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Reviews for Erestor's Torment

By : Iamme
  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on July 21, 2003
    Poor Elladan seeing his tutor hurt.Poor Erestor!!!
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  • From ANON - Laura on July 14, 2003
    :D
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on July 14, 2003
    Poor Erestor!Somebody save him already!!!Please!!!
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  • From ANON - locket on July 14, 2003
    very good. for the next few chapters, can you space the paragraphs out a bit more? it's hard to read such a huge chunk of text. it you put spaces in between the paragraphs it gives your ey bit bit of a break. very interesting plotline, just check your spelling and grammar and stuff. misspelled words and grammar flubs just take away from an otherwise wonderful story.

    oh and it all seems a little rushed. add some detail to the story; character feelings, scene descriptions, etc. other than that, very good.

    poor erestor... mean, horrible morcorban. evil evil horrid person!

    keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Laura on July 14, 2003
    Loved it! What happens next? Does Erestor die? Is the attack gonna go well?
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  • From ANON - Lady of Legolas on July 13, 2003
    Poor Erestor!Torture and so much pain for him.Does anybody know that he's missing?
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