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Reviews for Phobic

By : MerenwenFefalas
  • From kirameki on July 04, 2004
    Cool. I wouldn't mind seeing more to this. It was a really inttingting idea. XD
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  • From ANON - rob on June 02, 2004
    Made me laugh!
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  • From ANON - Kareila on March 23, 2004
    Great story! How about an sequel??? I can`t imagine Eliahs face at the end of the story ;-))). Please go on writing!
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  • From ANON - Mrs Silmarwen on March 17, 2004
    AAARRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHHH! Write MORE!
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  • From timecapsule on February 21, 2004
    I love the last paragraph, that awkward moment.

    I also like:
    "Got feet in two hours."

    And the fact the Sean Bean is known simply as "Bean". Lol.


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  • From ANON - vestalvagrant on June 25, 2003
    I really like this bit (and I'm even gonna change the formatting). I like the way Orli deals with the conversation, I like how thick Lij is. And I giggled at the in-joke!


    "*And* that doesn't, like, freak you ou



    "He's a great kisser."

    "Jesus-motherfucking-Christ." Was *everybody* in England fucking queer? "You made out with Dominic?"

    "No, I didn't 'make out' with Dom." Orli's tone was mocking-bordering-on-punching-Lij's-fucking-lights-out.

    "You didn't make out with him, but you know he's a great kisser?"

    "Don't concern yourself with it." Orlando paid for his beer and got up from the bar. "And Lij?"

    "Yeah?"

    "Grow up, mate."


    Good 'un, matey. I always love Domorli!

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  • From ANON - Aja on June 25, 2003
    hobbitised, hobbitated..

    ~slumps into a little heap~ I *almost* feel sorry for Lij. Exce Dom DomOrli. ~growr~

    ~lick~ I lurrve ya.
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  • From ANON - eviltwin737 on June 25, 2003
    Woah...yes yes I spotted the incredibly MASSIVE injoke *lol* (oh how we love that girl)
    I liked the footnotes :D

    And you must stop taking Dom/Orli away from Lijah like that. He'll come after you in chapter three if you're not careful *wink*
    That was really sweet. Bless em all. Bless you.
    Bless the bees and the bees.

    keeses, evil xxx
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