rise again in an age or two. All that was sacrificed is lost, and the fighting must be done over again. Such is always the way of the shadow.

Yes, indeed. It's what I found too, while writing. Mortals never really get this, even when they're told it, even if they're heroes. They will be dead, so it doesn't sink in the same way as it does for the elves in Tolkien's world.

And finally, the competition over saving each others' life. That is so very them. Well done!
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