Reviews for Prince in TrainingBy : Pippychick_TAFKAB |
Legolas is walking on a narrow ridge between the devotion and love for his father and the seduction and enticement embodied by Erestor, and it is delightful to see how he is slipping from it to both sides.
It seems that Legolas is just a little restrained by guilt. I wonder if he will be able to surrender completly to Erestor, without the reassurance given by his father. I hope so!
Waiting for the next chapter...
Thank you for sharing this story!
Ah, Legolas... he is beyond wonderful, isn't he? He is so responsive, and so obedient, but he needs to to be taken outside himself to truly enjoy it, and I wonder if he will ever be a truly submissive as Thranduil. Erestor is the consummate Master, however, and thanks to the insights I'm gleaning from your lovely "Taming the Twins" I can appreciate him much more now.
And that wicked tease aqt the end! Now I can't wait to see what morning will bring...
I'm all but breathless, thanks to the cliffhanger on which we've been left. Whatever will Legolas find in Erestor's room? I have so many notions, and I do hope some of them come to pass.
Thranduil doesn't seem terribly chastened, does he? For all his punishmnt at Erestor's hands, I don't think the King of the Greenwood would have done a single thing differently. He's quite a handful, and it's clear Erestor hasn't kept him on a tight enough leash.
But Legolas... what a vision he is, and so very sweetly submissive. I wonder if he'll find the proper steel to be able to master Thranduil. He shows glimpses of it, but he doubts himself, and his worth still. Let's hope this evening lets him know how very precious he is.
Thank you, for an exquisite chapter!
Ah, so Erestor shows his hand a bit here, and I must say, I was nearly as surprised as our sweet Legolas. I expected a bit more resistance from Erestor, but instead it was Legolas who was reluctant. I wonder, though, what Legolas will look for from Thranduil come nightfall. Absolution for enjoying Erestor's offer, or a possessive reclaiming of the young prince?
I'll be waiting happily for this to continue, my lovely and very wicked authors! :D
Oh my...
I really think that might be the best way to sum it up. I can't imagine.... or rather I can imagine all the mischief the three of them could get up to with Legolas's strength of will worn thin by sleep and warmth. And maybe just a bit by his father's touch. (Can't ever spell his name right)
So anxious for the next chapter!!
I like the twist this story has taken. I confess that, after reading chapters 17 and 18, I felt myself like Legolas must have felt; I hated Erestor! Then I read "Taming the Twins" and I understood his role in "Prince in Trainining". I guess that Erestor not only is revealing the submissive aspect of Thranduil, but he's also turning the sweet debauchery between Thranduil and Legolas into something more stern and darker. And I love it!
Such a morning it will be...
I shall be waiting for the update of this delicious story (and "Taming the Twins", as well).
There is something utterly charming about Legolas trying so hard to defend Thranduil from Erestor. Even when it's abundantly clear Thranduil wants what Erestor can give, Legolas still can't accept it. But Legolas isn't ready yet to give his ada what Thranduil needs and so Erestor has his place.
I'm quite eager to see what the morning brings, however. Legolas is indeed very beautiful when he submits, and I can only imagine how Erestor would love to try the young prince. There's certainly no shortage of temptation here.
I'll be waiting to see what daylight brings!
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